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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

Sorry, but the 'like' button refuses to co-operate with me 😭!

Part 6 ' Arnav making use of the opportunities provided by his family overhearing his conversation with Khushi so as to further his plans of exposing Shyam , is sheer genius! The family banter and teasing is really heart-warming, especially NK's kiddish "Nannav has a girlfriend!"' am in splits at Akash's shocked reaction' poor guy can't get his head round the idea that his reserved brother has a girlfriend! Boy, what a family' they leap from girlfriend to marriage in less than a second! Lovely to note that this Arnav doesn't hesitate before accepting that he wants to marry Khushi' NK's 'Jhalli ki Rani' took the cake and Arnav agrees! That Arnav has fallen for Khushi is evident from how his voice softens and a smile adorns his face when he thinks / speaks of her or even listens to her crazy comments' you are a goner, dear boy! Mami is the best for the pertinent questions she asks

no one can hold a candle to Khushi in the craziness stakes: "You and Shyamji?" trust her to misunderstand, much to Arnav's amusement' Smita, only you can come up with such crazy lines / scenes and do full justice to them 👏! Totally loved Khushi's OTT display: She then threw her hands in the air & then clutched her head. "Hey Devi Maiyaa, Yeh Aapne Kya Kar Diya!" "I was having trouble with one man. One man. So I came to you for help. And now I am having trouble with TWO men?"' "Grrr'", Khushi growled, raising her hands to choke him, stopping an inch from his neck'. 🤣 and Arnav matches her step for step, what with his baaifriend references! I am really dying to read how these two are going to convince the Raizadas that they're in a relationship, when Khushi thinks that to do so she has to sing and dance in the rain'. HILARIOUS! Arnav seems to be getting addicted to holding a conversation over the phone with Khushi!

Part 7 ' loved the manner in which a crafty Arnav is sowing the seeds of doubt in Anjali's mind about Shyam's activities' found Arnav's impatience to get the eagerly awaited call from Khushi quite cute! A beautiful image: his husky voice travelling over the distance to play on her nerves' the way Khushi keeps changing the venue of her phone calls to Arnav, she'll soon run out of places to hide 😆! The Khushi-Arnav phone convo interspersed with Buaji's pithy comments and one-liners is just out of this world' Smita, the things that go on in that oh-so-wonderful mind of yours 🤗! This Arnav really has a good knowledge of how to address one's love in Hindi: 'Jaan', 'Balma', 'Saajan', 'Saiyya', 'Pritam'!

these two parts, especially, have been sheer fun to read! eagerly awaiting the temple meeting and some more rib-tickling moments! thank you, Smita and Rashmi, for making my day!



Thank you, darl! I absolutely love to read your comments!!!

Smita

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Posted: 12 years ago
😆😆😆


Part 8 is hilarious!!!!!!!! Just adore her bubbly innocent side and Arnav's flirty side...he just loves her..😊


Fantastic update...👏


Can't wait for part 9, 10, so on...
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Posted: 12 years ago
smita,
congrats on completing the century of this super duper thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was such an awesome update, surpassed what I was expecting it to be,it was that amazing, your writing style is very nice and highly addictive😃 The introduction between Arnav's family and Khushi was very nicely penned down. More than anything else loved the reaction of Arnav after seeing Khushi in a saree that is also in his favourite colour. NK was so eager to meet her and Arnav was already acting like a possessive "baifriend" by asking him to call Khushi, babhi that was such a sweet moment😊
Arnav taking full advantage of the situation by using it as an excuse to touch Khuhsi, he is not letting go of any opportunity to use his boyfriend rights on her! Khushi is such an innocent the way she questioned about his doings and her reaction to his answer was so damn adorable, and it led to a confession from her side as well,that she is highly effected by him. Eager to see how the story will progress, after the truth is revealed, specially whether Arshi will explore the sparks they have discovered in each other.
Edited by foesb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
so the family is all happy to see khushi...who would have not...n khushi never told mami her sis's name...and khushi is so damn innocent...loved it...and her innocent confession at the end...amazing :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful. wonderful, funny and heart warming...

Loved it!!!!

Update soon Am greedy even after getting two updates in a day...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jus caught up last 2 updates...

Khushi has to think of innovative ways to talk to her Baaifriend...hehhehe

Famil accepted Khushi...Hope all goes well..

OP
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Posted: 12 years ago
YAYYY! Double updatee!
I love you smitarr! XD

Mwuahh, BLUSHES I loved this update with my Baaifriend :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
really loved it.nice story😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Smita for the update and this is specially for you 🤗.

I would also love to know how baaifriends and girlfriends breathe when they touch each other 🤣. Looking forward to read Khushi reaction when she learns about breathing 😆

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