Smitar's OS:Knowing Khushi Part 9 Page 123 (Mar 4)

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Devika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

i really really really like this story!

The way Arnav teases Khushi is really funny

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foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

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So cute! Arnav was impatiently waiting for the call from Khushi and made sure that he won't be disturbed by his family as well. Arnav is having lot of fun in teasing her and this time also he didn't let go of the chance by repeatedly reminding her that they have to behave in a certain way in front his family,and some how made sure the way she addresses him is also amended more to meet his secret expectations😉 its really good that Arnav has already started planting seeds of doubts in Anjali with regard to Shyam's life style. And one thing I noticed is even though Shyam was introduced as the antagonist of the story you haven't included him in the story at all, all the attention is focused on Arshi which is great in my opinion😃 waiting to see how the meeting between Khushi and Arnav's family will go😊

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Stapleton

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Awesome. Update..

Rhanks 4 d pm

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GoldenEyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

awesome update!

can't wait for the family meeting khushi😃

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rati123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

This is going to be fun ! Can't wait for the meeting.

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

shortish but hilarious
so today she was calling him from the bathroom
wow the girl sure has to come up with new places to call him from
and what is with arnie he seems to be in right mood to tease her
at least this time he made sure no one would find out at his blatant flirting with his pretend or supposed GF
call me arnav or jaan balma priyatam
really i didnt even think he would know those words but i guess he does
haila yeh arnie ko kya ho gaya hai
well she still only gonna call you as arnavji or mr raizada
nk sure nailed it right when he said about anji sautan
he is making sure that all start to doubt what takes him away from home for so long
and that buaji what was that all about
she was killing us with laughter man

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Viviann

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

superb update...

Khushi is so cute... paap lagege lol!

But I have one complain, why is the update so short?! Yeh nahi chalega, hame looong update chaiye :)

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meera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

wow just read all 7 parts...cute kushi!!!

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sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

Oh man, I bet you are having a gala time writing about Arnav teasing Khushi so much...Pritam, saajan...indeed. I can so imagine the smirk on those sinful lips...

I wonder what name he would be using for Khushi in front of his family...

And Khushi in the bathroom talking to him..What naughty thoughts are running through that wicked mind of bitwa...scandalous, I am sure...

And the way he is sowing the doubts in everyone's minds about Shyam...brilliant.

Edited by sun_shine_girl - 12 years ago