Tu AasHiqui Hai *KR SS* prt 2&3 pg 34 &38 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update...rey is so caring 4 kriya...calls the baby as his partner...

but y sharon is worried 4 rey??? kya rey ki koi past ki wajah se????finally rey confessed his love 4 kriya...par woh ghar kyu chodha?????thanks 4 the pm...

thanks 4 giving a long update...


pls update soon...
Edited by rhu90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update
jst luvd it
swaron part was sweet
ab ye kriya kaha chali gayi subha subha?
Do update soon
thankx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply beautiful...

d way rey showed his care..made me aww...!

loved it deetha...bt end..ab nai karna tha...

next part jaldi plzz..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update...
luvd rey's care 4 kriya...aww so sweet nd cute...
finally rey said I Love You...
bt ab yeh kriya kaha chali gayi???
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Shockwa laga shockwa???
hehe yup I am giving another update of this!! before you jump on me listen to me

I wanted to reduce as many stories as possible from my head and this is the LAST PART of the SS and yeah its a request please don't ask a Epilouge for this
because sorry but I will simply ignore that line because I love the ending I give I feel contended and thinking beyond that makes it worst and my satisfaction level reduces ...well yeah I AM being selfish but I like it that way.. please co-operate!!


PS: I would be glad agar aap log dil kholke iski comments denge toh!! *samajh rahe ho na what I meant*

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He stretched his arms and breathed in the fresh air !! he was feeling so happy today and last nights incidents played in his mind he grinned and turned to his right and opened his eyes to have the first sight of hers for the day!! But he found the side empty!! he frowned and sat up!!

"Kriya !! "he called rubbing his eyes and walked to washroom and knocked but with his second knock the door fell open!! His frown deepened but soon he fumed she has that habit of making something for her when wanted even after he literally pleaded her to just inform him!!He was not gonna take that in any way!! He rushed to the kitchen but it was empty too ... an unknown fear blowed him suddenly he ran all around his house and meanwhile he called sharon as she suddenly leaves for her house too!!! Sharon was surprised when he asked whether she was there!! she is busy preparing for sangeet but soon after his call she called swayam and both rushed to his house.

Rey finally came to the initial point ..

"baatcutter please bahar aajao bohut masti hogayi !!"he called out loudly in her bedroom but no responce and thats when his gaze fell on the letter... he ignored it wantedly and again checked the whole house... but still not finding her he returned back.. his mind already figured out !! but his heart was not ready to accept . He stood at the door of the bedroom looking around the house and glancing at the letter in every 2 seconds... finally after a self struggle of 5-10 minutes he walked to it and opened it

Reyaansh!!

ab bhi gussa aaraha hai kya?? theek hai nahi bulati... toh Rey mujhe pata hai tum samajh chuke sab kuch!! itna toh jaanti hun tujhe. So mai expect karti hun ki tum ye bhi jaante ho ki mai chahti hun ki tum mujhe na dhoondhe aur mujhe bhool jaye!! karoge na meri wish poori?? warna ro dungi dekhlena fir mere peeche zindagi bhar manate ghoomna padega!! and haa I promise tumhari partner ki poori khayal rakhungi mai!! tablets time pe loongi ... mai apna khayal bilkul waise rakhungi jaise tum rakhte ho!! theek hai?? aur haa maine tiffin khaliya .. bohut acha tha as always aur don't be tensed maine baaki ka pack karliya tiffin mei !! and sorry mai tumhari rent pay nahi kar paungi because abhi maine jo paise bachaye hai wo bachi keliye chahiye... aur mujhe pata hai tumhe koi problem nahi hogi!!! apna khayal rakhna !! bye

- Kriya R


he saw the uncompleted name he knew that she struggled at last she can't write his name and dont want to write rajiv's name so she simply left and the blurred letter R which he was sure was because of her tears made sure...

He started sweating badly!! he was alone now .. all alone.. how is he gonna live without her, he needed her to survive, he was rubbing his hands which are sweating badly when he heard the door bell ring , with a hope he rushed and opened the door with a wide grin tears rolling down .

Sharon was shaken to core to see him like this so was swayam!! seeing them rey went back slowly as his little hope crashed !!

"rey kya hua??"sharon walked upto him

"wo aisa nahi karsakti !! she knows I need her... aisa nahi ho sakta... mujhe dobara check karna chahiye "he ran to her room dropping the letter again and roamed whole house once again each second his fear increasing...swaron were shocked to see the letter , they understood that something happened between them that kriya took a abrupt and sudden exit .. swayam caught rey who was madly searching her hoping she will be hiding somewhere and playing prank on him!!!

"Rey kya hua kal?? mehandi khatam hone tak toh sab theek tha??"swayam shook rey hard bringing him to senses..

"Its my fault , mujhe apna feeling batana nahi chahiye tha, I can't live without her dude "rey looked at him crying lyk a child... sharon hugged him quickly trying to give atleast a pinch of comfort to him!!

she simply took him to couch sat on it placing his head in her lap as he cuddled up crying hard and she soothed till he slept!! She knew why kriya left!! she left every responsibility to swayam she knows only one thing she have to take care of rey lyk her small brother and she is gonna take care more than that!!!

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"Sorry sir for the poor accomodation ..itna sudden meeting tha ki none had vacancy I am really sorry !!! " the manager apologised again!!

"oh thats all fine I can understand!! no need of sorry!!"Rey said smiling his genuine smile

"sir aaj raat ko hum ek party arrange kar rahe hai I would be glad if you and Mr.Shekhwat join us!!

"Oh that's so sweet of you but sorry we are heading back to India this evening!!"Rey appologised!!

papa

they heard a voice thinking it may be someone they continued their talks

papa!!

now a bit louder !! Rey frowned and looked to his right to see whose voice it is . he saw a cute little girl may be of maximum 3-4 four years in a cute babypink frock small rings hugging her ears and a white kercheif pinned to her frock and a single pony on top of her head making her look more cute adding to the amount of chubby she looked !! she looked healthy and chubby a bit!! big big eyes and a small mouth with thin lips !! Rey frowned and was about to turn when she beamed at him and ran to him and hugged his legs tight!!

"papa !!"she called joyfully and looked up grinning at him...Rey not wanting any nonsence in front of his clients took their permission and lifted the child and walked to a corner and made her stand on a chair as she came to his nose level!!!

"beta. app.."he was cut

"papa aap aagaye?? par mumma ne toh kaha aap bohut dinon ke baad aaoge???"she asked him innocently!!! he frowned... he felt connected to her but he was irritated on a random girl calling him dad!!

"dekho beta "he was cut again and soon after she cut his this line only one name flashed in his mind "baatcutter" he smiled thinking about her and chuckled at his thoughts of Kriya being this girls mom!! how can that be possible... and sighed... he is missing her badly!!! but for now concentrated of the little doll's words

"mumma ne bola aap jab aaoge tab mere liye ittnne saare chocolates leke aayenge?? "she spread her arms wide showing him how many she wanted and suddenly kept her palm in front of him asking for her chocolate with an innocent face . Rey couldn't help but smile at her words and actions but he have to clear it soon ...but even before he can speak he heard her shouting

"maa!!! papa idhar hai!!"she waved hand somewhere making Rey frown he followed the direction but found none ... infact he found a single woman struggling with her shopping bags her back towards him!!

"mummaaa!!! papa aagaye !!"she shouted again and for a second Rey felt everything black out as he saw her turn her curls bouncing on her shouders and she looking as beautiful as ever he took a deep breath as his eyes hungrily drank the image of her . How many years he have been waiting to see her this face!!!

Kriya turned as she felt her baby rajul call her , she turned and looked around to check if it was her daughter but as rey and rajul were in a corner she didnt notice them and slightly bet her head thinking she herself left her baby in the games corner and rushed to complete her shopping!!! as she moved rajul again called her

"mumma!! ruko"she pouted as her mom didnt notice her and thats when rey came out of dreamland... he stood shocked to core as the girl standing in front of him was his pretty little princess for whose arrival he waited like anything!!! He quickly looked at his baby who stood before him smiling a genuine smile , suddenly he felt nostalgic he wiped the lone tear escaping his eye!! And caged her in his arms for his dear life trying hard to not cry closing his eyes as tight as possible.. and the kid just hugged him back and kept on talking something nor the other what happened in her school and how her mom scolds her for everything how and what stories her mom said holding his photo!!

He hugged her more tight holding her as close as he can to his heart smiling at the continuous blabber of his partner!!! He pulled back finally and kept looking at her as she again started with

"aapko pata hai …"and kept on speaking smiling wide , he felt so much proud to see her and his eyes had an unknown peace to them!! As if they were dying to see her these many years!!

He cupped her face and kissed her both cheeks and when he pulled back she rubbed her whole face with both hands wiping his kiss !!! he smiled and the next second she kissed him just as he did !! and automatically he unconsciously wiped his cheeks but stopped as he realised it was his childhood habit and his daughter has the same habit of his!! He caressed her forehead clearing it and gave a long kiss on her forehead . When he pulled back the kid followed his actions she touched his face with her tiny palm and he quickly closed his eyes to take in the heavenly feeling … after few seconds he found her playing with his hair he slowly looked at her as she gave a kiss on his forehead and smiled wide!!he stood straight and opened his arms!! And she simply fell front trusting him totally and he grabbed her in his arms and twirled her and threw her high in the air and caught her as she giggled heartily!!! He held her by waist high and tickled in her stomach with his nose making her laugh hard!! and her tiny foot kicked him on his face and chest while he enjoyed them happily *even though it pained a bit :P*

"Mr. Singhania "he heard one of his clients assistant call him !!

"yeah!!"he said holding her in his arms!!

"sorry sir par hume abhi nikalna hai so boss chahte hai ki ek baar aapse baat kare " rey nodded !!

"chalo papa aur aap milke thodi baat karlete hai unse baadmei khelte hai okay???" rey said to her to which she nodded no !!

"mai mumma ko bulake laun??"she said to him and before he could say anything she freed herself and ran away , he called her but she was already far away and he saw her entering the shop and holding kriya by legs ..he sighed seeing her reach safely and headed to have his talk !!

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"rajul!! Tum yaha?? Maine tumhe games section mei choda tha na?? bola na waha se hilna mat!!"kriya scolded as she feared she might get lost

"mumma chalona mere saath!!"she caught kriya's salwar and pulled her out

"kaha!!"kriya qsned but she got no answer except more pull and then rajul started running!!

"arey kaha leke jaa rahi ho beta "kriya asked tired asking when she finally left her salwar and ran front

"papa!!"she shouted running to rey who was talking with his clients , his back facing towards her…. Kriya gulped on seeing his frame she knew who is it but she don't want it to be true but her fate on hearing the kid rey turned back kneeled down swooped her in his arms and stood staright and finally his eyes met hers!! Both got lost in eachother for a moment when his client called him!! Kriya unconsciously walked a bit front now his side facing her… he thought of finishing the meeting first so he was speaking to them… the sight in front of her made her smile!!! Rajul was placing with his face and hair as rey smiled in between seeing her and continued talking !!! everyone laughed as she caught reys lashes making him chuckle!! He shook her once shouting something like "boom"and caught her hands and resumed his speech!! But soon she released her hands and played with his hair for sometime and suddenly she bent a bit down and rey tilted his head a bit right and she buttoned his second button which he left open and then the first and then was struggling with the collar button , Rey smiled and took her hands away from his collar when she adjusted his collar which got disturbed while gathering her in his arms!! Kriya felt guilty suddenly … he is loving her a lot and she kept the baby away from him from last four years!! She knew who much he loved the baby!! Sudden guilt pricked her heart!!

"badi pyaari bachi hai Mr.Singhania ..naam kya hai??"one of them asked pulling her cheeks as she flinched back and hugged rey looking at him angrily!!! *bachon ki pata haina*

Rey was confused what will he say that he doesn't know his daughters name?? so he played safe..

"uncle ko apna naam bolke shake hand do "he said pulling her back as she looked at him . he blinked his eyes and said to go on when she simply followed him saying her name as rajul!!! Rey smiled!! And once glanced at kriya and she quickly looked away !!

"toh hum chalte hai Mr. Singhania" they took his leave and he simply called swaron who were also present there itself but attending another meeting!!!

"swayam its time rahul ko leke aao!!"he said and ended the call as he saw them coming already!!

Sharon frowned seeing the girl in his arms!!

"Rey ye.."he cut her

"meri beti !!"he said with a proud smile looking at his baby!! She smiled wide he kissed her on cheek again when she rubbed again and both giggled.. Sharon frowned and looked around and found kriya standing there

"Kriya!! What the hell kaha chaligayi thi yaar !! mai tumse na bohut gussa hun.. how can you leave like that "Sharon went on scolding kriya when rey maintained a straight face and kept calm…

"sorry Sharon "kriya replied and walked to rey

"rajul chalo ghar chalna chahiye hume"kriya said opening her arms calling rajul!! But she looked at rey who was looking straight and spoke coldly

"bache buke hai!! Its lunch time!! Swayam Rahul ko leke aao khana khaneke baad khelega"he said paying no attention to kriya and walked towards the restaurant once swayam came along with Rahul!!

As they entered a waiter attended and rey said

"ek table for six members ,… on the name of reyaansh singhania "he said to the waiter

"mujhe bhi apni naam ki table chahiye "rajul pouted cutely!!!Rey smiled at her and said to the waiter .. change the name to rajul singhania kk?? Khush?? He asked her as she nodded cutely and kissed his cheek!!

*Imagine moments like swaron too speaks to the kid etc etc sab explain nahi karna mujhe just necessary scenes bol rahi hun!! *

Rey ordered roti and some curries as reyam preferred these as the best for lunch for the kids . *well lemme clear they are in Singapore*

As the waiter placed food plates both rajul and Rahul whinned saying they don't wanna eat.. but sharon's one word made Rahul okay!!

"mujhe nahi khana"rajul whinned again.. Kriya was annoyed to core already !!!

" bola na chup chap khao!!"she said sternly as shareyam looked at her surprised how she is being that strict to a kid.

"nahi khana mujhe!!" rajul whinned again..

"maine bola na chup chap khao.. ek baar kehne pe samajh nahi aata?? Thappad khane ka mann hai kya??"kriya scolded her holding her by arm a bit hard . Rey frowned at her he knew she is annoyed , but the problem is between them why the hell is she letting out on the kid

"nahi khana mujhe"rajul said innocently pleading

"nahi khana toh bhooke raho … par iske alawa tujhe kuch khane ko nahi milega !! bohut manmaani karne lagi aaj kal!! " she scolded the poor kid and left her hand and sat quite struggling with herself !! She wanted to cry but she couldn't Rey looked at her but he was equal hurt and adding to it he was angry too!!! He carefully pulled rajul into his lap with all love who is now crying silently!!!

"mumma ko head ache hai isiliye !! ab ye khalete hai baad mei mai tum aur Rahul milke ice cream khayenge kk ??"rey whispered in her eyes and she looked at him and smiled through tears . he wiped her tears and fed her as she ate silently playing with Rahul who was fed by swayam… sharons gaze was fixed on kriya , she looked at rey and the baby continuously!!! And suddenly stood up to leave when rey caught her hand…

" aaj bhi khaneke saamne zid karne ki aadat nahi gayi kya??"he said without any expression for the first time looking at her.. she looked away…

" kabhi kabhi doosre kya chahte hai wo bhi sochliya karo "he said feeding rajul

She looked at him with hurt , tears made their way and she silently ate wiping her tears.

***

"beta tum aur Rahul garden mei jaake kheloge??"rey went on his knees and asked her…

"mere room mei bohut saare toys hai waha chale?? "she asked cutely . they reached kriya's house it was not too big not too small just a medium sized house with four rooms.. two bedrooms one kitchen and hall.

As soon as the kids vanished rey clutched her wrist and banged her into him twisting her hand to her back!! His eyes glaring at her reflecting the pain anger frustration longing everything as she looked everywhere except him!!! Sharon clutched swayam's hand as she never saw Rey this angry before , swayam blinked at her assure nothing will happen he can understand his pain he is a man too and the only thought of Sharon away from him kills him but rey is living that life from last 4years

" ab sach bataogi?/"he gritted his teeth and spoke to her

she looked away refusing to look at him!! "look at me!!"he hissed..but she maintained to be the same…. He tightened his grip hurting her and crushing her more into him…

" what do you think of yourself haa?? Aise hi kisiki life se walkout kardogi??"he spat venom at her…

She looked at him with pain… the one word reminded her that someone else walked away from her life without reason and she had given the same pain to him !! and unknowingly a tear rolled down her cheeks ….and the next second she was surprised to the concerned rey cupping her face wiping her tears

"kya baat hai!! U don't like me??? Toh batadiya hota… par aise achanak chaligayi pata hai mai kitna dar gaya tha"he said breaking his shell finally…

"wo…."she couldn't control anymore she just hugged him tight and cried chanting the sorry mantra as he hugged her back and cried his heart out !! after maintaining themselves she pulled back…

"Rey log mujhe kuch bhi bole mai tolerate kar loongi par rajul ko kisine kuch kaha toh I can't bare it!!! Aur …aur aap mujhse achi ladki ko deserve karte ho … aap chale jao!!"she said pushing a bit back… he raised his hand as if slapping her as she closed her eyes…

" mai tumhara boss hun saari decisions meri hogi.. tum bas follow karo khaafi hai aur jaha tah rajul ki baat aayi… she is my responsibility!! Use koi kuch bhi bol nahi sakta.. trust me!!"he said looking into her eyes…

She hugged him again and cried !! "itni choti cheez keliye aagayi tum … ?? u know sahi kehta hun mai tum dumb ho "he scolded her as she pouted back!!

***

"rajul kaha hai?? "kriya asked taking his coat and looking behind him!! He was supposed to pick her up from tutions!! She walked to the door and looked out near the car to find her but no she is not there she came in and as soon as she entered rey shu the doors close..

"rey kaha hai wo? "she asked a bit tensed

" sharon ke paas!!"he shrugged opening the buttons of shirt near his wrist!!

"Sharon ke ghar mei kyun?? Tang kardegi wo Sharon ko !!! "and before she could speak further he pushed her to door blocking her between his arms…

"tumhe tang karne keliye usse waha chod ke aaya hun!!! "he said blowing air on her face . Its been a month since they returned from Singapore and started living together … as a family … rey married her simply in a temple just for formality !! but in this one month he never ever even got a chance to kiss her properly… rajul being his princess he gave whole time to her even though he wanted to spend time with kriya !! and nights were the dreadful ones for him… one side will be his princess clutching onto him tight and on the other hand is his sexy tigress who sleeps in those nightrobe's which brings the hell out of him !!

"rey!!! " she was about to say something when he shhh ed her with his finger and quickly pulled off her pallu kissing her collar bone to earnest and commanding her to unbutton his shirt in middle.. he swooped her in his arms and threw her on the bed..

"let me now take care of you until you were taken to the hospital for delivery dear!! Iss baar beech mei nahi jaane doonga "he winked and started his work of making love to her!! As she simply gave herself to him taking in the utmost pleasure!!!

***

Well it didn't come out the way I wanted to I felt a bit boring..

Sorry for that!!!

Hope you like… just a mere hope

Do hit like and comment pleajj!!!

-deetha😳

Edited by deetha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well i really didnt expect ki aaj hi part 3 bhi mil jayega... 😆😆😆

well coming to the part it was really nice...
all the leaps and te part where rajul calls rey as papa was super cute...
bt i really didnt like the way kriya was talking to her during their lunch...
it was heart breaking.. 😡😡😡

rey's reaction when he found out tht kriya left was really amazing...
he was running around the house thinkin tht she is playing a prank on him... 😭😭😭

finally they r married... 😳😳😳
a simple sober wedding... 😊😊
loved the cute KriYaansh scenes in the last... 😳😳😳

ALL IN ALL DHASU WALA UPDATE THA... 👏

thnku for the pm... 😊😊😊


Edited by spongy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was seriusly not expecting ki tu isse itni jaldi update krke khatam kr degi...

m gonna miss this SS... i loved it sooo much... 😭

coming to ur update.. startin from the start...

The way u showed Rey's sadness..restlessness... the way he was going mad after Kria left.. that ws really emotional...

and after that Sharon made him sleep in his lap... aawww...touchy tha bht...

aftr that... 4 years gap... really...??? 😲

Rajul... ye kaisa naam hai... 😆

the happiness Rey had on his face aftr meeting Rajul... and how proudly he said "meri beti hai" ... 😃

finally they met after 4 years...

Kria was being so rude to her daughter.. huh... and Rey's cold behavior...baba re...

i loved that part a lot.. whn Rey was kinda shouting at her ki... jab mann karega toh kisi ki bhi life se chali jaogi n all that.. that whole part was just amazinggg...

and at the end.. naughty Rey back.. hahaha... he always get some idea to spend time with his baatcutter... 😆 😳

i simply loved this part a lottt...

gonna miss this story tons...

thank u madam for completing this story... 😆 🤗


Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee updates👏
loved ittt very much😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing update...


loved it..


yayyy rey confessed...hayyeee their kiss <3


haila kriya kyu gayi?? kahan gayi???


update sooon..

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Posted: 12 years ago
i want to comment via PC...bt for that i gotta wait till my mom sleeps..and so do u... :P ... So wait for somtym...

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