Tu AasHiqui Hai *KR SS* prt 2&3 pg 34 &38

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Tu AasHiqui Hai













INDEX!!



Chapter 1 - Scroll down

Chapter 2 - page 34

Chapter 3 (last ) - page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character Sketch:

Reyaansh Singhania:

coolest boss one can get but if careless then u have to face a Tiger!!! a single child of his parents... eyecandy of his parents.. too good at heart!!
away from them only to make his career!!!or to say!! loves to live in INDIA!! one of the owners of " Sharey constructions!!!" yeah best buddy !! sharon... Sharon Raiprakash!!


Sharon Raiprakash:

a sweet simple sensitive yet strong girl!!but a workaholic!! loves her bestie a lot!!! engaged to Swayam Shekhawat!! waiting for his return from USA!!! a blushy dreamy girl of the lover boy!! iska aadha din kaam mei jayega toh baaki din phone pe blush karte hue!!


Kria Rajiv Malhotra:

the most cutest girl one can imagine!!! married to rajiv malhotra!!a girl full of life!! stronger than one can imagine!!


Edited by ..tulip.. - 12 years ago
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well now i know mera murder hi hone wala hai but...

AADAT SE MAZBOOR!!!!!!!

sorry for that!!

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PS: its a very small story...may be bada hosakta hai i can't say!! but swaron wale...sorry but isme sirf sharon hai!!!!!!!



"so miss Kriya aap kalse join kar sakte ho!! remember kal subah 9 sharp!!!and tum arjun ri8?? tum bhi!!! hope u two wont dissapoint us!!"sharon said with a smile ...

"yeah!! little bit of carelessness u will be out"rey said sternly

"offo rey abhi se na darao!!! ab tum log jaa sakte ho!!"she said to them

"thank you mam. thank you sir"arjun and kria said and left the cabin of their new bosses!!!!!

arjun- secretary of sharon and kria- secretary of rey..

all thanks to rey and his line

" do ladkiyan kaam se jyaada baatein karti hai "

"friends??? waise bhi aage bohut kaam aayega"kris said extending her arm

"ofcourse yaar!!! well u look soo cute!! *pulling her cheeks* my daughter is cute too !!!😉 gtg now warna gadbad hojayegi!!bye cya..."he said and left leaving an amused kriya..she smiled...he would make a great friend!!

she left for her house!!!

*AFTER 2 WEEKS- MRNG 9:00"

"so kriya saari files liya na we have to leave right now and yaad rakhna pehli baar field pe jaa rahe ho tum...so better be careful i dnt want any faults... last 2 weeks u are good... dnt spoil the impression okay!!"rey said softly but sternly!!

"okay sir"kriya nodded and took all the things she needed and followed rey!!!

they were standing in the outside their company waiting for sharon and her assistant...

rey was busy on talking to some client ... finally when sharon came she enquired abt kriya surprising rey...he saw back found her no where!!! he frowned...they should start on the moment ..where the hell is she... then what he saw made him angry a bit...he was too strict abt his work... and this girl was coming slowly enjoying her ice-cream and smiling in her own world...

as soon as she came to them she froze seeing rey glaring at her...she was feared...but she couldnt stop after seeing the icecream selling outside the gate...rey glared at her...she dissapointedly looked down and threw the ice-cream in the dustbin

"sorry sir"she said very sad...

far a sec the three felt sorry for her...

"arey kria ice cream leke aagayi toh khaliya hota tum bhi na"sharon said concerned on seeing the sad look on kria's face

"i think we should get going"rey said not able to understand what to say pity on her or be angry

*ON THE FIELD*

the engineers were doing their works!! sharon and arjun were a bit far checking half of the part when rest is left for kriyansh

rey was instructing her and kria sincerely was writing down ...

after a few mins of silence rey asked her his back facing her

"all done kria?? sab ache se note karliya??"rey asked looking at the work going on

"ye..yes sir"he found the tone different...he frowned and looked back... she looked too low...and at the same tym sharon too came back...

"hogaya rey??? toh chale??"she asked rey but frowned seeing him confused and looked at kriya who was looking at the paper fidgetting with her pen and looked too low...sharon went forward and shook her up

"kriya u okay??"she asked concerned...aww how cute one can be

"thee...theek hun"kriya at the end started crying as sharon immediately hugged her

rey and arjun were totally confused ...weird they thought

"kriya kya hua?? look at me...kriya"sharon pulled back...

"wo...wo ... subah ice cream bhi nahi kha payi aur ab ye...imli khatam hogaya jo last bacha hua tha wo gir gaya"kriya said breaking down into fresh tears looking at the tamarind which fell in the mud...

sharon was shocked beyond limits...but it was no tym to qsn.

"arjun abhi waha shop mei jaake imli leke aao"she ordered

"sharon??"rey was abt to tell but was cut by her

"arjun suna nahi...ri8 now ...go*she scolded for the first tym* rey be quite"she shut him up...

soon arjun was back as told and sharon offered the imli and kriya took quickly and started eating it with a wide smile and hugged sharon and pecked her saying "u r the best"and resumed her eating

rey and arjun were seeing her in disbelief...this girl is eating normally??? that too imli?? they gulped slightly...

once kriya was done sharon shouted

"are you mad kriya?? u know ri8 ye construction ki company hai?? aur"she was cut

"mujhe sirf ye kaam aata hai... sirf isime mera intrest hai...i always wanted to come in this field "kriya said defending

"but tumhe join nahi karna chahiye tha!!!!! btw kitne months??"sharon asked her

kriya smiled looked at her tummy caressed it and said "3 and half "she said lovingly looking at her baby!!!


this was when rey and arjun realised what actually is and were shocked after few mins rey said

"Mrs .Kria u can leave the office...mujhe koi risk nahi lena aur naahi apne kaam mei koi problem chahiye"he said ...

"sir i wont "she was cut

"i said leave...cheque tumahare ghar aajayega"he said seriously..

"rey meri baat"sharon was cut

"i took my decision sharon"rey said and left...

kriya left crying at her fate leaving a restless sharon!!!!! "this shouldnt have happened"sharon thought

"but rey bhi sahi hi tha...we cant take risk of someone's life"she convinced herself and left

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a week later!!

rey was on his way back to his home when he saw kria sitting on a bench with a suitcase and two big bags and talking to herself...somewhere he thought he was rude that day so he got down and walked to her

"mumma sach mei sorry hai... aap chinta mat karo..mumma jaldi koi ghar dhoondhlegi.. jald hi...aap tension na lo mumma aapko koi problem nahi hone degi ...rpomise"she was caressing her not at all visible womb and said caringly...

this was another shock to her...

"hey!!"rey called her...she turned back and was surprised to see him

"sir aa yaha??"she asked quite surprised

"wo i was just passing by...tumhe dekha toh i thought i should appologise"he said

"appologise...aap?? par kyun sir??"she asked confused

"mujhe waise baat nahi karna chahiye tha"he said

"its okay sir ur right on ur part..

she said with and sweet smile...rey smiled too...this girl is different...he liked it

"tum ye kya bol rahi thi...tumhare ghar ko kya hua?? and where is ur husband??"he asked looking around

"wo toh kab ki chalagaya...aur ab ghar bhi gaya...well ...search on process..."she said casually

"oh sorry abt ur hubby "he said feeling bad for her

"oohhwww sir dnt be...wo mara nahi zida hai kahi pe...he just left me"she said chuckling at how his faced turned pale listening that her hubby was dead

"what??? kyun??"rey asked quite shocked...he never knew much abt her but he can say this much...she is too good to be a partner... she is soo supportive... how can one leave this good girl...

"sorry a bit personal"kriya shrugged...

"ooppss sorry"rey said realising he is asking too personal things

"toh ab kaha rahogi??"he asked concerned

"aaj keliye toh yahi pe...kal subah dhoodhna hai... samajh nahi aarah milega bhi nahi...mumbai mei ghar ...arrgghh too expensive!!"she said frutrated

and now she is jobless too

"isiliye tumne job join ki??"rey asked realising

she nodded cutely

"shit...sorry maine socha tym pass keliye kar rahi ho"he said his thoughts

"obvsly sab wahi sochenge sir..."she said with a smile

how can she be soo normal with this much tension going on in her life he thought

"ermm...if u dnt mind... u can stay in my house...its a big one too ...mai akela rehta hun if u dnt mind...mujhe bhi company mil jayegi "he said hesitantly

"par sir mai aapke ghar mei...i can't afford that much"kria said

"arey no need of rent"he spoke immediately...his heart is not wanting to leave her here suffering

"nahi sir...i wont...free mei mai nahi reh sakti"she said ...surely it hurts her self respect

"okay...i will give ur job back...first two months no need to pay baad mei sab milke pay kardena"he said looking at her hopefully

"hmmm...ummm...okay sir"she said smiling

"but ek condition"he said

"kya??"

"kaam mei koi problem nahi honi chahiye"rey said slightly making a babyface

kriya gave a short laugh and said

"ofcourse sir...mujhe apne kaam pe payment lena acha lagta not on sympathy"kriya soid

"hmm...toh chale??"he asked

"ji"she said and was picking up all the luggage when he stopped

"arey u leave it driver leke aayega"he said and called his driver

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"aap ghar mei akele rehte ho??"kria asked looking around the house

"haan... khana keliye kaka rehte hai aur do teen servants...u will be comfy in that room i think...come lemme show u "he took her to the room

"ermmm sir ...rent kitna hai??"she asked looking at the room...oly the room is as big as her old house

"kriya for two months uske baare mei sochna band karo"he said and turned back

"well any help toh landline se 3 dial kardena...mujhe call ajayega... and yeah dnt be hesitant"he said and left bidding her a good ni8

she grinned

"mumma ko aur aapko ghar milgaya...tha gaye hona? let us sleep"she said and directly fell on bed and in no secs she is asleep...

mins later rey came to ask if she is comfortable before going to his room for sleeping...but found her sleeping cutely...he looked at the sweet smile on her face ...he covered her with blanket and left to his room

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thats for today!!!!!!

well a different concept ri8??

hmmm ...sorry for these many works but cant help!!!

solly!!!!!!!

hope u like it..

hit like and comment too please

love you all

enjoy

-deetha😳



Edited by deetha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res!

unres
finaly unres kar rahi hu

ek aur??
Ek toh complete kardo di fir dusra start karna

bt i already tld u i luv readin ur wrks😳

comin 2 the update
acha tha
bohut acha hai
bohut bohut bohut acha tha😃

kria rey ki secretary...umm interestin

kria maried n caryin 3 month baby😲

kria n rey in same room😊

p.s i already tld u i suck @ cmntin so srry fr chotu cmnt


p.p.s banner mast hai😃
Edited by sapnaarsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ress..!!..

unres
Awesome Cs n chappy di...😉
comin 2 the update...
bohut acha hai
bohut bohut bohut acha tha😃 😆
kria rey ki secretary...good good...
loved the krisha scene very much...😉
kria maried n carrying 3 month baby 😲..
kria n rey in same house😊..cool..😉
p.s banner mast hai😃

P.P.S..cholly chotu comment kiya...exms chalng...baad mein edit kar dungi..pakka pakka..dance ki kasam..😛

p.p.p.s agar bhul jaun to plshh yaad dila dena... 🤣
Edited by esha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update ..!
Concept is interesting !
Loved it ..!
Update soon d next part !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res..
sorry will unres soon ...😭
maybe 2mrw...

till den must say
Nice concept...👍🏼👍🏼
loved it...❤️

unresd...😃😃

sharon is so caring...😃
deetu its only a suggestion...
As this a KR SS so...
i jzzz wanted 2 tell plz
if u don't mind...
can u show Kriyam here as BFF's...???😕😕

sorry 2 oppose ur track...
if it doesn't fit wid d storyline ...
then leave it...

or else plz
i Seriously Miss Kriyam's bond...

do wish 2 see dem here...
once again sorry
no offence on ur writing...
its jz a suggestion...
Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept, and totally different..
update soon and do pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept n quite unique obviously...
luvd all d characters..
Sharon is so caring.. Rey is soft-hearted bt very much strict when itz about work...
n Kriya.. she's super cute.. can't believe she was crying for imli !!! 😆
luvd d 1st chappy.. update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mindblowing concept...
pehle toh gussa aya...but then too gudd...
waiting for moree...!!

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