The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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princess2507

@princess2507

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Hey first of all congratulations for ur new thread...

I m so happy for u...

Secondly,,, i m so so sorry for not commenting on ur
Chapter 12,,, brcause i was so busy this week... Just read ur chapter 12.. It was an aweome part...
I m so happy that riya gain her consiousnes and also to know that sik knows that his brothers is dead...

P.s. comment on chapter 13 after reading it...

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

unres

hats off to u dr...

👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏..👏.👏👏..👏👏.

🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.

amazing update...

arjun flashback was so emotional yaar...

u remain me some of my personal dr...

cant able to stop crying 😭.😭.😭.😭while reading that part dr...

dad and son reunion was so nice...

sik was so cheep...bloody idiot...

loved arjun decision he have to prove riya she was always sefe in arjun hand...

thanks for PM...

cont soon dr...

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50ShadesOfMe

@50ShadesOfMe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Hey Muskaan!!

Got lil time from my exam preparations so commenting on this chap! 😉

And as usual.. Superb update! 😃

Loved the reunion of the father nd son! 😳 It was amazing!

Got to see a glimpse of Arjun's painful past.. Poor guy.. Had to suffer soo much!

And I loved this line by Rathore a lot.. "Crying should never be considered as the weakness,for crying one needs great courage.."

And Riya! Even she had to suffer so much.. She was molested! And she wanted to be Arjun's only coz she feared that Sik will be back!

Well, I liked Arjun's plan.. By killing that idiot Sik infront of Riya will kinda reduce her fear!!

Overall, an fab update!

Waiting for the next part..

And thnx for the pm! 😊

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Naga25889

tHANK YOU SOO MUCH
I have commented on all parts
Can u pls send me the link for chapter 11,12,13
Thank you once again for replying & giving such a fabulous story
email address : sella.bala54@gmail.com

dear I asked you to comment...not to increase the number of replies...you just gave me two three words...too good, very good, awesome... I mean will you like it if I updated the story in promos.?...
Don't get hurt...but that was not a reply...you just thought posting 10 replies will b okay...but no...I just want to know how you felt while reading...that is it...dear...as my readers hope for a long update...I do too...but a heart felt one...if you want to see what I am talking about...see page no 10... Some people commented on my all prev parts due to which they even got added... I want that kind of a reply..where i come to know how a particular person felt after reading it...I am sorry but... 😕

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Hey Muskaan..

Thanks for the PM and the blog link.. Wonderful update, dear!

Could totally relate to Riya's state of mind and her reasoning..
But what stole the show was Arjun.. Dude, he's not a gentleman yet possesses gentleman-like virtues.. 👏 I think I fall for him with each update of yours.. 😳

And that bit about his mother's death was heart-wrenching! Now we know why he is, the way he is.. I'm so glad and thankful that Riya survived.. Or the man would've died right there!!

Oh my! He's set Sikky free??!!! 😲 😕 I soo hope it doesn't backfire this time around.. Wonder how Riya will react when she finds out.. Hope that move of his doesn't scare her more than she already is!!

Eagerly awaiting the next one.. Do update sooner.. 😊

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Wow!!

Awesome Part...!!!!

I love it completelty...

I got to know why Arjun used to hate his dad... He never hated but feared him...!!

Arjun the bravest of all is just an outer-layer, in his heart he is the most timid person. And of course meant to be after the turns he faced in life...!!!

That Mother's part was simply awesome. The dad and son reunion was also fantastic...!!

Loved it completely...!!!

And Ariya scene was also awesome...!!

Beautifully exhibited Riya's actions and fears...!!! The manner u presented that part was simply rocking,,,,

Arjun's releasing Sik,... Now i get to know the reason... Or I was hell confused in the precap..!!!

Cant wait for the next part..!!!!

Please update soon!!!

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-SREE93-

@-SREE93-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

hi muskaan di

wow di it was fab

felt sorry 4 arjun

the way he lost his mother

poor .😭.😭..😭...

and afyr that he cut all relations

baap beta ki part was good

hope they will have a gud relationship hereaftr

arjun u haven't done anything

it was the fate who playd in ur case...

dont worry yaar...

ur fathr knows u well nw

and i loved arjun's father concern and love 4 all the members...

arjun-sam part was good

so arjun is getting mad of riya😉

and the gift u give in the part di

the real arjun's nature,his care and concern...

and arjun riya part was also nice...

arjun set him free

we know arjun is strong and brave

hope he didn't make any mistake in his decision

and no precap hmmm...

waiting 4 nxt part di

continue soon

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Hey ...

That was just mindblowing ... 👏

So we finally got to see Arjun's past and why he didn't share a rapport with his dad ...

Poor Arjun ... He lost his mother and his dad blamed him for that

The dad - son scene was fantastic 😃

Awww love the scene where Mr. Raute accepts all the four as his sons 😃

Hayeee ... Arjun is so smart and the way he cared for Riya was just so sweet ... 😳

He actually set Sikander free ... 😲

Hope everything goes according to his plan ... And it doesn't have any negative effect on Riya 😃

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

awww superb update...once again it was mindbolwing
the flashback scenes was really emotional after finding out how arjuns mum died
loved the way how arjun reunited with his dad the scenes was really heart touching
liked arjun nd sameer's conversation it was amazing
loved the little romance between ariya
arjun set sik free...hope his plan works nd kills him infront of riya nd also her fears dies soon
eagerly waiting for the next chapter
thank you so much for the update
continue soon

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Khushboo

@kaybee23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Wow that was an incredible update!! I absolutely loved it! I have no words to describe you writing skills, all i can is that is was beyond Wonderful! 👏

Thank you so much for the PM and the blog link. 😊

The flashback of Arjun and his mom was emotional and heartbreaking. Poor Arjun his dad blamed him for his moms death. Loved how him and his dad patched up. The line where Arjun says that "I didn't kill her. I'm not a murderer" was so heart touching. Nice to see the father-son bonding.

Loved how Mr. Raute tells Rathore that he has four sons. That was super cute and sweet.

Arjun and Sam's conversation was really good. Love their friendship and love how they can talk to openly to each other.

Arjuns plan to find out why Riya is behaving like that actually worked. Can't believe he sat that sicko Sik free. Hopefully this time he won't get away with anything and that Arjun succeeds this time around in killing him in front of Riya!

Looking forward to reading the next part to see how Riya is going to react when she finds out that Arjun set Sik free. Update soon! 😊