The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21! - Page 16

Awesome update! This would have to be one of my favorites, too! Loved it! I thought Arjun had gone crazy at first, but I understand his logic. Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update and PM!

di...i got ur pm...bt hw will i read chapter 11 n 12??? actually m nt used 2 indiaforums...so basically mere ko kch bhi samajh nai a rha ...plzz help...i really wanna read ths story!!! pllzzz😭😭

muskaan didi... i clicked on d link of chap 13...i was directed 2 d blog site...which was protected..i have a blog account created...n i have requested access 2 view d site...ab mereko kch nai samajh a rha hw 2 read d chapter...cn u pm n direct me...i will b very grateful 2 u...thank u...waitin eagerly...😛😛😛

chalo meri dhamki bhi kahi kaam aai hehehe 😆 well jokes apart... bt thnx 4 d pm 😊

1nc agn a brilliant update 👏 phew m so releaved dat riya is safe bt poor she...shez so scared of dat bloody sik...bt wht arjun did was quite unexpected bt hez ri8 he has done ri8 2 remove dat fear out of riya's mind it has 2 b done...n m sure he'll save her no matter wht...!

luv d chemistry betwn dad n son...poor soul he has suffered a lot...bt now he has his whole family in his dad, his frnds/ colleges...dats gr8 😛

n rathore n arjun's bond was shwn gr8...n his dad's dialouge dat " he had lost 1 son bt found 4 sons..." really heart touching 😊 n d intimate scene of ariya was bit bold...😉

bt still njoyd as alwys...n u r really superb d way u project all d characters emotions is awsum...u really need an applause...!!! 👏

awww awesome amazing. when you mentioned this was your fav chapter i expected it to be great. but this has turned out to be beyond my expectation. i hope that if ever shaleen and sana khan get a chance to act together fading butterfly is taken for the script. hats off yaar thanks for pm. detailed comment, arjun and mom's flash back was superb. loved the way the king accepted rathore shree and chotu as his son's. setting sik free was indeed the master stroke, unexpected but still the best thing arjun could do for riya. Poor riya she must be so wreched emotionally she just lived through every girls nightmare. do update soon. tried commenting on word press but am unable to do so.

Edit pg12 Thankd dr plz update soon

13th chap...no wrds...😉 hats off 2 u ...👏
poor riya...she's scared...And that idiot shik...arjun will not leave him...why didn;t u give precap??????I hope dis Shik will end soon & d caring&loving session btw riya & arjun wil start soon😆 ...Update soon di...😃

such a wonderful update.your writting is fab.flashback was too emotional and heart touching .feeling sorry for arjun.hope riya gets well soon.anyways thanks for pm.

Hey!!! read last 2 parts in one go. Beautifully fully written... no words to explain your work... ⭐️