The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

wow! that was really another excellent update! i really thank you for such wonderful update... can't seem to get enough of it! a very emotional update to be honest... please update soon! sorry that i am being too selfish... take ur time and update soon! i will definitely wait for the next update! thank you for the PM... i really appreciate it! =)

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

SUPERB...!!!!
AWESOME...!!!!
<3<3
Loved it...
It was such an amazing update...
It was mine favourite of all the parts...
The flashbacks brought tears in my eyes...
It was so emotional...
Mother-Children bonding is always the best...
Poor child...became the victim of angry husband...his father..
Riya's boldness... her demands...
Rathod's funny remark...
Arjun's determination...
It was all great...
the Master Stroke... Sikandar is free... he'll surely be back... then will be the end of Riya's fear nd Sikandar too...
LOVED IT...

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Hey di. I m really very very sorry. I forgot to un reserved my previous post. I thought I un reserved it. Sorry di. Un reserved it at page 10.
This chapter was really amazing and beautiful dear.
Arjun's past was really pain full. Arjun's mom died in front of him. He was broken and his father blamed him for his mothers death.Arjun hiding behind the bed just like a kid and waiting for his mother to come and find him that scene made me cry.
The father and son scene was really emotional. Finally they understood each other and came close. Rathore Chotu and Shree are TRUE friends .
After reading the last chapter I was confused and scared why Riya was behaving like that but now I got it.
That Sikk Kamina. 😡 . He is getting on my nerve. I just want to see him dead.
At first I was shocked why Arjun set Sikk free. But he is right. He is thinking like a true prince. .Pls di made him kill sikky fast. I want Riya to get reed of her fear soon.
Love the update a lot. It was very emotional and beautiful. Very beautifully written. 👏

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: MastiMuskaan

hey i added you again...please chk th eabove mail id...

hey thanks yaar
thank u so much
i ll comment after reading

Edited by madmadona - 12 years ago

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Great update!

Thanks for the pm

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Naga25889

@Naga25889

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: MastiMuskaan

hey...i am so glad to have a new reader...but you will have to comment on all the parts that are been posted on the forum...then only i will be able to add you in my blog..😳😳

tHANK YOU SOO MUCH
I have commented on all parts
Can u pls send me the link for chapter 11,12,13
Thank you once again for replying & giving such a fabulous story
email address : sella.bala54@gmail.com

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

it was amazing you rock once again

you made me speechless and this time for a long time

you are a grate writer head's off to you for thousand time is not enaf to you

now for your update

it was too long and you always gave us a long update and we like it too when we read it one fear in our mind when we started reading that it's end soon but one satisfaction is passed in our body after reading your update what an update great

you write flashback is too good and emosnal too

when i stared reading it i have tear in my eyes and till your flashback is not end my tear is not stooped but after reading the flashback their are many happiness coming grate flashback

in flashback i like the way arjun and her mom talk to each other with eye it's wonderful

and arjun's dad is like arjun on full angry mode in hospital and he told arjun that arjun kill his mother and arjun is in fear from his father you pen down it beautifully

and the seen of his room is great that he hid behind the bed and wait for his mother to find him but she never come and he crying i also crying

and then at night seen of arjun and his dad is too much too good and his Chet-chat and then he sleep in his father's lap it's amazing

and then rathod coming and their Chet-chat is too good and arjun's father told that he have a four son now arjun , rathod , and two eavesdropping shree and chotu i like the way he told this to rathod too good

and rathod made a catting chai for arjun and he add sugar in chai twice hahaha

and now rathod and arjun's relesionship is too good they talk thier personal problems without hasistant i likeed it too much

and then the doctor 's seen is coming and after read that part i am shocked poor riya kafi kuch saha hay usne so isi liye vo dar rhi thi agar uski jagh koi aur hota to syad etana nahi sah pata she is brave too much head's off to her

and arjun angry on doctor and his thinking is great such a grate person he is

and then afternoon riya in her conscious and she speak arjun not full i am calm down she is at lest in conscious and after that i loved the way arjun concern for her and then rathod concern and then arjun's dad come and shree & chotu too wait for meting her it's great

and then night seen of bedroom of riya is great head's off to you

and then arjun free sik and now he is kill sik in front of her for her to be coming out of her fear i loved his idea so much

this update is on top of the world i told you

great update

and pls update soon now i am not capable to waiting and tnx for pm dear but why you do not pm me when you update ch-12 and you tll not read my comment for last two update pls read it dear soon

page number is 136,10,18

and pls update soon and pm me and tnx for pm

this is for you dear

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Edited by 12pr - 12 years ago

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Naga25889

@Naga25889

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

i read ur 10th chapter
it was really long, bt vry vry intersting
FB was amazing
Pls send me the link 4 the others

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playagame

@playagame

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

ok thnks for the so long update..well,the updates is amazing..u describe everyone emotions very well..whether it's of arjun,riya,arjun dad or his mom..everyone..ok the flashbacks of arjun's mom death is very painful...he is hiding behind his bed..he bear the same pain for so many years..
but father n son patch up scene is realy touchy..
he sleep on his father's lap ..hw cute..he was sleeping so peacefully after a long time..
the scene in which doc told about riya stage, i have urge to kill that moron sik..
hw dare he..i hate him..
i m glad to know dat arjun is not interestd to know if she is virgin or not..he only wanted to know if she is alright or not..it had a great meaning..it show hw much he care for her n loves her..
ok,finaly after arjun is suceded on knowing reason for riya desperateness..
arjun plan is amazing..i realy want dat sik to be shot dead in front of riya's eyes..waitng for precap..once again superb update..**clap clap clap**

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jumbo_dumbo

@jumbo_dumbo

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Hey..

This update is best that i have read..

I loved reading each n evry sentence of this update...

Coming to ur update,

A glimpse into Arjun's past..

It is so painful..

Losing his mom as well as getting blamed for the same would have been so much bear..

No doubt Arjun is the way he is because of this...

I loved father n son reunion..

U know its said nah "when everything fails, family is there.."

I loved the line which is said by Rathore "Crying should never be considered as the weakness,for crying one needs great courage.." I so believe in this line..

Again u written very well the rapport shared by four men especially Arjun n Rathod.

Awww.. Riya was molested... I seriously dont like this Sik.. Finish him soon...

Riya wanted to make her his because of fear instilled by that psycho...

Arjun is right the killing spree has to stop someday or the other,, N making Arjun kill Sik in front of Riya will surely free her from her fear..

Thanx,,, Update soon...