[OS] Six Degrees of Separation

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Your OS got me thinking. This is what seperates so many real life couples where one half lives in India and the other in Pakistan.

Though there was no happy ending the story touched a cord inside me. Could feel what they felt, it is o beautifully written.

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

beautiful OS...
Loved it ❤️

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

What The!!!!! How come i got to read this so late in the day.😲

You need to get a index done girl.

This was such a beautiful OS...and i loved the part that it was not a lovey dovey one, just a story of 2 strangers having a connection in the middle of an army of people from a distance. You could almost hear Rabba ve playing in the background.

Good one.

Liza

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

well dis was a beautiful.tale of.possibility, connection nd separation...

oh how two ppl get.coonecyed to each.other.nd den gets separated due to dis 6 degree distnace...separation gets his space...:'(

ohhh how i wud want dis one to het a happily ever but.we al now dis doesnt happens nd dis separation nd possibilty doesnt exist...circumstnces dont give a chnce to possibilty...

nyc work done...it actually makes me cry dat d ppl living just 6 degree away from us r just d same nd dere is possibilty we might have had a connection wid dem...bco ultimately we share d same roots...

ohhh how much i want a happy endin...but dis uneasy feelin in khushi's heart is ecatly wat i'm feelin rite now...:'(

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

It was beautiful and beautifully written. Could imagine it in my mind. Good job.

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Anukriti

@psychofool

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

your story holds strange truth in them ...i'll comment in detail after my exam gets over

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alisondi

@alisondi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

ohk so probably this is one of the best one shots i have read!!!

congratulations to that..

2nd i totally connected with it cause i have been to wahga border a couple of times cause my dad,s in army so it gives me the privilege ...anyways i have always been wondering how just a small gate separates two nations who have always been ethically bonded...

i,ll stop blabbering now n sum it up...one word: beautiful <3

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lightening

@lightening

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

This is a most beautifully penned down os..

It goes so much deeper than just finding a good friend in a crowd. It smells of separation. The big iron gates opening and closing was brilliant in its symbolism. A friend found and lost.

How man has made these borders for himself that you lose an opportunity to be with people.

This was great! I think u just turned me into ur fan. :)

i am stutie btw and now i shall go real all your other ff also :)

Loads of love