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thank you for your hard work i always be waiting for you next part your story brings a life in the forum keep up the good work👏
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Part 93 (BTW thanx!!!! As long as people read them thats all i care about)

Turns out the last scene after Dk closes the door was all a dream!!

Disha is sitting on the bed looking at Dk's photo!!! Its raining and it starts thundering and lightening.....

And we all know how much Disha hates that

Disha looks out the window and is frozen statue.....

Dk is just staring at her....... He's not doing or saying anything!!

Disha has the guts to close the window so she quickly closes the window....and just stands there again and looks at the sky

Dk comes behind her and puts his hands on her shoulders and w/o hesitating she quickly hugs him!!

And she hugs him really tight.........

Disha finally lets go and looks up and sees Dk....

And boy is she shocked!!!

Disha just walks back then BAAAAAMMMMM Thunder and she just hugs him bacK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Ur quiet today what happened?

Disha lets go and wipes her tears!! and walks away....

Dk holds her hand....

Dk: Why u silent?

Disha doesnt have the guts to talk to him

Dk: What do you think?? That i am mad at you for all the things that you said to me at the hospital....

Disha closes her eyes

Dk: Do you know how i feel right now???

Dk turns her around

Dk: I feel so happy that you know the truth of what really happened!!!!!!! I have nuthing against you and i never did!!!

Disha looks at him

DK; You shouldnt feel bad because i know you didnt know the truth so you let me really have it!!!

Disha; But you didnt deserve any of it!!! Some wife i am!!!

Dk: Wife?? ur the best there is!!!

Disha: After everything that i said.... you are still willing to except me!!!!

Dk: I love you more than anyone in this world!!! No one can separate us!!

They both hug.....

Disha packs up her things and they leave the same night!!!

She arrives back home and she feels good

Khushi goes into Dk's room...

Dk is changing in the bathroom and Disha is lying down on her bed

Disha sits up... And both of them are looking at each other!!!

Khushi: Well i hope you are happy!!!!

Disha: Meaning?

Khushi: You know the truth about daddy!!!!

Disha: Yes i am!!

Khushi: Of all people, you didnt believe him?? He loves you more than anyone and you do this to him? Momma i cant believe you!!!!

Saying that she walks out and Disha is like in shock!!!!

Disha: (herself) She hasnt forgiven me yet!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk comes out and sees Disha lost

Dk: What are you thinking about me?

Disha: Huh?? Nuthing!!!!

They both go to sleep... and get all cuddled up!!!!!

Next Morning:

Its the same ole routine again!! Three bahus are in the kitchen once again!!!

Khushi looks at Disha and they stare and Khushi just walks off w/o saying anything!!!

Disha is sad!!

Everyone is happy once again!!! But It is Disha who isnt... because of Khushi!!

Khushi goes to Dk's room and they have a nice little chat!!!

Disha goes in and sees them talking and she leaves!!!

Dk is wondering why she left

Khushi also leaves

Khushi thinks to herself: Daddy worries about mommy way to much.... and mommy doesnt even care about dad!!!!! and nods her head!!!!!

Khushi is really attached to Dk..... and she cant see him in pain!!!

Disha comes back and tells Dk to hurry up....

Dk grabs her from behind and hugs her

Dk: Why did you leave just now?

Disha makes up an excuse

Disha: Because you two were talking and i didnt want to be rude!!!

Dk: Since when did you start thinking like that?

Disha: just wanted to leave you two alone!!!

Dk starts kissing her

Disha: Dk... Go to work!!!!

Dk: No i feel like being w/ you!!!

Disha: No go!! come on!!!!

Dk: Fine!!! If you say so!!!!

He leaves the kids go to school

Disha starts cleaning the house and does what any house wife would do!!!!!

The kids come back from school... And Khushi is mad and Disha notices

She follows Khushi into her room

Disha: Khushi?? What happened? Is everything alright?

Khushi: I will wait til daddy comes back!!!!!!

She folds her arms and has a mean look

Disha gets it that she's still mad and she wont talk to her so she doesnt force and waits til Dk comes!!!

Dhruv (junior: why didnt you tell mom?

Khushi: Because...

D: are you still mad?? Get over it!!!

K: How can i?

D: i did!! It was her misunderstanding.. everything is over!!!

Dhruv leaves the room and Khushi is like how can i?

The guys come home from work

Dk goes into his room and Khushi follows him

Khushi: Daddy??

Dk: Yes

Khushi: I had a bad day at school today!!!!

Dk: What happend?

Khushi: Nuthing!! It was just bad!!!!

Dk is like okay!!!

Disha comes in and hangs up Dk's suit...

Khushi is still talking to Dk....Disha buts in...

Khushi: Do you mind mom?? I am talking to dad alone!!!!

W/ an attitude... and Disha says sorry and leaves

Dk: Why were you so rude?

Khushi: Because...

Dk: If ur not over the incident... then i will tell you right now to get over it!!!!!!!!

Khushi: But...

Dk: No buts!!!!! I want you to go say sorry!!!!

Khushi leaves and by the door she turns around

Khushi: NO!!!!!

Dk: What?

Khushi: I will not!!! She has hurt you!! And if anyone hurts you i will not say sorry to them!!!

Dk: She's ur mother!!!

K: SO!?

Dk gets mad

Dk: If you dont say sorry... then i will not talk to you!!!

K: Do what ever you want!!! But i will not apologize!!!!!

She leaves... and Dk is shocked!!!!

Disha has heard everything.....and is thinking what should i do?

Dk is thinking that he never expected this to come up!!!

Both of them are thinking of what they should do next?



Okay you guys the end!!!

preview for tomorrow:

Disha: I will stay away from Dk.. if thats what you want?

Khushi: Yes.. thats what i want

DIsha is shocked!!!

Disha sits on the couch in the front and doesnt go in her room til Dk has fallen asleep!!!!!

Khushi looks from her door and is happy!!!!!!

********* By the way.. someone give me some romantic scenes!!!! Send me a private message!! i dont have anything!!!!!!!!!!**********


Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
awsome guli!!! 👏 👏
great story!!! 😛
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guli you r da best. 👏
sometimes i feel like slapping khushi. 😡
continue soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
good one guli

u r also twisting the story keep it up

and let them coming
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Part 94

Disha is like what should i do?

Khushi hates her!!!

She goes and has a talk w/ her

Khushi is ignoring her

Disha: Why do you hate me?

Khushi: Because i am frustrated!!

Disha: So why dont you let it all out and let me have it?

Khushi: NO!

Disha: I will stay away from Dk.. if thats what you want?

Khushi: Yes.. thats what i want

DIsha is shocked!!!

Disha: (herself) Sorry Dk!! But i dont know what to do!!!

Later that night:

Disha is finishing cleaning!!

She sits on the couch and waits for Dk to fall asleep!!!!!

He does after a while and then she goes in....

Khushi saw and she is happy!!

Disha just goes to sleep!!

Next Morning:

Dk turns over and puts his arms around Disha...

Disha looks at the clock and its 630 and she wake up

Dk: Disha... its only 630.. stay w/ me for a while!!

Disha: No. i have a lot of things to do...

Dk: I am not going to let you go.... Wait at least a half hour

Disha: Dk??

Dk pulls her back down......

Dk gets all lovey dovey!!

Disha is enjoying it.. but then w/ what Khushi said she leaves!!

Dk: Disha??

Disha: Sorry got loads of work!!!

Awww poor DK!!!!

For two weeks... Disha hasnt been closer to Dk than b4 becuz of Khushi

Dk hugs her from behind

Dk: What happend? You havent been by me for a while

Disha: I have

Dk: Dont lie!!

Disha: What?

Sum is calling Disha, so she leaves again

Dk is like whats going on w/ her?

Dk goes back and does his stuff

Khushi was watching and she is happy!!!

Khushi goes in and pretends nuthing is happening!!!

Dk and Khushi are just talking when Disha walks in

Disha pretends she was going to get something...

She pretends she cant find it and walks out but before she does

Dk: Disha?

Disha is scared

Disha: Yes

Dk: My button broke... can you please fix it?

Disha: Yeah...

Disha is fixing it... there and Khushi is not liking it so she walks out...

Disha notices and gets all sad. but doesnt let Dk see it

Disha fixes it....

Dk: Thank you!!!

Disha: Huh???

Dk: Oops!! No thank yous!! I forgot!!!

Disha smiles!!

Disha told Dk that there are so thank yous.. because what ever she does for Dk its her duty!!

Dk heads off to work

Khushi is in the living room watching TV cuz she has no school

Khushi talks to Disha about that little scene

Disha: Okay Khushi i have had it w/ you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K is shocked

D: For the love of God i was fixing his button!!! I am his wife thats my job!!!!!

Khushi: You touched him!!!

They get into a fight

Little do they know that Dk was standing there listening.. so he now knows why Disha hasnt been so close because Khushi told her too!!

Dk walks back and goes to work

Later that evening Dk comes home from work

Dk goes straight into his room

Khushi goes and follows him

Dk noticed that she is behind him so he pretends to be angry

Dk throws his bag on the bed

K: What happened Daddy?

Dk: I am so mad!!!

K: At mommy?

Dk: (shocked) Why?

K: Oh um..

Dk: What makes you think i am mad at her?

K: No.. Um.. because.... anyways leave it

Disha walks in

Khushi gives her a look Disha doesnt see but Dk does

DIsha; You're back!!

Dk: Yes i am (sounding all mad)

Disha: What happened? you seem mad

Dk: Mad?? You think i am mad? Of course i am mad!! And do you know why i am mad?

Disha is like a little scared!

Khushi is happy

Dk: I am mad at you!!!!!!! (points at Disha)

Disha: Me?? Wat did i do?

Dk: Everything!!

Dk is just getting mad and Disha talks in between and then Khushi speaks in the middle

DK: Chup!!!!!!!!!! (to Khushi) When two people are talking you dont speak in the middle!!! Didnt we teach that to you? Learn to keep your mouth shut!!

Khushi is shocked

K: Daddy are you okay? why are you so mad? You yelled at me.. you never yelled at me!

Dk: Well Khushi........ Disha isnt the reason behind my angerness....

Disha; I'm not?

Dk: No... its you!!!!!!!!

Khushi: What did i do?

Dk: EVerything!!

Khushi: I dont understand

*** Just keep in mind she is 10 years old***

Dk: What did you tell Disha??????

Khushi: Huh?

Dk: What did you tell her? Not to come by me?

K is shocked!! and so is Disha

Dk: What do you think that she is ur personal assistant and what ever you tell her she will do!!!

K is sad

Disha is leaving

Dk: Where are you going?

Disha stops

Sum is calling Disha

Dk: Wait Ma!!! Disha will come in 5 mins!!!

K: I was just

Dk: You were just what? Trying to break us up!!

K: No...!!!

Dk: Then? Why are you still mad at her???? what is her fault.??

K: EVerything

Dk: You know the reason i am standing in front of you today..... is only because of Disha!!! She is the reason i am here today!!!

Disha leaves while Dk said that

Dk notices

Dk: You see she left!!!!!!

Khushi: But..

Dk: quiet!!!!!! I am not done yet...... If you keep this attitude up....... i will never forgive you again!!!!!!

K: Ur only saying this because mom told you everythiing!!!!

Dk; No she didnt... i heard ur convo today!!!!!!

K is like oops!!!

Dk: Now before i do something... leave!!!

K: But

DK: I said leave!!!!

He points at the door and she leaves

Disha and Khushi stare at each other and she maddogs Disha!!!!!!!!

Disha is sad!!

Disha goes back into the room

Dk is sitting on his bed staring at the floor

Disha sits next to him and holds his hand and puts her head on his shoulders!

Dk: why didnt you tell me?

Disha: i dont know i guess i was scared

Dk: I was wondering why you never came by me!!

Disha: She was so mad..i guess i deserve it

Dk; NO you dont!!

They talk and Khushi is in her room..... just thinking about Dk's words

K: Mom...no matter what daddy says i still wont forgive you!!!

Neha comes in Dk's room and they look at her...

She starts playing w/ them and they laugh and what not... and they forgot about everything ..

Disha is holding Neha and is kissing her..... etc....

Khushi is walking and passing by when she sees them playing w/ Neha!!!

K: She's not even part of our family!! Why do they love her more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????

Okay the end!!!!!!

Preview for tomorrow:

Khushi: (herself) She's not my sister!!! God knows where she came from!!! Mom loves her more than me!! I dont remember her playing w/ me like that!!! I better do something about this Neha before she takes away my parents from me!!!!!!!!!

And she has a mad look to her face!!!!!!!!

Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
awsome guli!!
keep up the good work!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
brilliant
write soooooooooooooon
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