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Posted: 20 years ago
Bechara D.K.
i hope Gargi's gonna help this time!!
fabulous job guli!!
cant wait to find out wat happens!!
Edited by nsa4657 - 20 years ago
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Part 91

Disha is packing her suitcase!!!!!!!!

Dk is trying to convince her... but she isnt buying it

Dk: How could you think that i can do something like this??? If i did i would die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Ur just saying that to save ur self!!!!

Dk is trying and trying but no use!!

Khushi and Dhruv (junior) are listening!!! They are 10 and they understand things now... and Khushi knows that her dad cant do anything like that!!

Disha: And i am taking my kids w/ me!!!

Dk is like even more sad!!!!

The kids walk out

Khushi: I am not going w/ mom!! i am staying w/ Daddy!!!!

Dhruv: Me too!!!!

They agree to stay w/ Dk!!!! Cuz they know he cant do something like this!!!

Back to Dk and Disha.....

Dk is still convincing but Disha is not ready to believe!!!

Dk grabs Disha's hand....

Dk: Please Disha....

Disha: Let go of my hand

Dk: Disha....

Disha: Let go of my hand

Disha is trying to free herself... when she finally does she slaps Dk......

Dk is shocked!! and so is Disha!!!!!!!!

Dk just felt like his whole world just crashed!!!!!

Jail:

Komal and Jay are celebrating!!! Gargi has heard everything!!!!!!!

Gargi thinks that i need to tell this to Disha.....

Since she is allowed to make one phone call she calls up Disha.... but Disha isnt picking up.....

Her phone is ringing but niether of them can hear it!!!!!

Gargi gets mad!!!!!

Gargi: (herself) There's only one thing to do... and that is to be friends w/ them.... but only pretend so they suspect me!!!!

Saigal house:

Disha is all packed up..... She gets the kids Dk is just sitting on the bed.... thinking of the slap

All of a sudden it starts raining.....

Disha calls the kids

Disha: Come on kids we are going to stay at Aai's house!!!!

Khushi: we arent going anywhere!!!! We are staying here w/ daddy!! We have heard everything and we think that he didnt do anything!!!!!

Disha: Fine have it ur way!!!!

Disha is even more mad......

She only takes Neha and Dev

She packs up all their things.....

DIsha takes her things and Dk is following her

Disha: Please!!!!! (puts her hands up) Dont follow me!!

Dk looks out the window and sees Disha leaving..... It is raining outside..... still and Dk has his head on in the rain.....

He just gets lost seeing Disha leave!!! He stands their for about 5-6 hours!!!!!!!!!!!

Preity passes by his room.....

(BY the way everyone knows what has happened... they try to stop her but no use)

So Preity passes by and sees Dk and comes to him

Preity: Dk??

She sees Dk is all wet and he's gotten sick..... and also the bad thing about it he's not moving at all

Preity yells and Ved and Suraj pick him up and put him on the bed

They call a doc....

Doc says... he's gone into coma!!

Everyone is shocked!!!

Disha arrives at Bhonsale house

Disha tells everything to Vijendra and Suhas

DIsha goes into her room w/ the kids

Suhas: You know.... I dont believe Dk can do something like this

Vijendra: You know whats even more strange???

Suhas: WHat?

V: I dont think either!!!

Suhas goes to Saigal house

She wants to meet Dk... but Sum tells her what happened to Dk and Suhas is shocked

SUhas: WHat?? Here let me call Disha

Sum: No dont tell her anything!! Because i know that Dk wouldnt want her to find out about him like this!!!!

Suhas agrees!!!!

Suhas stays there and then comes back home

She tells Vijendra and he is shocked as well.......

Both of them know deep down inside that Dk cant do anything like this......

Khushi is looking at Dk... and she is crying!!!!

K: Daddy.. wake up please wake up

Sia is trying to make her calm down!!!

Jail:

Gargi tries to call Disha but she's not picking up... she thinks it's Dk so she ignores it

Gargi tells the person... that she dialed the wrong number and she tries DK's cell

But Dk isnt answering either cuz his phone is in his pocket and its on silent!!!

Gargi thinks now the only way to go is to be friends w/ them... (finally)

Gargi asks if she can be in a cell next to Jay so they can talk

The police man is like are you crazy?

But Gargi convinces him that it will save 2 people's lives!!

He agrees and she is put next to Jay

Komal comes back and tells Jay that Disha has left her house and gone to her Aai's!!!

Gargi is shocked!!!!

Gargi: I am sorry i dont mean to interupt... did you say Disha?

Komal: Yes (Confused) You are?

She introduces herself.... She tells them what she did and how she's in jail because of Dk..... and agrees what they two did was right!!

Jay starts liking Gargi and they all laugh and talk together!!!!!!!!!

Gargi: (herself) You idiot!!!!!

Next day:

Disha is lighting a diva and after 5 sec it burns out...

She is shocked.....

She has some strange feeling that something isnt right!!! But cant set her mind to it

Dk is still in his little coma and the doc comes back to see him and tells the family that he has to be shifted to the hospital

Dk is admitted to the hospital!!!

Khushi cant take this and goes by Disha

She goes on her bicycle...

She arrives there and sees Disha

Khushi: I hope you are happy!!

Disha turns around and finds Khushi standing there

Khushi: I hope you are happy!!! Listen to one thing..... if anything happens to my daddy... i will never forgive you!!!!!!!

DIsha: What happened?

Khushi: Why do you care?? You left him!!!!

Khushi just leaves and Disha is like whats going on?

Khushi is riding her bicycle and is crying at the same time!!!!!

Disha is still confused... cuz she has no clue what has happened to Dk!!!

Gargi is trying to contact people but no one is answering!!!!!

She calls Saigal house... but no answer

She is thinking why isnt anyone picking up the phone!!!

She has tried calling Disha's cell, Dk's cell, and Saigal house

Gargi gives up

Komal comes the next day again

Komal: I have some more exciting news (to both Gargi and Jay)

She tells them about Dk and his coma.....

Gargi is shocked and she realizes why no one has picked up the phone.......

She then tells him that Disha doesnt know about any of it

Gargi thinks if Disha doesnt know then why isnt she picking up her phone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jay and Komal are laughing and after a while Gargi joins them... but deep inside she is thinking she has to get into contact w/ someone!!!!

Someone comes to meet Gargi in jail...... They havent given her a cell phone....... fully charged!!!

She keeps it in a safe spot!!!!

Gargi is in the corner by herself... trying to call people... but no one is getting through!!!

She put her phone on silent cuz if anyone hears she will be dead!!!

Gargi tries Disha's phone....

Disha goes and picks her phone up

Disha; Hello?

Gargi: Hello???

Disha: Hello who's this?

Gargi: I am Gargi!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is shocked!!!!!!

Disha: Yes... what do you want?

Gargi: I'm afraid i have some really bad news!!!!!

Disha; WHat??

Gargi starts talking and she loses signal

Disha: Hello?? HEllo???

She hangs up!!!!!!

Gargi is like damn!!!!!!

Disha just doesnt care what Gargi had to say she is too sad!!!!!

She tries and tries for couple of days but no use!!!!!!

It's raining still and there's wind........ There's a pix of Dk in a little frame... I dont think Disha has realized that its there... and it falls and breaks into pieces!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha turns around and is shocked

She goes and picks up the glass.... the whole thing broke and that picture was the best pix of Dk she ever had!!!!!

The photo flies away outside the window.....

Disha runs and goes and catches it......

She runs and runs and the wind is blowing it....

She is getting all wet......

The photo finally stops at the hospital where Dk is...... but DIsha doesnt know that

Disha gets the photo and she sees the family getting into the cars and going....

Disha is wondering why were they here at a hospital?

She goes inside.......and asks the receptionist..... what were they doing here?

Recep: They have a family member admitted into this hospital

Disha is shocked!!!!

The lady gives the room number and she goes

Disha goes opens the door and finds Dk there!!!

Disha is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha asks the doc what happened and he tells her that Dk is in a coma!!!!!!!

Disha is just left standing there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


The End!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Preview for tomorrow:

Disha is walking in the hospital thinking of Dk....

There are two women talking

1st woman: You know there is a man here pretending to be in a coma... so his wife would come!!!!

Disha hears this and thinks its Dk!!!!!!!!! but it really isnt!

Disha wipes her tears and goes into his room again and yells at him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
awsome guli!!! 👏 👍🏼
poor dk!
Disha is taking everything the wrong way😕😭
Edited by nsa4657 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago

That was great!!👏

Bechara DK!! He is in a coma and Disha is mad at him!!😭

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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: divyagirl

That was great!!👏

Bechara DK!! He is in a coma and Disha is mad at him!!😭


Poor Disha is confused herself!😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
good job
but let them reunite fast and some romantic scene
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Part 92

Disha is confused..... and is sad seeing Dk in this condition!

Disha: (herself) What is happening???

Disha is thinking how can he be in a coma...?? I just left yesterday!!!!

Disha has a tear in her eye, wipes it and leaves

She is walking and is having flashbacks of her leaving the house and her arguments w/ Dk..... and then him in the hospital!!!

As she is walking... Some lady is blabbering

Lady: Do you know in this hospital there is one man pretending to be in a coma!!!!!!

Disha is shocked!!!!!

Lady: Yeah he is!! His wife left him so he pretended to be in a coma so his wife would come back to him!!!!

Disha is like...

Disha: DK????

DIsha gets a angry face....and goes back into his room

Dk is still in the same position he was but Disha doesnt notice

Disha: SO you are faking so i would come!!! How could you stoop so low!!!!!!!!! You know you are the same man who i met b4 we even got married!!!!!!!!!!!!

She just yells at him and is saying bad things!!!!

In the meantime, Gargi is trying to contact Disha but her phone is at home

Gargi fianlly gives up and just puts a voicemail....

Gargi: Disha.. i know you couldnt hear me before....

And then she starts saying everything and what Jay has been doing!!!!!!

After she hangs up it pops up on her phone 1 new voicemail!!!!

DIsha is still blabbering.... Dk can here but cant react

Disha does realize this!!!!

Disha: You know you are a sick man!!!!!! Get up!! I know the truth about you!! Get up!!! Fine be that way.. but dont expect me to come back to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She leaves in a huff!!!

Dk has one tear coming from his eyes!!!!!!!!

As she walks out... There is couple fighting and Disha sees them

Wife: How could you decieve me like this?????

Man looks down

Disha looks at them

Wife: you pretended to be in a coma so i would come back to you

Disha is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Oh my god! What have i done?

She realizes her mistake and she cant face Dk anymore!!!

She puts her hand over her mouth and leaves crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She reaches home (aai's house) and she is crying on the bed!!!!!!

She grabs her phone and sees that there is a new voicemail..... but before she hears it..... Aai is calling her so she just leaves her phone there!!!

Gargi is like waiting and waiting for Disha to reply or do something!!!!

Then she puts her phone in the corner and joins Jay!!!

They have a nice laugh!!!

Disha is so miserable!!!! Because of what she said to Dk

Disha: I proved to be a bad wife!!!!!!! What have i done? I will never be able to show my face again!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone at Saigal house is all worried

No one really blames Disha for anything!! They know its all a misunderstanding!!!!!

Dk all of a sudden is moving her fingers slowly!!!!

And shakes his head and Disha's mean words are going through his head!!!

All of a sudden he's out of Coma!!!!

Doctors see him and informs his family!!!!

The family rush to the hospital!!

Khushi sees him 1st and hugs him!! (he's sitting up)

Sum sits next to him and Dk just hugs her and he is crying!!!!

The doctors release him and he goes home

He just rests on his bed!!!!

He has flashbacks of the good scenes between him and Disha and then all the bad things!!

Dk: What am i being punished for??

Dk is just crying and crying!!!!! 😭

Disha looks at her phone and sees that voicemail

She hears it when Aai comes in

Disha is about to take the phone away from her ear when she here's Gargi's voice.....

Then she cont listening and Disha is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aai sees that and she thinks what's going on?

She listens and she is shocked!!!!!

Disha goes to the cell.... but she asks if Gargi could come out..... so Jay wouldnt see her

Gargi and Disha meet

Disha asks for a private room just for the two of them and any officer can be w/ them!!

They agree

DIsha and Gargi talk

Disha: What is the meaning of ur voicemail?

Gargi: It's true!!!! I have heard everything!!! They were talking about.... i only found out when they mentioned ur name!!! And then i asked them... so i pretended to hate you guys again and Jay told me everything!! He is behind this!! and that one girl Komal comes and informs Jay everything that is going on!! From you going to your Aai's house to Dk's coma!!!! Dk had nuthin to do w/ Disha!!! It was all a misunderstanding!!!!!!!!!!

DIsha is shocked and is crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gargi: Why are you crying? you should be happy!!!!

Disha tells her what happened between the two of them and the hospital scene!!!

Gargi is shocked!!

Gargi: Disha how could you do something like this!?? You have made a big mistake not trusting ur own husband!!!!

Disha is crying!!!

Disha: I cant face Dk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gargi: You are going to have to face him!!!!

The time is up and Gargi leaves!!!!

Disha is walking back at home! thinking of everything!!!

She comes back to Bhonsale house

Disha has a picture of Dk and his holding it tight and is crying!!!!!!!!!!!

Suhas knows everything and she goes w/o Disha knowing and she goes to Saigal house

Suhas talks to Dk and tells him that She has realized the truth!!!!!!!

Dk: Truth??? What truth?

Suhas: About u and that girl!

Dk: Whats the truth?

Suhas tells her who was behind it and Dk is shocked!!!

Dk: Dont worry i will go to the police station and then come and pick Disha up myself!!!!!!

Suhas: Thank you!!!

Dk knows that Disha is feeling upset right now and she doesnt want to come face to face w/ him!!!

Suhas leaves

Dk goes to the police station and sees Jay talking to Komal.....

Dk goes

DK: Well well look at what we have here?

Gargi: You what are you doing here???

Gargi winks at Dk.... and Dk smiles!!!!

Dk: So i wonder who was trying to ruin my marriage???

Komal tries to act all innocent....

Dk gives her the hardest slap...... and at the same time tells her to shut up!!!!

Komal is like horrified!!! Jay is shocked and Gargi gets scared for a little while!!!!

Dk: Just to let you know... Disha has found out the truth!!!!! So we will be uniting!!!!!

Jay: How? Where is she?? She wont believe you!!!!

Gargi: Oh yes she will!!!!!!!!!

Jay: How?

Gargi: Because you cant separate these two!! I already tried!!!!!!!!

The inspector hears everything and arrests Komal too!!!

So everyone is rotting in jail!!!!

Dk looks at Gargi......

Dk gives her a Thank you nod!!

Gargi gives him a you welcome nod!!!!

Dk leaves and goes to Bhonsale house.....

Disha is still crying and holding Dk's photo!!!

Dk arrives and Neha and Dev hug him and he's happy to see them!!!!!

They cont playing and Dk goes into Disha's room!!!!

He closes the door really quiet... Disha doesnt even notice!!!!

Disha is faced the other way!!!!!!

Dk sits on the bed....... but she thinks it's Aai...

Disha: Aai... i am bad!! I am a bad daughter, a bad daughter in law, and most of all i am a bad wife!!!!!! Dk will never forgive me!!! He probably hates me so much and doesnt want to see me!! But i will understand because i deserve it!!

Dk is crying while listening!!!!

Dk puts his hand on her head and w/o her looking she sleep on his thigh...

Disha is like... This is not a sari....... its a pant........

She slowly looks up and sees its Dk!!!!!!!!!

Disha is like whoa!!!!!!!!!! 😕

Disha turns around..... and doesnt even look at him!!

Dk: Is my face that ugly that you dont want to see it?

Disha cries

He sits right behind her........

Dk: I have no complaints against you!!!! I know what ever you told me was because of ur angerness!!! It happens!!!

Disha gets up and stands by the window

Dk looks at her and comes and stands behind her

Dk slowly turns her around and she is looking down........

Dk lifts her chin up.... and DIsha is just crying away!!!!! ( you need buckets 😆 😆 😆 )

Dk: Why wont you say anything? i forgive you!!!

Disha just stands there as Dk is just staring at her!!!!!!!

Neither of them are moving!!!

Dk: I will not leave until you say something......... and i will not leave until you come home.... where you belong!!!!

Disha cries and goes on the floor........ (this is how bad she feels)

Dk goes down......too..... He puts his hands on her cheeks and she holds his hands!!!!

Disha finally hugs him and he is relieved!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Dk.... I am really

Dk: Dont say it!! I dont want that word coming from your mouth!!!!!!

They hug and they dont let go!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha packs up her things and finally comes home!!!!

Disha is in a bad state at the moment!!!!!!!!!!

Sia and Preity take her in the room...........

Disha just cries on the bed!!!!!!!!

DK brings food...... for her

She doesnt eat!!!! Infact she refuses

Dk: If you dont eat then i wont eat!!!!!

Disha stops crying.... and tries to feed Dk

Dk: Oh no.. i wont eat til the bite is in ur mouth!!!!

Disha: you 1st!!!

Dk: No you!!!

Dk feeds her 1st then they both eat!!!!!!

Dk takes the plate and Khushi walks in.......

Khushi: momma.. are you alright?

Disha is lost into her own world!

Khushi: Momma??

Dk walks in

Dk: Khushi.. leave her alone for some time!! She's not feeling well!!!

Khushi: Okay.. but before l leave...... I am sorry Momma!!!!

She hugs her and gives her a kiss!!!!

Dk smiles and she leaves!!!!

Dk gets ready for bed..... and Disha doesnt lie down...

Dk puts her down.......

She holds on to him..... Dk makes her let go

Dk just makes sure she is okay......... He sleeps closer to her Disha sleeps towards him... and they both go to sleep!!!!!!!

Okay the End!!!

Sorry Folks no preview!!!

And please write comments!! i am beginning to think no one is reading my stories anymore!!!! 😕
Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
awsome guli!! 👍🏼
please cont. soon!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
of course we r reading & loving them as always 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey guli nice story

everyone is reading but not commenting girl

dont feel
u have written a nice story Writing is gods gift so dont stop it continue 👏 👏 👏

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