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Part 84

Recap:

Poonam and Anand go on their 2nd honeymoon.... cuz he got out of a coma...Anand got pissed at his mom and knows that Poonam had nothing to do w/ his coma and his mom just leaves in anger

Dk hired a new secratary and she put the moves on him.. Disha heard everything and she knew Dk was innocent and Dk was relieved!

Okay now for the continuation after 1 month:

New character: (Please dont kill me) 😕 😕 It is Dk's other sister.... (real) She's married off and lives w/ her husband... they live 1 hour away from the Saigal house!!

Her name is Radhika... She hates Disha a lot because she's jealous of the fact that Disha takes good care of Dhruv and Sum......

Radhika has always called Dhruv and Sum to stay over her house but they never have.... and she blames Disha for it cuz she thinks that she might have spoiled their minds and stuff!!

Radhika's husband is gone for 1 week for a buisness trip so she decides to stay at Saigal house.....

Well not really Dk calls her over!!!!

Radhika: Bhaiyya!!!!!

Dk: Radhika.... come!!!

They both hug

She hugs everyone and everyone is happy on seeing her!

She sees Disha coming and her mood goes off

Radhika: (To herself) Well well if it isnt miss. goody goody!

Disha: Hi Radhika... how are you?

Radhika: I am alright...(to herself) Not after seeing ur face

They all sit on the sofa and start chatting.....

She sees all the kids...

Dev, Dhruv (junior), Neha, Khushi, Rohan, (ved's kid), and the quints!!!!! (Yeah right like i can remember all of them)

Sia and Priety are helping Disha in the kitchen while they are preparing dinner...

Sia and Preity come out and Radhika comes in

Disha: Arre what are you doing here? Go and sit...

R: Why you dont want me around?

Disha: No its not that..... you should take rest

R: This is my house too you know... i can do what ever i went and be where ever i want..

Disha: What i meant to say was..

R: There's no need to explain.... i understand completely...

She leaves in a huff and Disha is just there puzzled..

Disha: Did i say something wrong?

Everyone is there eating dinner.....

They are all laughing....

R is ignoring Disha on purpose but Disha doesnt understand why.... No one else notices and Radhika is doing all of this on purpose

Afterwards.. everyone starts cleaning up....

Sum is washing dishes and Disha comes over

Disha: Arre mummyji... what are you doing?? Here give them to me.. you go and relax...

Sum: Its okay!!! i can do it.... you go and give me the rest...

Disha walks out and cleans the rest outside and Radhika walks in

R: Ma. what are you doing?

Sum: What?

R: Ur washings dishes?

Sum: Yeah so...

R: Ur not supposed to be doing that... come on lets go....

Sum: But..

R: Come on Ma

Sum leaves

R: (herself): What does Disha think of herself? She wanders off and poor ma is doing dishes? What kind of Bahu is she?? I was jealous of her because i thought she took care of everything so well..... but i realized she treats everyone as her slave

Disha comes back into the kitchen and sees the dishes are still there and she starts cleaning them...

Radhika looks and smiles

R: Now thats better!!

Dk comes into the kitchen and sees Disha washing dishes...

Dk starts helping her

Disha: What are you doing??? Put them down.. i will do it... go and sit over there

Dk: Strange?? Ur doing all the work and no 1 is helping you?? I cant let you do this on ur own...

Disha smiles...

Radhika walks by and sees Dk doing dishes and gets irritated...

R: (herself) Does she control everyone or what? (calls Dk) Bhaiyya.....

Dk: Yeah...

Radhika: I have been looking for you... and u are here..

Dk: Why? Any problem?

R: No.. just wondering where you were!

Disha: Dk.. you go w/ her..i will finish these

R: (herself) Dont put on an act... you know you want Dk to help you w/ those so you can finish faster

Dk: Disha... you will never get these done....

Disha: Dont worry about me..

Dk stands up and R grabs his arms and they leave

Disha continues to wash the dishes...

Dk goes to his room and Disha is still on in the room and she finally comes in...

Dk: What took you so long?

Disha: Well... i washed all the dishes, mopped the kitchen floor and cleaned everything.... you know i dont like a dirty kitchen...

Dk: Do you realize its 11:00??

Disha: And? Someone has to do it

Dk puts his arms around her and they get all comfy...

They are both quiet later on Disha dozes of cuz she's tired and Dk notices her lyes her down gently on the bed and kisses her forehead

Next day:

The three bahus are in the kitchen preparing food and Radhika comes in...

She is just looking around and sees whats cookin'?

They all talk and dinner is done...

Priety and Sia walk out of the kitchen and its only R and Disha

R gives a mean face

Disha: What happened R? Are you alright?

R: Matter of fact no i am not.....

Disha: Why what happened?? Any problem?

R: Yes... there is a problem

Disha: what is it?

R: YOU!!

Disha is shocked

Disha: Me?

R: Yes you! WHat do you think of ur self? You think you own these people.... you treated them as if they are ur slaves

Disha is shocked

R: You make Ma do the dishes and even Dk bhaiyya... Washing dishes is a bahu's job not ur mother in law

Disha: But..

R: Dont but me.... You know.... i was jealous of you.. because mom and dad love you to bits.... and you take such good care of them.... but after seeing this...i was totally wrong... you probably poison their minds so they dont come to my place.......

Disha is shattered!

R: You think you know everything but you dont know nothing at all!

Radhika leaves in a huff and Disha is just there crying!

She goes into her room and R's words are echoing in her mind.....

Dk comes in from work and Disha quickly wipes her tears as if nothing has happened...

Dk: Disha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I missed you so much today!!!!

He hugs her from behind....

Disha: (changes her tone) Yeah yeah.....come on go and freshen up....

Dk: What? I can romance w/ my wife....

Disha: Dk....

Dk lets go after 10 mins and goes and freshens up....

Disha: (herself): I wont tell anyone what R said to me.....i will just keep it to myself.... I dont want Dk to find out... and plus if i tell him he wont believe me and i dont want to get into a fight w/ him its better if i just keep it to myself

At the dinner table.. everyone is eating... Disha is busy feeding Neha and Dev.... on her own....so she hasnt eaten yet

Afterwards... Radhika suggests everyone goes out for a while..

They all like the idea Disha decides to stay home.......

Dk: Come on Disha it will be fun.....

Disha: Its okay you go......... i dont feel like going

Dk is a little concerned

DK: Is everything okay?

Disha: Yes everything's fine.. but i dont feel like going.. you go.. Plus i havent eaten yet so you go ahead...

Dk sees her plate and just stares at her

Radhika: Oh come on Bhaiyya if she doesnt want to come she doesnt want to... lets go.. she grabs him by the arm and takes him and Dk just looks at Disha....

Disha cleans up as always.. everyone comes back and Dk still sees the plate on the table....

He goes into the kitchen and sees Disha is mopping the floor

Dk: Disha???

Disha: You guys are back??

Dk: Why didnt you eat?

Disha: I will

Dk: No you eat now.. come on..

Dk grabs her hand and takes her to the table and sits there until she eats Disha isnt in the mood

DK: Whats wrong?? Are you alright?

Disha: Yes...

Dk: Oh stop worrying about the kitchen it will be done.. you eat... work comes later

Disha: But..

Dk: Not buts come

Dk feeds her..

R sees them and sneaks into the kitchen... she sees that all the pots and pans are clean so she makes them dirty again and spills some juice on the floor and wipes it w/ a towel to make it even more sticky and walks out w/o making a peep and goes into her room!!!!

Disha finishes eating and takes her plate and goes inside the kitchen and she sees dirty pots and pans and starts cleaning them again

Dk: DIsha... this is enough.... no more... lets go....

Disha: But...

Dk: Lets go... you work way to much come on.... i will send the servant he will do it..

Disha walks and feels that the floor is sticky...

Dk: No Disha.. ur in the kitchen 24/7 spend some time w/ ur husband.....

Disha is thinking to herself: You dont understand why i am doing this... and you never will

Radhika sees Disha walking out of the kitchen and sees that its still a mess...

Radhika: She escaped???

She has a mean face........

The End!!!!!!!!!

Okay you guys..i wont cont tomorrow!!!!!!!!!

By the way... why is this post thing acting wierd... this is the 1st post where its in black..i tried changing the color but a box showed up a text box type.. is it new or something????????????? someone tell me... the size as well and the smiley's didnt even show up... its not the way it used to be


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Welcome back!!!!!

That was great!!!!👏

Plz continue soon!!!!!!😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
awsome job!!
please cont. soon!!
the color thing and smiley thing happens to me too😕...
keep up the good work!!👏👏


Edited by nsa4657 - 20 years ago
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as always awesome 👏 👏 👏
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guli444 ur bak os happy great part im enjoying cont soon👏
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that was great
plz cont soon and get radhika out of the story
she is so 😡 mean
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that was great 👏
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Part 85

Disha and Dk go into their room...

Disha is just sad!!! 😭 😭 😭

Dk: What is wrong Disha???? You seem upset

Disha: Oh no.. i am fine!

Dk: You know what you need some fresh air..

Dk takes Disha's hand and takes her out....

They go on a drive and they go the park... (@ 11 p.m. 😕 )

Dk sits against the tree and Disha cuddles against him

No one says anything and Disha feels relaxed and her tension was gone for a while and Dk noticed it

Dk: See.... i know you are feeling better

Disha: Yes i am

Dk: What are you thinking about?

Disha: How my life would have been if you werent in it?

Dk: You wouldve married some guy who was half the size you were... and wouldve had 10 kids and you would've been moti as well!!!!

Disha: Very funny!!!!

Dk just bursts out laughing and after a while she starts laughing as well!!!!!!!!

Dk: Look... i always want to know if anything is ever wrong w/ you.... but this time i took considerate and i just wanted you to calm down and relax.....and now look ur laughing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Just promise me one thing......

Dk: Anything...

Disha: Never leave me!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: I will never do that!!!!

They stay there until 12 and head back home

Next Morning:

The servants (yeah there is more than 1) are cleaning up the rest of the stuff.....

Radhika sees this and rolls her eyes

The guys are at home cuz its sunday and they have the day off

Disha goes and wakes up Neha because its 9:00 and she still isnt up.... (She's 3)

Disha touches her forehead and sees its really hot....

Disha: DK?????????????????????????

Dk is shocked and runs to see why she screamed

Dk: What happened?

Disha: Call the doctor Neha is burning up...

Dk calls the doctor and he comes right away...

He checks her and she has gotten the fever...

Doc: Here is some medicine you should give her and get them asap....

Disha; Yes doctor...

Doc: And put some cold cloths on her forehead every once in a while...

Disha: Anything else?

Doc: Yes... if anything serious happens and you cant reach me... please take her to the nearest hospital...

Dk: Thank you very much doc...

The doc leaves..

Note: Radhika doesnt know what has happened to Neha

Dk and Disha just stare at Neha......

They leave her alone for a while and let her rest

Everyone is in the living room..... Radhika planned a day w/ everyone like to have a picnic and stuff.... and Dk totally forgot about it cuz of Neha....

Dk: You guys go i will stay here...

Radhika: what is this Bhaiyya?? I planned this today.. and you say you arent coming

Disha: Yes he will.... Dk you go.... everyone you all go and i will stay here... come on she planned this.... come on go

Dk agrees after a long time...

Everyone gets ready for the picnic..... all the kids go as well...

Radhika hears Dk and Disha's convo

Dk: If you need anything just call me.. and i will come in a jiffy....

Disha: I will

Radhika: (herself): I will see how she will get through to him.. i planned this picnic for a long time and i dont want people like you ruining it for me!!!! Its bad enough you treat people as ur slaves!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone leaves they take 4 cars..... there are no cars and its only Disha and Neha...

Everyone is there and Dk cant get his mind off of Neha...

Radhika: Bhaiyya... hello.. come on

Dk: huh??? Yeah i am coming

Radhika: Looks like his mind is somewhere else

Ved comes up to Dk... w/ Suraj

Ved: Hey dont worry everything will be alright....Disha is there and if she needs anything she will call us....

Dk: Yeah i guess ur right!!

Suraj: Now come on and enjoy....

They find a place and they set a big blanket on the floor......

The guys go and kick the ball around and enjoy while Radhika, Sia, Priety and Sum watch them and smile

Dk leaves his phone on the blanket and Radhika sees it..

Meanwhile at home:

Disha is in the kitchen when she hears Neha calling her...

Disha runs and sees what has happened

Neha is having a really hard time breathing Disha sees this and calls the doc but no one is answering and then she calls Dk cell...

Radhika... is alone sitting while the other three are taking a little walk....

Radhika hears his phone

She picks it up and b4 she says hello

Disha: Dk.. please come home fast... (B4 she could finish R interupts)

Radhika: Hello.....Hello???????

Pretends she cant hear

Disha: Hello????? Who??? Radhika?? Please give it to Dk....

R: Hello???????

After she hangs up and gives an evil smile

Disha is panicky... and she tries Ved's phone but its too loud and he cant hear his phone breathing...

Neha is having trouble and Disha is going crazy...

She calls Suhas

Suhas: Hello?

Disha: Aai..... please come fast.. i need a car.. everyones not here and i dont know what has happened to Neha...

Suhas is shocked and comes quickly and they both rush to the hospital....

Neha is admitted......

Disha is sitting on the bench and is crying and Suhas is consoling her

Dk sees his phone and calls up Disha but no one is picking up

Dk: Strange i wonder where she went

He calls up her cell but she has left it at home

Dk gets worried that Disha isnt picking up...

R: Dont worry i am sure everything is fine.....

Dk: I hope so!

Disha is getting even more worried because the doctors are still checking up on her....

She is sitting on the floor and is just still as a statue...

Afterwards... Suhas goes and calls Dk's cell....

Dk picks up and Radhika gets scared

Dk: Hello??

Suhas: Hello?? DK??? Where are you??

Dk: Why??

Suhas: (explains what has happened and Dk is shocked)

He tells the family members and they all leave for the hospital....

Radhika: 😡 this just had to happen to today!!!!!!!!!

They arrive at the hospital

Dk sees Disha on the floor and goes to her and she cries his arms....

Dk: Nothing will happen Sshh.... calm down

The doctor finally comes out

Disha quickly gets up

Doc; It seems like she has got some infection that is going on and she is still a little weak......

Dk: Is she okay

Doc: Yes she is.... i have given her some medication and she will fine in no time

Disha: Can we take her home?

Doc: Yes... but just give me 1 hour...

They agree and DIsha is happy

Radhika: (herself) This ma beti ruined my day.... 1st Disha.... and now 2nd this stupid virus

Neha is discharged from the hospital and arrives home

Dk is holding her in his arms and takes her to the room he puts her down....... and Neha is holding on to his shirt and doesnt let go.......

Dk just stays there next to her... and caresses her forehead

Disha comes in and sees that

Disha: Dk... you watch her..... and i will go get her medication...

Dk: NO.. you stay here w/ her let me go and get them...... and i will get her a few toys.....

Dk leaves and Radhika comes in

Disha is just there caressing her head

R: Well i hope ur happy

Disha: What did i do now?

R: You ruined our day... well ur daughter did

Disha is shocked and sad

DIsha; Hey thats ur neice ur talking about

R: So.. does it look like i care

Disha: Okay you know... i dont want to argue w/ you..... My daughter is fine and DK went to go get her medicines...

R: I knew i shouldnt have given his phone back to him

Disha is shocked

DIsha: (She figures out that Radhika did that on purpose) what is ur problem???????

R: I cant stand you!!!!!!!!!!

Radhika looks her at and she leaves....

Disha sits back down on the bed and is crying and is really sad!!!!

She feels like telling Dk everything but is scared that he might not believe it which might cause an argument

Couple of days later:

Azuba comes and visits Disha... and DIsha is really happy to see him!!!!!!!!!

Disha: how are you?

Azuba: I am great!!! I was dying to see you so i came down

Disha: You should come down more often

Azuba: where is everyone?

Disha; They are all doing their own things

Azuba: I heard about Neha.... how is she?

Disha: She is better!!!!!

They sit and talk and by the way Disha is talking Azuba feels that there is something wrong with her

Azuba: Disha u arent ur self.... what happened?

Disha: Nuthing is wrong... everything is fine... just fine

Azuba: Now can you look at me straight in the eye and tell me that

Disha looks down......

Azuba: You cant hide anything from me......Come on tell me

Disha tells every single thing to Azuba about Radhika and all the things she has said

Azuba is shocked.....

Disha: Now you tell me what should i do??? Everything in her mind about me is all negative............

Azuba: Just give it time and evrything will be fine

Disha hugs Azuba....

Behind the door......... none other than Dk is standing and he has heard everything what Disha has told Azuba

Dk: This is what has been bothering her....... Radhika... how could she do this?? Poor Disha..... i should be supporting her in a time like this but she doesnt want me to find out................. i better do something about Radhika....................


The end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay i will cont tomorrow.....

i really hate this...... i cant add colors or smiley!!!!!!!!!! man you leave for a month and everything changes!!!!!!!!



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