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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 86

Dk and Disha are in Cancun Mexico..... (hey mexico... no trips in Mexico... its different)

Dk and Disha are at the beach and Disha is just sitting and relaxing.... Dk is dying to go in the water.....

Dk: Disha... lets go in the water

Disha: No.. not me!!!!

Dk: Why not?

Disha: No... i get scared.....

Dk: What??? Oh come on... i am there

Disha: No way!!!! and plus the water is too cold

Dk: DIsha..... come on... ur ruining the mood!!!!

Disha: Go...

Dk leaves and DIsha is watching him go

Disha: Be careful and dont go to far

Dk: Yes mother

DIsha smiles!!

Dk goes....

Dk: I will see how she doesnt come

Disha keeps a good eye on him and he goes and goes and goes..... and DIsha gets are paranoid......She stands up

Disha: (yells really loud) Dk!!!!!!!! dont go to far......... All of a sudden a big wave comes and Dk cant be seen.... cuz he's under water.... and Disha runs into the water and gets all wet and is yelling and yelling for Dk and starts crying......

She has her back turned and DK pops out from the water and hugs her from behind

Disha: Dk... dont do that!!!!! you scared me!!!

Dk: Hey it was the only way to get you here!!!

Disha didnt even realize it.... til now!!!!

Disha and Dk just play in the water and splash each other and Disha splashes so much water on him and DK chases her and DIsha runs for her life.......

she runs into their hotel lobby and goes by the pool and they run around the pool.... and he finally grabs her arms and they both lose their balance and fall in the pool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They both hug each other and smile and are just in thier own worlds.........

They both go back to their rooms and takes a shower and freshen up...

Meanwhile back at home:

Sum is sitting on the couch and Radhika comes down and sits beside her

Radhika: Ma, i want to talk to you

Sum: What?

Radhika: I have thought about this long and hard..... about Disha

Sum: what mean thing are you going to say about her now?

Radhika: Ma... please

Sum: Wat do you mean please? Do you know how much you hurt the poor thing?? And if she is hurt Dk is hurt even more..... and when my children are hurting i cant take it

Radhika: I Know i know!! i said some mean things to her.....I guess i was just mad and jealous at the same time

Sum: Jealous??? OF what?

Radhika: How good she takes care of you guys.... and she does a good job.... and then i was thinking that after watching you wash dishes that she's a mean person and treats you like a servant...... and i thought becuz of her you dont come and stay w/ me

Sum: You have ur house to handle.... and it wouldnt look right if we came there..... i mean yes we come and visit..... but staying there... we dont think its right.... and plus there are a lot of people in this house.... we have to look after them... and everyone is always gone so someone has to be here and when it comes to Disha she was never like that..... infact she takes good of this family very well....... she loves us and loves Dk a lot....

Radhika: I know..... i can see that

Radhika.. agrees and comes in terms w/ herself and takes away her angerness from Disha..... and sees what a good person she is inside!!!!!!!!!

She smiles and walks off!!

Meanwhile next door neighbors Anand and Poonam.... they come back from thier little honeymoon

Anand: feels good to be back home!!!

They relax cuz they just got back and later on Poonam un packs everything

Poonam falls asleep and Anand is on the couch cuz for some reason he cant sleep..... all of a sudden his mom comes

Anand: You?? what are you doing here?

Mom: I have come here to take you

Anand: Look.. i have said this b4 and i will say it again.... i am not going anywhere!!!!!!!!!!

mom: but why?

Anand: Why??? You almost destroyed my marriage.. thats why

Mom: I know it was my mistake....

Anand: You know mom.....i am not going to argue w/ you.... no means no!!!!!!

Mom: You know... i came here w/ a cool mind....... but i know that wife of yours probably put some poison in your mind... or else you would've come with me

Anand: BUs!!!!!!!!!!!! I have had enough... b4 i say something i shouldnt... it will better if you just leave

Mom: What say it??? Go ahead...... But you watch i will not spare her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She leaves and Anand is sad!!!!!!!

Anand goes and lies down next to poonam and just looks at her

Anand: (himself): No matter what happens no one will ever separate us!!!!!

Cancun:

Dk is sleeping on the bed and Disha comes sits next to him..... he turns around and puts his head on her thigh....

Disha: What do you want to do?

Dk: Sleep!!!

Disha: Dk...

Dk: Just kidding!!!!

Lets go and just walk around and enjoy this place

They walk and go site seeing and just looking at the beatiful place..... and the water is so clean and blue........... feels nice!!!

Dk and Disha sit on chairs by the pool and enjoy thier drinks....

There are some guys behind the table and just talking... about thier childhood days.....

Disha gets up and excuses herself and goes to the bathroom

Dk is just sitting there and the guys behind him are just laughing hard...

Guy: When i was young....i use to beat up this guy.... his name was Sunny!!!!! What a whimp!!! he always used stand up for people and he was a shrimp!!!

Dk is shocked hearing this... (cuz his so called name is Sunny)

Guy: His mom always ran after me w/ a broom.... she was the same!!!!!!!!!! i found a picture the other day..... he holds a picture up....

All of a sudden there is wind... and it blows away and it comes by Dk's feet and he picks it up and it is him...... but you cant really tell now that.. that's how he looked like b4!!!!

Guy: Oh sorry man!!!!!

Dk reconizes him right away!!!! but doesnt say anything

Dk: Its okay!!!!

Guy 2: Come on Jay!!! (his name)

Jay: I am coming!!!

He leaves and DK just stares at him and flashbacks of their childhood!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jay always beat the crap out of Dk!!!!!!!! He never knew that Dk's name was Dushyant Kumar Sehgal!!!! Everyone always called him Sunny.... so thats what he was known as

Dk looks like he's about to explode but then cools down!!

Disha comes back....

Disha: What happened?

Dk: Huh??? Oh no nothing!!!!!!!

Disha; Are you sure?

Dk: Yeah!!!!

Jay is still bragging about Dk........ How weak and hopeless Dk was

Guy 2: Where is he now?

Jay: Who knows he's probably living some sorry life!!!!!!!!

Guy: What makes you so sure?

Jay: If you saw him... you would think the same... look at me... i came out all right!!!! it would be fun seeing him again!!! so i can embarrass him one more time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gives a good smile!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk and Disha past them........ Jay doesnt notice but Dk does!!! He turns around and looks at him..........

Okay you guys the end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




silk opal thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: guli444

rano had a baby boy!!! then i kicked her out!!!! lol!!!!!! 😆

that's very mean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11😡

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Posted: 20 years ago
the only exciting thing was the pool........................................................ . 😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
great job!
please continue soon!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
Hi Guli444,

You are amazing. You are so creative, bringing new characters into your story with their past and connecting DK and Disha's storyline so effortless. Well so it seems.

Keep up the good job! 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago

👏That was great!!! Thanks!!😃 Can't wait for the next scene!!!👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 87



In the hotel room:

Dk is just taking a quick nap so Disha decides to go down by the pool and sit there...

Jay is there w/ his friends and spots Disha.....

Jay: Wow!!!!!!! Isnt she the most beautiful person you have ever seen?

They all look

Jay: I am going to make her mine!!!!!!!!!!!

Guy: No way!!!! She's probably married

Jay: So!!!! Who cares!!!!! What ever Jay wants gets!!!! That was me back in the day.... What ever Sunny had i took!!!!!!!! boy did i hate him or what?!!!!! Anyways forget about the past and lets get on w/. the present

Jay keeps looking at Disha and gets up and walks up to her

Jay: Hello!!!

Disha: (not interested) Hi!!!! (roles her eyes)

Jay sits down.......

Disha: Sorry.. but i have to go!!!!!!

She leaves and goes back to her room

Jay: what???? That has never happened to me... no girl just doesnt walk away!!!!! Wow!!!! i am loving it!!! i love her!!!!!

Jay thinks about Disha night and day in his sleep..... while watching tv... 24/7......

Dk and Disha are enjoying themselves.....

Dk: Disha....i love it here!!! i wish we can move here w/ the kids!!!!

Disha: Wouldnt it be nice?

Dk: YEs!!!!

They both talk about it.... and get lost into it

2 more days b4 the trip is over.....

Jay is like looking for Disha... and spots her...... he is walking up to her.... he doesnt see Dk next to her...... and before he goes to her..... his friend calls him so he doesnt see Dk

Jay: What????? MAn... you ruined my chance!!!! One day she will be mine!!!!!!!!!!!!

In the morning:

There is a knock on the door and Disha opens it.... someone sent her flowers......

Disha: FLowers for me!!!!!!! WOw!!!!

She reads the card...... "To the woman of my dreams"

Disha: This are from Dk... how cute

Not really Jay has sent them!!!!

Disha: Dk... you shouldn't have!!!!!!!

Dk: What?

Disha: Sent these flowers

Dk: What flowers?

Disha: Now stop pretending!!!!!!! I know they are from you

Dk: Huh??

DIsha: Stop it Dk.... you dont have to pretend anymore!!!!

Dk: (himself) But i didnt!!!!!

Dk just like goes what ever!!!

Couple of hours later:

DK and Disha come back and go to thier room and there are flowers all over the room

Disha is like so surprised and she is smiling

Dk: Wow this is nice!!!!!! but who could've done it!!!!!!

Dk is puzzled!! Disha is smiling!!!

Dk and Disha finally leave.......the place

Jay enquires about Disha but finds out that she has already left....

He feels bad!!!!

Jay was also on a vacation so he leaves too!!!!!

Dk and Disha are on the plane... excited to go back home and see everyone......

They reach home and everyone is happy that they are back and the kids go crazy and hug them.......

Jay reaches home as well..... and surprisingly ... (is that how u spell it 😕) Jay lives only 15 mins away from the Saigal house!!!!!!

He works at one of Dk's companies... but he doesnt know it!!!!!! Because they have never met!!!!!! He has heard of Dk Saigal but never seen him!!!!!

( and he calls himself a big shot)

Dk and Disha see Radhika.... who is still there... she's probably leave in 2-3 days!!!

Radhika looks on from far away but Sum has already told her about Radhika... so Disha doesnt care

Disha: Radhika... why are you standing there??? Come here

She is shocked

DK: Why?

Disha: BEcause!!!!!

DK is still bitter

Radhika apologizes to the both of them and starts crying and she hugs DIsha......

Dk finally gives in and accpets... now everyone is one big happy family!!!!

Dk, Ved, and Suraj have a big big meeting w/ all of the employees who work at thier companies....... and Jay also comes......

Dk doesnt see him.... and neither does Jay.....

Later on... Dk is walking and so is Jay and they bump into each other....

Jay: Oh i am sorry

Dk: I am sorry.......

They look at each other

Jay: Werent you..???

Dk: Yup!! thats me... you here?

Jay: I work here...

Dk: Oh you do!!

Jay: You work here too???

Dk: Well kind of..... I am Dk Saigal....

Jay: OH my god!! Hello Sir!!!! How are you?

Dk: FIne!!!

Dk feels proud... he called him Sir!! and Jay what an idiot!!!!

Dk: (himself) You bossed me around... my how the tables have turned!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk smiles and walks off!!!!

The meeting takes place and they just talk about things!!! it finishes and everyone goes back and does their work

Disha, Sia, Preity, and Radhika.. go shopping.... Apparently Jay is on his 15 min break and is just standing there on the road... and his face turns and sees Disha....

Jay: That girl.................

Jay is so happy...

Jay: She lives here!! the girl of my dreams lives here!!!!!! oh wow!!!!!

Jay walks up to her...........

Disha ignores him.......

Jay: Hey werent you over there......?????

DIsha: Huh?? who are you?

Jay: Hello.. my name is Jay? and ur's

Disha: None of ur buisness

The other three arent there w/ her

Jay: When i found out you left from there i was heart broken

Disha: What???? Are you crazy?

Jay: Crazy about you!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is disgusted 😡

Jay: I hope you liked my flowers that i sent you

Disha: YOU sent those??????????????????

Jay: YEs!!!

Disha: I am married!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jay: SO!!!! Jay doesnt care..... i get what i want

Disha: Not this time

And she walks off

Jay: Wow!!!! what a spice!!!!

Disha goes up and is so mad....... she is pacing back and fourth

Disha: What does he think of himself???

She is fuming

Dk walks in.. and he sees Disha

DK: Who are you talking to?

Disha: No one

Dk: You seem angry???

Disha; YOu got that right

Dk: what happened?

Disha: You wont believe this........

Disha explains everything to him...... about Jay from Cancun and what happened today.... Dk is getting pissed

Dk: Who is this guy?

Disha: He said his name was Jay

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DK: WHat????????? That *astard!!!!!!!!! i will kill him!!!!!!

DIsha: You know him

Dk: Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: How????????

Dk tells her the whole story from childhood...... and everything from how he made Dk's, and Sum's life a living hell and how he works for their company!!!

Disha: Why didnt you tell me?

DK: I was scared!!!

Disha: OF what??

DK: That you might laugh or something...

DIsha: Why would i do that???

Dk: I dont know.... i was nervous!!!! But i told you

Disha: So wat are you going to do

Dk: teach him a lesson... and listen... dont tell Ma about this

Disha: I wont!!!!

Next day:

Jay is informed that he has just been fired!!!!!!! (Laid off).... and is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!! He doesnt understand why!!!

Jay: What is going on? I have never been fired.... he gets all mad and comes to talk to Dk..... Dk watches this and smiles!!!!!!!!!!!

Jay: Excuse me Sir...... what is this?

Dk: What is what?

Jay: This... how can i be fired???????

Dk: I am sorry!!!! You arent the only one.... we had to let go of a few people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And sorry to say you were one of them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jay: But where will i work?

Dk: I dont know!!

Jay leaves............. Dk is happy!!!!!

Jay is walking thinking...... how can this happen to him?

He is lost thinking about that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He passes someone...... doesnt see who... .. the person is Sum....

Jay stops and thinks about it but keeps walking

Sia is walking towards Jay and is yelling for Sum... Sum turns around and finds her...

Jay looks at Sia..... and turns around and sees Sum........

Jay thinks i have seen this person b4....

He thinks and thinks and finally he remembers the flashbacks... and thinks that's Sum.... Sunny's mom!!!!!!!!!!!

He follows them both... til the house.... and sees.... he doesnt see the board "Saigal house" He decides to go there and pay a visit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not really......

He walks to the door and knocks on the door!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The End!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have to write something tomorrow!!!!!! cant write everything today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Posted: 20 years ago
guli, you should really consider writing on romances. Real author. Danielle Steel (on of my favourite author) writes on romances too. she is listed on Guiness Book of World Records. i am sure you will also be listed on the Guiness. 😉 let the world read your books!
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: silk opal

guli, you should really consider writing on romances. Real author. Danielle Steel (on of my favourite author) writes on romances too. she is listed on Guiness Book of World Records. i am sure you will also be listed on the Guiness. 😉 let the world read your books!

Yeah....you should consider writing!!! Your stories are great!!!👏😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
brilliant guli
keep it up
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