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Posted: 20 years ago

thanks alot for

another great long part

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Posted: 20 years ago

the story is brilliant👏👏👏

plz can you write the next part today😊

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Posted: 20 years ago

great story

keep it up!👍🏼

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Posted: 20 years ago
Gr8 story plz keep it up!!!!!👏👏
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Posted: 20 years ago

awsome Story

pleeeaze continue........soon😳

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Posted: 20 years ago

woo thta was real good!!!!!!!!!!!

plese continue!!

later

Goldi2

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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 63

Hey i just made up the new zealand part... so i dunno where they went..... 😕😕😕


It is Dhruv (Senior) and Sum 40th Anniversery!!!!! Everyone is planning a surpirse party for them!!!!

The kids want it to be extremely special for them..

Dhruv and Sum are in the living room (Just them two)

Dhruv: Happy Anniversery!!

Sum: 😳😳😳 You too!!

Dhruv: I have been married to you for 40 years...... and they have been the greatest 40 years of my life!

Sum: 😳😳😳

Dhruv: But listen... i dont think the kids remember what today is so just act normal!

Sum: I am pretty sure they know!!

Dhruv: Well they have been really busy for the past couple of days.. so who knows

They hear everyone coming out from their rooms

Dk: Hey listen.... we have to go to a really important buisness meeting today.... so we wont have dinner!! and we will be taking the girls!

Dhruv: Buisness dinner?? Sure no problem!!!

Sum: Dont be back too late though!!!

Dk: We wont dont worry!!!

Dhruv and Sum are upset but they dont show it
So they leave a little early (Their Party is in a hotel) and everything is just right........ the guests have arrived and now the question is.. how to get Dhruv and Sum here?

On the walls there are pictures of Sum and Dhruv w/ the kids and there are collages

Dk calls up Dhruv

Dhruv: hello?

Dk: Dad.. i have a big problem!!

Dhruv: What happened??

Dk: Our car broke down and we are stuck....

Dhruv: Where are you?

Dk: We are here in front of this hotel standing out in the cold......

Dhruv: Dont worry i will come and pick you up

Sum: What happened?

Dhruv: There car broke down

Sum: What??

Dhruv: Yes i will go

Sum: You cant go this late

Dhruv: Well what do you want me to do?

Sum: Look i will come w/ you!!

Dhruv: Kids.... we will take them too!!

(Which doesnt make sense.. where they gonna fit 😆😆😆)

Dhruv: How will they fit?

Sum: Well...

Dhruv: Okay we will call and get 2 more cars.......

So they head over and Dhruv arrives at the place where Dk had told them but they are not seen

Dhruv calls Dk on the cell

Dhruv: Where are you?

Dk: We are inside......

Dhruv: Okay we will wait

Dk: Why dont you come?? So i can introduce you to some people......

Dhruv gets convinced and Sum follows........ They go and Dhruv calls Dk again and gives him directions...... They open the door and BAAM!!!!!

SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!!

They are both speechless and Dk, Disha, Ved, Sia, Suraj, Preity, Anjali, and Rohan are standing in one line in front!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They get their blessings and Sum is in tears! and Dhruvs getting emotional as well!!!!

Sum: We thought you forgot!!!!

Dk: How could we forget???

Everyones there their family and friends and everyone is having a good time

Sum looks around at all the pictures and she has flashbacks of when the kids were little........

She gets lost for a while but then comes back

They enjoy the party and they go around and says hi to everyone and hugs them!!!!


Couple of days later:

Its raining really really really hard outside and Disha has the urge to go out in the rain..

Disha: Dk.... I will be back!!!

Dk: Your not going in the rain

Disha: How did you know?

Dk: Disha.. i know you like a book..... i know how you cant help going in the rain?

Disha: Oh please Dk just once.....

Dk: No!!!

Disha: Dk.... i am going!!!

Disha runs outside and Dk is following her

Disha is soaked and spinning around and Dk is watching her and hes dry

Disha: Come on Dk.... look how much fun it is!!!

Dk: I dont like getting wet!!! Disha come back in.. you will get sick!!

Disha: So!!!

Dk: Disha????/

Disha: Please 5 more min!!!

Dk: No now!!

Disha: You'll have to catch me 1st!!!!

Dk: Disha.. i know you want me to come its not going to work!!!!

Disha: Okay then....


Disha is acting like a little kid and is just really enjoying herself.....

Disha pretends to faint and she falls and Dk rushes to her and tries waking her up...... he picks her up and takes her inside.. both of them are wet!!!!!

Dk: Disha..... Get up!!! Disha.....

Disha opens her eyes

Disha: Got you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She starts laughing!!!!😆

Dk: Disha.. you scared the crap out of me!!

Disha: I am sorry but i got you wet!!!!

Disha is just laughing and laughing and then Dk starts to laugh too.....

Preity goes outside in the rain too. w/ an umbrella. its not like she wants to but there were clothes outside and she went to go get them......

Suraj: What are you doing??

Preity: I am getting these clothes.... you go back inside

Suraj comes out and gets all soaked.....

Preity: Now ur all wet.... go inside...

Suraj: I love this whether!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Preity is holding clothes in one hand and trying to hold her umbrella and Suraj is standing behind her.... and he takes her hands

Preity: What are you doing?? I dont want to get wet!!

Suraj: Why?

Preity: Because.....

Suraj: And what if i get you wet!!

Preity: I Wont talk to you!!!!

Suraj: Yes you will!!!

Preity: No i wont!!

Suraj: Okay then!!

He tries getting the umbrella but fails everytime...... Preity takes all the clothes and puts it where they are dry...... Suraj, like disha.. enjoying this too..... Suraj takes a shirt and puts it on the floor making it look like that she dropped one....

She notices and runs back to pick it up...

When she is running back Suraj is there and is blocking her

Suraj: I am not going to let go of you so easily!

Preity: Please....

Suraj: No.....

She walks to left.. he gets in front of her... she goes to right.. he's there again!!

Finally he takes the umbrella and throws it grabs her in the middle and she is soaked....

Preity: Suraj!!!!!!!!!!

Suraj: I am sorry.. but i cant see you dry especially when the whether is like this!!!!!!

Preity is standing there and Suraj comes and hugs her from behind and both of them are enjoying..... he lets go and they are just standing there.....

All of a sudden there is thunder and lightening and Preity quickly turns around and hugs Suraj tightly cuz she is scared like crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i will cont after dance class.......... bye!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

that was awsome😊

pleaze continue

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Posted: 20 years ago

ya me too it was awsome!!!

later

Goldi2

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Posted: 20 years ago
plz keep it ^!!!!! it's awesome!!!!!!!!!!👏

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