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Part 65

Everyone is talking in the living room and Dk and Disha are inside their rooms... playing w/ Neha....

There's some inspector that comes in w/ these people from the adoption center

Sum: Yes.. can we help you?

Person #1: Yes... we are looking for Mr. Dk Saigal... does he live here?

Sum: Yes...hold on let me get him

She goes and gets Dk and he comes out

Dk: Yes.. how may i help you?

Person: Hi..... We found out that you have adopted a little girl is that true?

Dk: Um.. (confused) Yes... why?

Person: Well.. she does have parents and they want their daughter back!

Everyone is shocked!!!!!!!

Dk: What?

Person: You see.... the little child was kidnapped from the hospital and the parents finally found her.... so...

Afterwards the parents of Neha pop up from behind and everyone is just looking

Dk is worried and doesnt know how to react and is thinking about Disha...wat will her reaction be??!!

Disha comes out w/ Neha and sees these people

Dk: Disha?????

Disha; What happened?? Who are they? (looking @ the parents)

Dk: Um... Disha.. (Stuttering like crazy)

Disha: What's wrong????

Dk: They are....... Neha's parents and they want to take her...

DIsha is like 😲....

Disha: What???????????????????????

Person: Yes..... (he explains everything to her)

Disha: No..... (starts screaming) No.. i am not going to give her to you!!! She is my daughter!!!

Dk is like oh man.... this is bad!!!😕

Person: I am sorry maam but we have to do what we have to do....The girl has to live her parents

Disha: I am her mother!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am not going to give you to her

Dk: Disha..

Disha: Dk.. how come your not telling them anything??????? She is my daughter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Still yelling!!!

Dk comes closer to Disha and tries taking Neha.. because he really has no other option

Disha: No Dk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am not going to give these people our daughter

Neha's real parents are looking at them and are sad 😭

After a long time... Dk gets Neha... and he is about to cry but doesnt show it... and gives them Neha..

Disha: NO.... Dk.... (she is literally throwing tantrums and Sia and Preity are calming her down)

Disha: No... DK.... how could you.......... I want my daughter back

SHe is crying soooo much and Dk doesnt know wat to do...


DIsha; How could you give them my daughter....

She falls on her knees and is crying so much

Dk: Disha.....

DIsha: No... Dk.. i want my daughter... they took my daughter away..

Dk is trying to calm her down

Disha; How could you DK??

Dk closes his eyes and everyone is watching and is sad😭😭😭

Disha: I want my daughter

She keeps repeatin this over and over again........

After a while... Disha is just sitting on the floor staring into space and having flashbacks of Neha.....

Dk tries getting her up...

Disha: No.. leave me alone....

Dk: Disha...

Disha: Dk.. i want my daughter...... Do you understand??? I want my daughter....... Until i get her back... i will stay here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is worried and doesnt know what to do!!

Dk: I am sorry Disha.... but we had no choice did we...

Disha: She is our daughter........Dk.. i cant live w/o my daughter...

Dk: How do you think i feel?????

Disha keeps crying and Dk has tears in his eyes as well.....

Dk finally takes Disha into their room

Dk goes out and brings back food

DK: here Disha.. you havent eaten anything all day...

Disha: No i am not hungry.....

Dk: Please eat something!!!!!!

Disha: I dont want food i want my daughter.....

Dk is totally helpless

The gang except Sum and Dhruv come inside

Ved: Dish..... come on eat some food

Suraj: Bhabhi.. please eat something look we wont eat until you have something!!!!

Disha: (YELLS) I DONT WANT FOOD I WANT MY DAUGHTER........

And cries on the bed... everyone is looking at one another....

Preity: Bhabhi.. if you break down like this.. what will happen to the kids???? You have three....

Disha: But i want my 4th child!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant live w/o Neha........ i want her!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Disha.... try to understand..

Disha: I dont want to understand nothing!!! All i want is Neha..do you have her???

In the middle of the night:

Disha is still crying and Dk is awake with her.....

Dk: Come on Disha... Go to sleep!

Disha: How can i???

She gets up and looks and is touching the crib and is looking that no one's in it!!

Dk comes behind her and Disha hugs him

Disha: My neha!!!!!!!!!! I miss her so much!!😭

Next Morning:

Dk wakes up.. even though he got a couple of hours of sleep.... and he looks at Disha who is sleeping... he caresses her head and she has a really high fever and has fallen sick...

The gang comes in the room

Ved: Brother.. how is she?

Dk: She is really sick. she is burning up. i think we need to call a doctor

Everyone is shocked......

The doctor comes and does a check up on her.....

Doc: She is really sick.. she needs to eat something or her condition will get worst.. and her temp is 114 degrees!!!!

Dk is shocked

Doc advises to give her liquids and gives them a prescription so they can get medicine for her!!!!!

DK is just looking her and is sad!!

Dk: In one day.. so much happened!!

Sia: What is she going to do?

Dk: Last night.... she didnt even sleep.. she kept on thinking about Neha......

Ved: Brother... you had no choice...

Dk: Disha was so attached to her like anything else!

They all leave and Dk is putting cold cloths on her forehead..... and is crying😭😭

After a couple of hours.. Disha opens her eyes

Dk: How are you feeling??

Disha is a little weak and cant get up on her own... Dk helps her sit up!

Disha starts crying again

Dk: Please Disha..... you have cried enough... no more..

Wipes her tears

Disha: What can i do??

Dk: Disha.. you are going to have to let go sometime

Dk is still trying to control her.. Suhas and Vijendra walk in

Dk: Aai.. come

Suhas: Disha??

Disha: 😭 Aai......... They took my daughter away!!!!!!

Suhas: No Disha..... you musnt cry!!!!

Disha cries on Suhas lap

Vijendra comes and sits next to her

Disha: Papa.. i want my daughter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Both of them are speechless and they dont know what to do or what to say!!

Dk comes out of the room and lets them stay with her for a little while... he goes and sits on the sofa and his hands over his face!!!!!!!! Sum comes there and sits next to him

Sum: Sunny....

Dk; Ma... what am i going to do??

Sum: Look i know what you must be going through...

Dk: They took our daughter away.. and i know she went w/ her real parents.....but i cant see Disha like this!!!!

Sum: You must be brave in a time like this!

Dk: I mean where were they all this time??? Now all of a sudden they decide to take her away!!! In a way thats not right.. but what other option do we have?

Sum: You must take care of Disha.... make sure nothing happens to her!

Dk: Ma.. nothing will happen to her... nothing!! I am there every sec w/ her.. i am not leaving her until she becomes better!!!!

Suhas and Vijendra come out of the room

Suhas: Dk??

Dk looks at her and he hugs her.......

Suhas: No Dk....I know this is a hard time for the both of you.. but have courage....

He lets go and after a couple of mins.. they leave and Dk goes and sees Disha......

Disha is looking at a picture of Neha... and is holding it close to her!!

Dk looks on

In the middle of the night Neha is crying and crying and her parents dont know what to do.... they are calming her down........

(Note: Picture this scene as if you only see a mother holding her child and making her calm down.. you dont see the inside of the room or nothing like that... you will find out later)

Neha is crying and crying.. meanwhile Disha gets up

Disha: Neha!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: what happened?

Disha: Something is wrong.. i can feel it.. Neha is not alright!!!

Dk: Its probably just your imagination.. go back to sleep

Disha: No.. i know something is not right!! My Neha.. is in trouble.......


Neha is still crying and her mom cant calm her down.. her husband is giving his wife a hard time and is shouting on top of her crying.....

Husband: Can you please make her shut up???

Wife: I am trying i dont know whats wrong

Neha is just crying away and the husband slaps his wife and tells her to make her shut up.... and she goes downstairs... and tries calming her down there....

Picture like there is nothing there... the room is empty or something! Pretend that you dont see anything on the floor.....

Disha is getting jittery

Disha sleeps closer to Dk and is facing him.... Dk later realizes that DIsha is closer to him and he puts a blanket around her and kisses her!!

Couple of days pass by and Disha is still not in the mood for anything... Dhruv (junior) Comes and sits next to her.... Disha doesnt realize that he is there.... cuz she is lost in Neha's thoughts!

Disha gets up from there and goes into her room... that was the only 2 mins that she was out of the room because shes there all day and all night

Dk: Come on Disha.. get out of the room.. go do something!

Disha: No.... i am not in the mood!!

Dk: Lets go out somewhere.. maybe it will take your mind off for a little while!!

Disha: No... nothing is possible when my daughter is not with me!!

Dk: Disha... please....

Disha: No!!!!

Dk gets a call from the inspector but Dk doesnt say anything and listens

Inspec: Mr. Saigal.. i need to meet you urgently.... can you please come down now?

Dk: Sure.... why what happened?

Inspec: I Cant tell you over the phone....

Dk: Okay i will be there!!!!

W/o telling anything to Disha he just goes out.... Disha is just there!😕

Dk goes to the police station

Dk: Inspector

Inspec: Mr. Saigal.. please sit...

Dk: What happened?? i hope everything is okay!

Inspec: Well... 1st of all can i ask you a couple of questions about your adopted daughter Neha?

Dk: Sure!

Ins: Now.. what ever i am about to tell you... you have to give me an honest answer!! and please do not lie!!

Dk: Certainly!

Ins: Was Neha ever a problem to you guys?

Dk: Never!!

Ins: Was she taken care of properly?

Dk: Of course!! But why are you asking?

Ins: DId she ever give you trouble?

Dk: No at all!

Ins: Did she ever fall sick?

Dk: Um.. yes in the middle.. but it was a little cold.. i mean all kids get that!

Ins: I see.... well I am afraid to tell you that Neha is not safe where she is living right now!!!!!!!!!

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

Dk: WHy????????

Ins: Because we were getting complaints from their neighbors about Neha crying the whole night and there was shouting...

Dk cant believe his ears

Ins: And... so we had to check it out..... i had a health inspector come with me and Neha's real parents are very messy and unclean... which is very bad for Neha.... and her father is very abusive.........

Dk: Unclean???

Ins: Yes.. when we checked out their home... the place was a mess.. there was trash all over the floor and the dishes werent washed and it was very very bad.. and i am afraid that Neha will not be staying with them any longer!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is shocked!!

Dk: So.. that means... that

Ins: Yes..... You are her father!!!!! She is will be coming back to you!!!!

Dk: But her parents...

Ins: We have heard many complaints about them!! and i am afraid.. that Neha will never go back to them.... she isnt safe over there and the condition that the house is in.... very bad hygene as well!!!!

Insp takes Dk to the hospital because Neha is there.. cuz the doctor is making sure nothing is wrong with her!!!! Dk is thrilled.. and is happy that Neha is coming home!!!

Doc: She is fine but is a little weak.. she has not been taken care of very well....

Dk: Well...

Doc: I understand.. the Ins told me evrything.. What ever you and your wife were doing to take care of her.. please cont that!!!!

Dk picks up Neha after so long and it gets a little emotional!!!

Dk brings Neha home and everyone is shocked

Ved: Brother?

Dk: Neha.. is ours forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sum: But how???

Dk explains everything to everyone about what had happened to her and they are very sad!!!!

But at the same time.. they are all happy!!!!!!!

Preity and Sia go call Disha

Preity: Bhabhi............. Can you please come with us?

Disha: I am not in the mood...

Sia: I think you will like this!!!!!!

Disha: Please leave me alone for a while!!!!!!

All of a sudden Neha starts crying and Disha hears and is shocked.......

Disha: Thats Neha's voice!!!!!!

Disha gets up.. and runs out the door and she sees Neha in Dk's arms!!!

Disha: Neha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

Dk: She has come back to us forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is thrilled!!!

Disha takes Neha from Dk and is hugging her and kissing her and is crying again!! but these are tears of Joy!

Disha: But..

Dk explains everything to her again!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: I had a feeling that something wasnt right!!!!!!! But its okay.... she is with me now!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is thrilled to see Disha happy again!!!!!

Dk explains to her what the doctors said..... Disha feeds her and plays with her for a little while!!!

Later that day... Disha is in her room looking and Neha because she is sleeping.. as if this is some dream...

Dk walks in and is looking

Dk: Disha..... ever since your daughter is back.. you forgot about your husband!!

Disha: I want her to stay by me!!!!

Dk: You know... this house was dead w/o you Disha!!!!!!!!! Only i know what these past couple of days were like!!! I can never see you like that Disha!!!!!

Disha starts crying again.... and sits up

While DK is talking she is looking down..........

Dk: Disha.. look at me!!

Disha slowly looks up.....

Dk: You know i cannot see tears in your eyes!!!!

Disha: Now i have my daughter back.... thats all i wanted!!!!!!

They look at each other and they both hug!!!!!!!

Back in the living room:

Suraj: The happiness is back in this house!!!!

Preity: Yes!!!! and there will be many more to come!!!!!

Suraj: Really?? How?

Preity: Suraj??????

Suraj: Oh yea... i forgot!

Preity: 😡😡 You forgot??????????

Suraj: (laughs)

Sum: Why are you giving my Bahu a hard time?

Suraj: I am sorry badi mom!!

They all laugh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL CONT TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NIGHT NIGHT!!!!!!!


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Posted: 20 years ago
Gr8 story!! Please cont. soon!
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Posted: 20 years ago
u sure have put in tremendous effort in this
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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 66

Suhas calls up Disha and asks her to stay for a couple of days with her.. But Disha feels like i want to but i dont want to

Suhas: Why dont you come and stay for a couple of days??

Disha: I will try Aai.. but i have to see

Suhas: Well think about it and let me know!

Disha: Yes Aai!!!

She hangs up!! and Dk walks in

Dk: Who was that?

Disha: Aai...

Dk: What she want?

DIsha: She wants me to come and stay there for a few days!!

Dk: Really? Do you want to go?

Disha: I dont know!!

Dk on the outside looks like go if you want but inside... he really really really does not want her to go!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Well you can go if you want!! I dont mind!!

Disha: Dk....

Dk: Yes... anything that makes you happy!!!!

Disha is like what should i do?

Dk: Anyways i am late.. i will leave!!!!!!

Dk is saying.. few days w/o you Oh no!!!😭


Disha: I Know you really dont want me to go Dk.....

She is left thinking!!!!!!!!

Later that day.. Aai calls up Dk asking for permission and Dk closes his eyes cuz he really cant stay w/o her!!! 😳😳 But he says i told her she can go if she wants!!!!

Aai is thrilled!!

Aai calls up Disha and tells her that Dk sais yes to her!!!! Disha has to agree no matter what so she packs for 2-3 days and takes Neha with her!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk comes home and sees Disha is ready and is sad but doesnt say anything!!

Dk: Here i will drop you off!!!!!!!

They both go and Dk is on the phone w/ someone and is yelling at them.... he's just a little mad but Disha thinks he's mad at the person on the phone!!

Dk drops her off stays for a while and later leaves!!!!

In the car Dk is thinking about Disha already........

Dk: 3 days w/o you... how can i live?

Disha is missing him to already!!! But then she will see him its only a matter of three days!!!

Dk goes to sleep and realizes that Disha isnt there and he feels lonely!! Poor guy!! and he falls asleep!

Next Morning:

DIsha wakes up and makes tea for everyone and she goes and checks on Neha and she is thinking in her head to wake up Dk... but then realizes he's not even there!!!!!!!

Disha's sad! 😭😭😭

Dk wakes up early cuz he knows that no one is there to wake him up......

Dk's day goes by really slow... and he thinks time is standing still... and he cant take it anymore!!!!!

Dk decides to call Disha.. but changes his mind!!!!!!!! he thinks that Disha will think that he's desparate to have her back!!

The phone rings at Bhonsale house and Disha goes picking up.. but she hopes its Dk... but its someone else!!!

Disha is in the room playing w/ Neha and thinking about Dk... Azuba walks in

Azuba: What's wrong?

Disha: Dk hasnt called me!!

Azuba: Why dont you call him?

Disha: I want to.. but then i dont want to!

Azuba: You came here because you're Aai told you to... but did you really want to?

DIsha: I did but i didnt...... My life is incomplete w/o Dk!

Azuba: Well what do you think he must be going through??

Disha: But he insisted.. on me going!!

Azuba: You probably thought that... but did he really want you to go? I think he didnt!! But he did it to make other people happy!!!

(talking about Aai)

They talk for a little while........

Afternoon time... early about 1:00 the sun hides behind the clouds and it looks like it is going to rain....... Dk is at home because he didnt want to go to work today and he is just thinking about Disha.. he's really lost in his thoughts

after 30 mins... it begins to rains.... Dk is still thinking and doesnt realize its raining.. he's soaking wet!

Sia sees this and calls him

Sia: Bhaiyya..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DK doesnt listen...

Sia comes out and Dk is still lost... She realizes that he misser Disha...... She finally gets his attention and she takes him to his room.... Dk changes his clothes......and just sits on his bed!

Disha is looking at the rain and has a flashback of the other day when she was playing in the rain and tricked Dk in coming out.....

Disha: I hope there is no thunder tonight!!!!!

DIsha gets scared and is hoping and theres no thunder and lightening!!!

Middle of the night.... Neha is fast asleep and theres thunder and lightening and Disha is still.... he closes her eyes and covers her ears but its really loud....... Dk realizes too and is thinking if Disha is okay... cuz she cant stand it!

Disha cant take it anymore and calls up Dk.... but his phone is on silent cuz he puts it on silent in the night!!

Disha doesnt want to call the house.. cuz the phone is loud and she doesnt want to disturb anyone!!!!!!

Suhas comes in and asks her if she is okay... Disha is stuttering and saying she is really scared...

Suhas: Dont worry..... nothing is going to happen!!

Disha: I hope so!! 😭

Suhas: Just go to sleep and dont think about it!

After 15 mins.. DIsha pretends she is asleep so Suhas can leave.... Suhas does leave and she closes the door... Disha wakes up again

Disha: Until this stops i am not going to sleep!

Next Morning:

DK comes and picks up Disha.... it is still raining

Suhas: Dk.. i think you should go see.. she didnt sleep all night...

Dk goes and checks on her and she is sitting up staring to space........

Dk: Disha....

Disha doesn hear

Dk: Disha...!!!!!

DIsha looks up and sees Dk and she smiles and runs to him and gives him a hug!!!!!!!

Disha: Where were you???? I called you but you didnt pick up!!!!!!!!!

Disha is not letting go of him!

Dk: Come on..i am here to take you home!!!!!

Disha takes a shower and then Neha wakes up and Dk starts playing w/ her!!!!!!!!

DIsha leaves and comes back and she feels good that shes back home!!!!!😃😃


i will cont 2nite...... i will try... if not.. .then tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!! so then this will be todays update!!!!!!!! thanx... and bye!!



rang thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago

i hope there is some romance between the two. i just love that.

rang😳

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Posted: 20 years ago
hi


plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write soooooooooooooon

and some romantic scenes between the d's 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago

😊

AWWW that was good

u should definatly continue soon

later

goldi2

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Posted: 20 years ago
tat waz amazing!!! u shuld continue wen u get time!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

Yes I agree that was awsome

pleaze do continue !😳

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Posted: 20 years ago

thanks alot again

for another awesome piece

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