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esha

@bunny007

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

wow... the update was great... :D

love how virat is shown... he loves her but maanu thinks he is only using her :(

loved this bit... it was funny :p

'I-'she stammered, looking around the garden and back at him in surprise. He wanted her to' urm be with him? But she thought that- 'Manu, I am not asking you to sleep with me. I am asking you to sleep on the bed',he grinned widely as her eyes widened in shock and then registering the words-flamed anger. Before she could say anything' her husband had walked into the bedroom- with her book in hand.

heheh it was hilarious/... mannu's hasitation and confusion rofl... and virat being mischevious heheh loved it :D

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MadhuChowdary

@MadhuChowdary

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Hey Elena...sorry for the late comment...work is not letting me do anything these days...coming to the update as usual awesome...last para of manal's thoughts are misunderstanding i guess...virat doesn't like her...that couldn't be possible...lol...i liked their small encounter...manal is strong...i like this particular quality in her...thanks for the pm and take care...

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Cintila

@Cintila

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Wow elena. This was a great update and sorry for the late comment i was a little busy. Coming to the update I loved the last part lol. Poor manal 😆 But i guess something's going on in virat's mind... i just can't wait to read further. Thanks a ton for the pm :-)

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Preethi

@preethis

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

wowww amazing part dear... loved it...

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Awww...so viru also love her...awesome updt...cont soon

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

wonderful story Elena... u r an awesome writer... i am a newcomer in this forum nd have sent u a buddy request as well...

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

very very nice updatein a way i feel sorry for virat more nw cuz he's tryin hard bt she still wnt giv in to him bt thats wat manvi's known for i hope he can show her that his feelings do actually mean sumthin bt who's place r they goin for dinner n will manvi agree cuz she really dnt want much to do with virat even if he is her husband wud luv to read the nex part nw thanx for the pm 😊

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..Gowri..

@..Gowri..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Sorry for the late comment E. was caught up in errmm.. Life!😆! OK, I read this at one go.. All the four chapters & like usual, I cant help but wonder how do u manage to be this perfect in writing evry single time. U have 3 FF's goin on & I seriously applaud u for the fact that the Virat & Manvi in all ur stories have some fascinating dark appeal, which makes them irresistible.

Here, Mannu's forced to marry Virat whom she despises & the attacks-counter attacks between the man & his wife is just awesomely written. Its a war of equals & looking forward to see who wins the match. Great going E.. Keep up the good work!

Edited by ..Gowri.. - 12 years ago

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Awesome..~! like the bend between past n present..their feelings r same though...Virat loved her from the start but small things can ruin ongoing pleasent life...but it would b interesting to see their relation grow as Virat wouldn't really give up...N Manal is confused abt her feelings...Thanks for a longer update...and the PM :)...~!

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ayshaiqbal

@ayshaiqbal

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Finally got ur PM
was smiling showing all my dentures wen saw ur pm😛
So this update is more than i have expected
the way u showed past flashbacks nd d first day after wedding is fab
The way she geta nervous is like( humsafar wala bed scene when first time she came into his room)
In last pm i asked u want their marraige scenes nd i did got

u made my day its a treat to read ur stuff

the bend between them is making me greedy for ur next update

nd u wont believe read these lines 10 times😊
nd was imagining d whole scene
'I-'she stammered, looking around the garden and back at him in surprise. He wanted her to' urm be with him? But she thought that- 'Manu, I am not asking you to sleep with me. I am asking you to sleep on the bed',he grinned widely as her eyes widened in shock and then registering the words-flamed anger. Before she could say anything' her husband had walked into the bedroom- with her book in hand.

thanks for d pm
update soon
m going to pm u regarding venice

take care