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Summer99 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a lovely chapter with a start of teenage romance
the chapter was complete except the slap which i think arnav deserved from khushi granny 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh the feeling of falling in love the first time! wonder if Arnav will turn up?!
i love this SS... just beautiful!

thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update..
so much cuteness..khushi realized that she loves arnav ..
so beautiful..
CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay here two thanks, the biggest one is for recommending this story to me and the other is for the pm.
I am totally glued to this ff. Loved the backdrop of the story and the way you wrote it its really different, beautiful and soothing.
loved the pace with they both were coming close to eachother and now they are friends or more.
Khushi's realisation of feeling was beautiful i also loved the song.
Arnav's every emotion and turmoil is properly explained surely could connect to his pain.
His written sorry was perfect, inspite his ridiculous guesses of some 'S' even i guess few dangerously ridiculous than him.
Thanks for tribute to that sugar drop scene it was more than perfect and yup one of my favorite too.
He will come to the party for her i am sure, but i am worried for the precap what with beauty and the beast you are planning anyway will wait.
Thanks again update soon waiting eagerly.
Edited by ashw99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww!! That was a soopery dooper update!

Not bad Arnie bwoy is mellowing down!! ahem ahem!!
But too Bad!! you still are incorrigible you know that!!
only trying to impress the girl will do you no good you pompous creature !! You already got into the bad books of her grandmother dude!!

Khushi ... baby ... already fancying Pehla Nasha? ha ha .. i surely wanna know what goes between the two of u... Careful Khushi... dont land up getting hurt baby!!
Though i know both your fates are sealed in the hands of Jenny! still cant stay from stating whats in my mind! :)

Thanks a lot for the update Jenny! and the P< offcourse ...
Its a beautiful one! :)
will wait for saturday for the next update!
Edited by LeenaRocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update..
Cont soon!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just read all the parts in one go and i loved it sooo much
And plz fo pm me the next part ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely adorable update took me back to my school days and I was thinking while reading that I will make a request to know more about Landour that is if you incoperate some small discription of the place so that I can visualise while reading the chapters and also could we see some pictures (that you have already promised).
Coming to the chapter it was so cute and lovely, they have started their journey towards finding each other I know this path to finally find each other will not be an easy one (that little teaser we read before this story started is never further from my mind where Arnav with another girl and Khushi with a child and possibly married to someone else, I keep telling myself that thereK might be a twist there somewhere and i should take a chill pill and enjoy now and here).
I loved that Khushi's granny told Arnav off for smoking, way to go granny, I wanted to take that cigarette and throw it on the floor.
Arnav can draw? and he is drawing Khushi's eyes without knowing why he is doing it. He will go to the function only if KHUSHI WANTS, and Khushi is looking Pretty and waiting for him.
Let's not forget Khushi has realised her love the question is what will she do with this knowledge, will she tell Arnav or will she keep it a sacret.
It's so like Arnav to say sorry in writing rather verbal, he finds difficult to communicate point to be noted which might be a big problem later. He also came across very arrogant in his communication with Khushi's grandmother.
I like his name for Khushi Red Riding Hood as he is an obvious Wolf no doubt about it.
I am very excited to read further to see how all this unfolds.
A quick question are you starting another SS or FF called Beauty and the Beast or were you referring to Arnav/Khushi of this story.
Thanks for the PM and update.
Edited by gifttag - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an absolutely wonderful update!
Why do I feel I feel I am at Landour myself?
It really gives such a soft touch to Khushi!
You have depicted this Khushi as the soft girl whose oozing out with love in every bit of bone in her.
Be it on humans or on the animals her love seems to be unparallelled!
I had felt this even with your Khushi of Impenetrable heart and Mohini too!
Soft and cuddly is the feeling I get!
Now Arnav has got the only friend in Landour. What went sour between them I wonder!
Was it unrequited love or his famous anger or her grandma for Khushi to become Mrs. Alter?

Loving this story line of yours Jenny.

Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cute.
Loved it.
Thanks for the pm.😊

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