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_G1234_

@_G1234_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#761

Finally caught up with last 2 chapters. :) sorry for commenting occasionally. kinda busy with studies. I'm I am really enjoying reading the past. love the way their frndship is growing. Khushi is in love, and its seems that Arnav is also feeling same for khushi. Hope he come to the party.

Thanks for the PM

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Jenny what a lovely chapter! I'd been rushing to my workplace,school,in the morning,but could'nt resist the charm of it and read it..got back home and read it again at leisure.

Lol! What would happen when arnav would come to know that she is khushi s' granny.? :D

pehla nasha! The very obvious choice..There could'nt have been better and m glad you included it.

M so happy for khushi..but at the same time,i can't help but think that heartbreak does'nt seem unavoidable here owing to what arnav thinks coz of his parents relationship. But For now i want to enjoy this! :)

'foster' i like! Lovve!
Its even more sexier than raizada..
You chose it intelligently..it goes very well if in the show the background had been Christianity..

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Archu

@cocoatree

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#763

U r a wonderful writer !!👍🏼

just i m loving dis.😳

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gopikaaji

@gopikaaji

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#764

😛...thank u for awesome update
Arnav does every thing in his own style ..which is unique ...
that u maintained ...yes ..yes his sorry ..is always a gr8 one ...

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

glad to see the understanding and sympathy for the other developing in khushi's and arnav's hearts... their thoughts involutarily eing drawn to each other was cute! a very evocative description of arnav's rudeness to khushi's grandmother: "Do I know you?, his tone was appallingly rude, made worse by his characteristic derisive half smile and the fact that he chose that very moment to exhale a cloud of smoke. I could literally see and hear the scene unfolding... grandma's disapproval and arnav's irritation!

aww, the pangs and uncertainties of first love! loved the role reversal wherein khushi finds arnav and his antics 'unbelievable' whereas in the show, he was the one who thought so regarding her! lisa's round-eyed and jaw-dropping wonderment was funny... ... they felt a Cedar scented breeze fan their hair and faces... rabba ve, anyone? arnav's manner of apologising, though abrupt, was very touching... the little red riding hood- the wolf analogy was very apt... [would have thought that the sight of arnav giving khushi a slip of paper and the latter accepting the same, would have given rise to a lot of gossip about their relationship status, but of course the boards can be the ultimate distraction 😊]... the attraction insiduously laying a hold on them was nicely shown... trust khushi to be the first to understand and accept her love for arnav, with pehla nashaa aptly embodying the thrill of her fledgeling emotions... arnav will be arnav! he can't graciously accept that he might want to spend some time with khushi at the farewell but almost challenges her to ask him to come... has to be contrary! again, khushi's eagerness for his presence was adorable... 'beauty and the beast' is very intriguing making us desperate for the next update!

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#766

read all 4 chaps in one go...
superb SS...
loved it...
thanks for PM...

Edited by avni_barun - 12 years ago

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#767

Great update!

The slow start of this relationship is really good. Right from the start with the fainting scene, both of them started bonding without unnecessary fights.

It started building up slowly when they start studying together.

I like how he draws and expresses things in words and paper.

The way he draws her eyes and the way he said "Sorry" through a paper.

Haha, so does Arnav have trouble having "Sorry" here as well?

And so Khushi realises she is in love first. I hope it doesn't hurt her much.

What a cliffhanger! I really liked how she asked him to come and he agreed to do so only because she wanted it. Loved that alot! Excited for the next update.