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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#631

Such an emotional update... loved it... it was beautifully written Jenny

waiting for the nxt part

thanks for the PM

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#632

I m enjoying every bit of past...vulnerable Arhi,trying hard to look strong😊...both in their true respective character.

Jenny...pls don't jump to present...take ur time 😳

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soniaanna

@soniaanna

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#633

Great one, waiting for the next update

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Beautiful part Jen!

Khushi's ignorance is disturbing, Arnav.

Was the sketch, Khushi's eyes? I think so.

Both have started feelings towards eachother.

Felt sad for Khushi, but I am glad she got a wonderful Granny!

Awe the IPK scene was beautifully recreated.
Loved it!

Hope their convo is still on.

Waiting for the next part.

Thanks for the pm.

Love
J

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priya goyal

@cutesforum_02

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#635

wonderful and very emotional chapter 😊

loved it !

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Siya

@Siya6490

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Arnav and khushi had their own problems... but they tried to hide it from others... i hope they are going to b friends soon... continue soon

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#637

I P K BOND ...WHAT CAN I SAY

YOU HAVE NOT ONLY DONE JUSTICE TO YOUR + MY FAVORITE

SCENE FROM THE SHOW BUT YOU HAVE ACTUALLY BETTER-ED

COMING FROM THE INNOCENCE- THIS WAS AN IMMACULATE

DESCRIPTION OF A SITUATION TAKEN CARE BY YOUNG HANDS

N MIND

THE CEMETERY SCENE WAS UNFOLDING OF HIS EMOTIONS

THE HARDEST SHELL HAS THE SOFTEST SEED

THESE TWO ARE IN NEED OF COMPANIONSHIP MORE THAN A

ROMANCE OR A RELATIONSHIP

YOU ARE SO DOING JUSTICE TO THIS FABULOUS STORY

THANKS FOR THE PM

KEEP ME ON HIGH ALERT

PS: SORRY FOR NOT COMMENTING ON CHAPTER TWO WAS A

BIT TIED UP😊

KKKA

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#638

Thanks for the PM.

Lovely update...No worries you did absolute justice to one of the most all time favourite scenes of 'almost' everyone addicted to IPK.

What an emotional update...My heart goes out for the 2 children 'Arnav' and 'Khushi'.

Khushi whose mother could abandon her alone with her grandmother to start a new life for herself (hopefully % of such mothers are negligible else world would be a very difficult place to live in).

Arnav whose parents could not/choose not to be there with their son rather decided to leave him alone to face the difficult world all alone.

Pace is a bit slow but i guess such intense stories need to be told at its own pace.

Liza