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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

Excellent chapter...

there was pain yet there was a feeling of budding closeness between Arnav and Khushi..I love the way you are projecting these characters in a completely different setting..the calm serene atmosphere is extremely well expressed ..looking forward to their journey

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Had to post again ..only to say a big thanks for these lines..brought tears to my eyes...

"You could never hold me in your arms...you never knew me ...never touched me...but I don't know why I feel so close to you",

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564436

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Posted: 12 years ago

#623

the pace is just fine :)

loved the scene you put in here

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

hey... i am back! Sorry didn't comment earlier since i got to read them all only today! was terribly busy with my work.

You know i was thinking I would read them later when there will be few more chapters together, plus i was reminiscing impenetrable heart so much that i didn't want to let the memory of that story to go.. but little did I know that, the memory would be replaced by something even sweeter!

Its a beautiful heart-touching story.. i know the main focus would be after their reunion... but even this part i loved so much. The way you described the town and everything there, i have already made my mind that, i must one day visit that place..

the last part was very nice, emotional. khushi's pain was noticed by arnav and it seemed he first time realized, he is not the only person in the wold with sad and tragic pasts!

the fainting and then sweet part was great! it reminded me of the beautiful scene in the show.

thats it! now wait for next update has just started.

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Very emotional update...
Poor Khushi...
Lovd d way u describd their emotions...
Cntinue soon

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Oh! I m totally loving the unfolding of past. Carry on as you want your story to.

When khushi told grandma that she is her mother- that was really heart touching.

Her connection with her late father who she has'nt met even once is so unusual and beautiful.

Your version of arnav fainting and khushi is so lovely and not once the visuals of the show hinders with the imagery it creates.

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

Absolutely awesome, loved it...love this silent and deep bond that they are forming...IPKKND has touched our hearts in so many ways and this tribute was so fitting...loving it!

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

Just started reading this ff today & am loving it a lot already. Don't worry about the pace, it's perfect. Continue with the story as you have thought about it. Will be waiting eagerly for the next update.

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sanjubanju

@sanjubanju

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#629

Very nice update. Thanks for the pm. Waiting for the next update.

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#630

You did justice to that favorite scene ;) He was reluctant to let go her..

He is drawing a pair of eyes..it seems they are haunting his thoughts and dreams :)

At last Arnav broke down..seeing Kushi's sadness triggered that in him. Kushi is unhappy the way things are between her and mother and she knows that it is life and she has her grandmother..but she feels lonely..

You portrayed the reluctance and strong attraction of both, Arnav and Kushi, with their stealing glances, the head turns and the tug of the heart when the other is sad and irresistible need to comfort the other..

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