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aafan

@aafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

So cute! Sorry in written but cannot say those words.

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

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What a beautiful chapter!!! It was such an idyllic chapter in more ways than one. Two young & beautiful people discovering the first feelings of love in an idyllic environment, among the tall pine trees, high above the valley, under the glorious snow capped peaks, only you could have written this so beautifully :)

You not only transformed me into a teenager but also took me down memory lane of my own trips to Landour & the Woodstock school area :) I could almost visualize both Arnav & Khushi walking down the street to school & studying for their boards. The ultra-cute sorry was the cherry on the icing.

But boy is Arnav a brat or what. No shame or remorse being rebuked for smoking by an elderly lady, he just had to be cheeky with her as well. There are times you want to kiss the guy & others when you want to throttle him for his insolence...

I am sure Khushi looked a ultra-cute in the black & white polka dot dress, hopefully Arnav does not do anything untoward at the party. Already, the title of your next chapter is giving me misgivings... What kind of a beast will he be??

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

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i am a stalker now! thirsty for Arshi stories...stalking all famous writers here...stalking all awesme stories...some of them turn out to be nectar... this update was one such - sweet, light, breezy, dreamy and just so youthful!! took me back to my teens...

i am already so much in love with Woodstock School, Landour (you say unpredictable weather but i dont care dammit), the hills, the valleys and the cute community there...

Arnav wrote sorry..awww...baath nahi kar saktha ye sab tho he can do 😊

how did khushi manage to do her exam after that wonderful revelation she had? thank god it wasnt me...i would have day dreamed half way through the exam!!

now please update soon and let Arshi meet in the party...is Arnav going to turn up in a B&W tux?

Edited by asr2kkg - 12 years ago

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

Yah, me too! I am stalking and got to read it before getting your pm.

Nice chapter! sweet emotions! feels like i have gone back to my teenage years!

Arnav's guesses for words starting with S.. well its easy to understand what he would guess first! His style of sorry was amazing!

And khushi is such a pure soul! Whenever i think about the prologue, i feel bad.. her first love wasn't successful!

anyways, come back with next chapter soon! don't keep us waiting for so long, dear!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

awww that was so cute
he said sorry and how
really could he not have said it though i doubt it right
he can never say that word too easily
haiyye that song so fit in with her emotions she was feeling
is this really love or something else
guess we shall know soon enough
so will he come or not i hope he does
she did want him to come
and its not like he has much else to do right
and it has started in a way right their friendship has started at least
and it seems khushi is falling for him
cant say much about him though as of yet right
well lets see where all this wlll take us
cheers for pm later on

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

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Yay! And we finally see progress. Try all you want Arnav. You ain't got no chance of getting away from this. You're a goner.

Just goddamn give in and make things easier for yourself and us!

Ha! I KNEW it. Those were Khushi's eyes.

Thank you Khushi, for accepting your feelings about the Foster boy. Atleast ONE of us is out of denial.

But I have a feeling that Arnav is closer to admitting things to himself than we'd have thought earlier. The little "say you want me to come to the farewell party" by-play was lovely and if indicative of anything, then we're probably going to see fireworks AT said party.

I can't even imagine how much I'd fangirl over Arnav and Khushi if they had been classmates of mine in high school or college. I'd secretly ship them and try to surreptitiously get them together and act like a general creeper and when they finally got together, I'd throw a party.

*sigh*

Your updates give me this warm, fuzzy feeling even when I'm dying with homework.

I am SO sure that Arnav will turn up at the farewell party.

And be his devastating self.

And mess with Khushi's breathing again.

And mine.

P.S. Pehla nasha will always be the epitome of a young college romance for me.

Edited by Semanti - 12 years ago

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

arnav apologized to her😉 great update

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

I read it in a hurry, as I had no time. Will of course read it a few more times before the next update. and I might comment more when I read it again, but just wanted to say "LOVED IT"

I am already in love with the perfect setting for this story. I liked the progress. Now eagerly waiting for Arnav to get to the party.

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

Such a beautiful chapter !!!

I already read it twice then thought of commenting first then going back to it !!😳

Young love... its so fresh and pure!!

I absolutely loved Arnav in this update... the way he said sorry ...that was too cute and then of course he literally made Khushi ask him out for the party !! So incredibly cheeky !! 😉

Cant wait for Saturday !!

Who does not love this song !!❤️