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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

beautiful update very emotional well done khushi save arnav hope fully a start of a friendship awesome update thanks for the pm

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IPK007

@IPK007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: dumas
beautiful update very emotional well done khushi save arnav hope fully a start of a friendship awesome update thanks for the pm

I love you for always posting the right pictures to go with my updates...:))

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: IPK007

I love you for always posting the right pictures to go with my updates...:))

I completely agree with Jenny!! You make such an effort to find the pic and post it. And they are always perfect!

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Gim

@SansShyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

wow jenny...i loved the update and seriously this is ssooo cute..who would want to miss it and want to straight away jump in to the main story and there by miss it? oh come on...you always put your writing abilities in good use...keep it up... to tell the truth i never loved all those tv serials which start with childhood love stories...they seems so clicheee and even gross.😕 but this is soo cute yar... i dunno.i never enjoyed reading childhood attractions and infatuations coz i believe that its too early.but here i cant move away..you write soo beautifully.. keep up the good work

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

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Posted: 12 years ago

#645

Very emotional update 😭😭 My heart goes to Khushi & Arnav, both are missing their parents love. God bless those you dont have someone known as maa or papa 😭😭

But you wrote it so beautifully & their story reminds me of my school time, all those fights & patch ups with friends 😊 Lovely update, absolutely adore it.

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#646

was a very nice update... loved it... please dont worry about the pace... we are loving it and so please dont rush up...

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IPK007

@IPK007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#647

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#648

Ah! Not bad for my stalking skills, eh? Res :)

Pehla Nasha indeed. And what a beautiful chapter to remind me of one of my favorite songs on young love. The entire update was warm and tender, the first unfurling of that teenage romance that stays with you for years after.

Lovely, lovely chapter. Perfect for a rainy day with a cup of hot tea to go with it.

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#649

wonderful... i knew u had told u wil update only on thursday, but i kept looking out here today for an update... my wishes were not cheated... thank u jenny... its so true that u wont realize u r in love until u r actually drowned in the feeling completely... Khushi's realization just before her exam was so cute... i love the song "pehla nasha" so much n m happy that u used it... it is one song that any teenager will relate to when falling in love...

i was not expecting arnav to tell Sorry... it was a surprise. i love it when he calls khushi "red riding hood"... it so suits her nature n character... i hope arnav makes it to the party... i m not demanding here but jus a req--- it would be nice if u put up costume images if u have something on mind which are being described here.. it just helps us to visualise better... cant wait to read further...when can we expect the next update?

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#650

You left it there????

Jenny you have turned me into a 17 year old again! My goodness the way you expressed Khushi's feelings of first love were just wonderful.

Arnav's sorry was so sweet!

One of my favorite all time songs and you used it in perfect coordination with Khushi flying down the street on her bike. What a great visual I had.

This story has become my favorite FF right now, I didn't think I would be able to love anything as much as I loved your last story. But you have just reeled me in, hook line and sinker!

I can NOT wait for the next chapter.

👏

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago

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