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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#611

Loved the update.. ❤️ They are coming closer.. The fainting scene.. You made me relive those moments.. Thank you.. 🤗

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#612

You know, ever since I read "The Impenetrable Heart" a week or so ago, I have been addicted to it and keep re-reading parts of it. I really didn't want to start reading this one, cause I didn't want to have to go through the agony of waiting for updates. I already spend way too much time reading and stalking on IF. More time than I can afford!
And knowing how much I am addicted to TIH, I knew this one would be just as good. And so even though I saw your PM, I had decided to not read this. But I guess will power is not one of my strengths.
So at lunch time today, I read all 3 chapters. and need I tell you that I loved them?
It was all very well written. I am , of course, not on cloud 9 right now, knowing that Khushi is either married or has been , in the present day and even has a son. Not my idea of the Arnav-Khushi fairytale, but I know you will turn it into am amazing story.
So now, I am officially stalking you.

I like this Khushi a lot. Love the location too. Really liked the Cemetery part. you wrote that very beautifully.

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#613

BTW, I love your choice of pictures at the top of each chapter. They seem so apt for the chapter. I noticed that in "The Impenetrable Heart" too. You really put thought into it, don't you?

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mthara

@mthara

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#614

Lovely update. You captured A's emotional moment in the cemetery beautifully- hats off to u.

This story reminds me a lot about my college days. Do continue with the pace u've initially set. Ur stories r never boring.

Thank u for the PM

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daffodils06

@daffodils06

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#615

this update has shed light on both arnav and khushiz thots to some extend..both hav their own share of problems..
khushiz mom got married again and has a family of her own and khushi is not welcom there..
and arnav doesnt want pity from any one..
the scene at the cemetery was so heart wrenching..
seeing khushi cry her heart out made arnav shed tears that he held bac for so long..just lik how som people hav the power to mak us laugh some hav it in them to make us cry..in a good way..wen som cry uninhibitedly without a care, they force us to think that may b crying wud ease the sorrow within us..and indeed the much needed crying and realization thereafter has brought visible change in him..
i guess the hazel eyes are etched in his mind forever..
coming to the last part, the scene in the show was one of my favorites too..ur version was just as beautiful as in the show..thank u for taking me down the memory lane..
waiting for the next part..

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smilli

@smilli

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

Beautifulll ...beautifulll...beautifulll...

No words actually...it was brilliantly written...one ov da best parts ...loved it...

Hats off to u for writing such an amazing n heart-touching part...

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Veena..

@Veena..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

Wow yar its going gr8
lovely updates

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#618

That was a great update.

Liked the way Arnav gave into his emotions.

Liked the way Khushi helps out Arnav in the end!

Wonder how they seperate out!

Looking forward to the next update.

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star303

@star303

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#619

A very emotional update!! Even though Khushi never met her father she is close to him than her mom. It did not came as a surprise after reading that her mom married again leaving her behind. Khushi must have felt so unwanted. The scene at the cemetery was so heart touching. Both Khushi and Arnav have been deprived from their parents love. It was good that Arnav finally let go of the emotions that he had bottled up and cried and flushed it all out. Loved the end.