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GodhuliLogon

@GodhuliLogon

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#571

i loved that scene where both their tears mixed up .. poor souls..

thursday seems so far .. :(

nice update.. :)

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madhurima.devu

@madhurima.devu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Nice update.. Emotional chapter n the budding friend ship bween arshi... Loved it.. Thanks for pm..

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@Sanaya.Barun

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

This story is amazing! The way you described the valleys andhill station.. I loved it.

I was so lost in Arnav Khushi Story that i forgot its a flashback!

Khushi is married n Arnav is engaged now :'(

Please Update Soon!

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

jenny such beautiful update

no complaints with pace do as u wish

about past dont end it soon its just awesome

such an adorable update yar

continue soon

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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

wondrful update. Poor khushi. Dat ipk scene was wel written by u. Beautiful. D story is in slow phase bt vl b joining u in d journey throughout. Waitng 4 d leap of 6 yrs.

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zafi

@zafi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

Awesome update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

We finaly get what KHushi's relationdhip is like with her mother.

It was heartbreaking the way KHushi was crying at her fathers grave.

Then Arnav also got emotional and shed some of his tears of pain and loneliness.

Aww Khushi saved Arnav. How sweet of her.

Hopefully Arnav will be pleasant with her now.

I can't wait to read more.

Thanks.😃

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bkamber

@bkamber

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Posted: 12 years ago

#577

Aww...loved it.

Empathy and in a way a trust for someone not yet close to you but so close that your heart hurts!!

Waiting for the next chapter.

Khushi & Arnav...forever in our hearts!!

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gurukhush

@gurukhush

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#578

Jenny,

Kudos for a beautifully written update!!😃 The prose is touching, profound and yet so expressive but quiet... U are really gifted or may I put it in more correctly,... U'r writing is right up there amongst the best in this forum, if not the best😊 And the plot setting is so prettily chosen... the prologue may have set off a not so nice feel... but then each one of us deserves a second chance, if not the next😳😊 Am sure the updates are being rolled out like chocolates, thick and sweet👏👏.. Thanx..

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mkd4020

@mkd4020

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#579

a very nice chapter. Loved the whole thing. I have no complaints with the pace of the story, and just love the way arnav and khushi are coming closer to each other.
Also sad to know that khushi's mother remarried when she was three and left her alone, how sad is that.
Both arnav and khushi have very selfish parents, at least from their point of view, another thing they have in common to bring them closer...
Looking forward to your next update.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#580

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