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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: CravingKhana
Jenny the start of the chapter the picture of the school entrance was pure nostalgia for me...its uncanny how all hill country schools built in that era have the same look...

the story i think u eased this chapter ...really well..it flowed...with a bit of her a bit of him...a bit of closure...and now the start of a friendship...

and if i may say so i liked your stupor scene much more that the show's

Yes, I agree! Another thing that these schools have in common is the amount of attachment that their alumni have to them...😊

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Jenny how on earth do you write such heart wrenching chapters that move me to tears??

Now I can see them become closer, but I cannot help wondering what draws them apart...?

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#563

loved this chapter so much!!!
their inner turmoils...
both have heart wrenching pain in their life...
I hope they'll find solace in each other soon...
thanks for the PM...

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#564

a lovely chapter, this is one of my favorite scenes, i watch it over and over again and you wrote it beautifully.
the graveyard scene was so sad and heart touching.

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Beautiful_Devil

@Beautiful_Devil

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

Great story... I m loving it 😊

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jeya0301

@jeya0301

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Just finished all 3 parts in one go...:) awesome start dear...:) loving it..:) thnk u..:)

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

nice one Jenny.. loved it that she was the reason why Arnav could cry and let his hurt out..

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#568

I absolutely forbid you to tamper with this lovely story. I think the pace is perfect and I want to hear you tell it the way you want to, everyone else be damned.

Arnav's loneliness and vulnerability is so poignant as is Khushi's. Despite Khushi not being an orphan in the true sense, she is like one. She has just had longer to get used to it.

I for one, love reading about this teenaged Arnav and Khushi and their path to finding comfort and solace in one another.

They may not realize it, they may fight it for the longest time, but they belong together.

Those eyes Arnav sketched-- they were Khushi's weren't they?

Well, I'm sure we'll find out soon enough.

This story is special Jenny, it's like a slice of life from a different world and every chapter unfolds a little more of that world to me.

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Blondiexzy

@Blondiexzy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#569

amazing update loved it finally knew why Khushi mom don't call her often because she remarried and moved to USA and yet our heroine in action save the hero because he did not eat and blood sugar drop.