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There are so many moments where I said, "That is so right!" This was so pleasant to read. I loved their fights more because it made them reflect on themselves and each other. They had practice with Arnav understanding Khushi and vice versa, but they need to understand each other as a couple. Like during the derby/movie incident, Arnav understands Khushi's need to share her happiness but he didn't understand how that would affect them.
There are so many more moments where you expanded on what we saw on the show and those extra details transformed them into husband and wife. I really wished they had focused on their post-marriage instead of starting the whole pageant track.
I will be stalking your index now 😃 You've got a fan in me!
Kumkum Bhagya
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