ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed]

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

A poetic justice to A + K's life after marriage. This was the phase of the show when it lost its charm.

I like how meticulously you went through some of the issues and sorted them out. Its hard to imagine the same person is writing both Arnav and Khushi's perspective..seeing as you really got under their skin.

There are some scenes that will stick with me for a longtime.

Thank you for sharing!

Hitashi

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Natalia

@Natalia

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Saiyyu recommended it so I definitely had my hopes up, but yes I was rather anxious that it might portray heartache but I was confident that it would portray sensibility and maturity which clearly lacked in the Sheetal track.. Also thought that the stpry would end at the sheetal clearup, but I was pleasantly surprised when it evolved into engulfing a married couple's daily knick knacks! Every emotion was well explained and well written.. THE EMOTIONS were defnitelt spot on...

Please continue writing...

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404703

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

really touching story dear...

it shows sumthing tht apart frm drama there is normal life of married couple which hav conflicts...its not a cakewalk always...a little dream is important...

loved it...

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rabid52

@rabid52

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Really enjoyed this journey into arshis minds after the sheetal fiasco.

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

such a beautiful story...

simply amazing...

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

hey

this was a very nice story

the emotions were well written and nicely explained

it was simply amazing

good job😊

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

This, I guess, is the most realistic SS I have ever come across on Arnav-Khushi - especially post marriage. You had my heart constricted at a lot of points .. and the way you made them sort their problems was just as per the characters and close to reality.

I could relate to this story, I think, more than any other story in this forum.

Hats off, lady!

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Read this at one go. This is so realistic - all the feelings are so real! I wish they had the same maturity to show this in the show.

I had always thought that given the vast differences in arnav and khushi's social backgrounds, education, etc. there should have been some misunderstandings. They never gave that much importance in the show. Love is fine in its place and I don't claim that people from different backgrounds can't fall in love. But when they start living together, there are definitely going to be compatibility issues in the beginning, at least. And to be honest, even if there are not such wide differences between couples, they still have differences - more so at the beginning of their married life. And that is why I think your story sounds so real. It just shows a couple's compatibility issues and how they get to know each other after their wedding. And how love helps them overcome all of those issues and takes them down the path of happily ever after.

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

This is such a different story on Arnav and Khushi.. The plot is same, the characters and the situations are as they were in the show.. yet the story gives a taste different in all means! The nuances of married life of a couple who are equally strong and matured people have been brought here with so much of realism!

Arnav and Khushi of IPK are not real! Their love, their feelings, sacrifices and understanding .. these were always beyond reality which used to make us cherish the show.. but here they seemed to be real people! Real and highly admirable!

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Its so beautifully written.Makes it so Real,as if this Khushi and Arnav are from us.The indepth emotions,flow of thoughts,reactions and then confrontations .Very well written.👏