ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed]

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

By far the most intense and evoking feelings of khushiand arnav you displayed such nicely..! I loved it beyond words!
Its beautifully projected their love, feelings, in securities..evrythn!:)

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amaypranay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Looking forward to reading this one...

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riha5002

@riha5002

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

It's Arnav and Khushi molded into real life. I know so many marriages have gone bust, imagining the grandeur of impossible expectations. In reality its love coupled with patience and understanding and reaching out to each other and communicating the pillars of a strong marriage. Loved it. Keep writing.

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socrazy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

A wonderful ff, delving into human relationships.

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

This was a very beautifully written portion of Arnav and Khushi's married life.

The explorations of their relationship; the intensity, the depth, the miscommunications and assumptions all allowed us to see Arnav and Khushi grow as they learned about each other.

Brilliantly thought out and wonderfully worded.

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Tabassum Rahman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Such a beautiful and nuanced story. You are really a fabulous writer.

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

All that one needs in a relationship is patience and perseverance. Patience to face the abnormal situations and perseverance to continue to live and let live in normal situations. One needs the other.

M, coming this from you on ArHi is something different and you got it bang on. They are 2 simple yet complicated souls. I say both cause once could not come out of his own misery and the other will forget all her misery just to see a smile on others'. You just showed us how the other side of their normal life be... a phase.

Though late, I am glad that I am here. Shortly, I will be on the next one.

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

read in a go .its a different story

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Perspectives.

@Perspectives.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Wanted to catch up with this one since a really long time..finally I did!

This is pretty much what I wanted to see after their marriage. The 2 were star-crossed lovers and had gotten married but it wasn't easy to live with a man with a mercurial anger and an ego as big as doom! The insecurities around Sheetal was palpable and Khushi trying to catch Arnav's eye with math thing to prove herself was understandable. You potrayed those small things that matter a lot in the initial days of marriage really well.

She sincerely believed that happiness had to be a collective experience than an individual one. Guilt morphed into her system whenever she felt that she was the sole recipient of happiness; was it guilt of inequality in receiving happiness or if it was the fact that she has been chosen at all, he didn't know.

These 2 lines describe Khushi so well..i never read her character being worded so perfectly! You gave a realistic insight on the future of their marriage. Will always come back to it when life's too tangled and demands simplicity.