ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed] - Page 11

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Titaliya_AP thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello there! :)


Well I clearly have more urgent and necessary things at hand, but here I am reading and commenting away on wonderful stoires!


I'm usually known as the GIF Princess, but I seem to have taken another throne now! Hehe. So now you meet the Quote Princess! ;)


These are som quotes that came to me while reading this simple yet so complex story about, well, life.


Because life and especially relationships aren't just a bunch of smiles, they're also a handful of frowns and you've portrayed just that with such elegance!


For Arnav, Khushi, and even Anjali
"I no longer believed in the idea of soul mates, or love at first sight. But I was beginning to believe that a very few times in your life, if you were lucky, you might meet someone who was exactly right for you. Not because he was perfect, or because you were, but because your combined flaws were arranged in a way that allowed two separate beings to hinge together." - Blue-Eyed Devil.


For the bond Arnav and Khushi share
"For the two of us, home isn't a place. It is a person. And we are finally home." - Anna and the French Kiss.


For the couple that is poles apart
"The meeting of two personalities is like the contact of two chemical substances: if there is any reaction, both are transformed." - C.G. Jung


And this last one is for Arnav, for Khushi, for you, for me, for just anybody
"We're all seeking that special person who is right for us. But if you've been through enough relationships, you begin to suspect there's no right person, just different flavors of wrong. Why is this? Because you yourself are wrong in some way, and you seek out partners who are wrong in some complementary way. But it takes a lot of living to grow fully into your own wrongness. And it isn't until you finally run up against your deepest demons, your unsolvable problems—the ones that make you truly who you are—that we're ready to find a lifelong mate. Only then do you finally know what you're looking for. You're looking for the wrong person. But not just any wrong person: the right wrong person—someone you lovingly gaze upon and think, "This is the problem I want to have."

I will find that special person who is wrong for me in just the right way.

Let our scars fall in love." - Galway Kinnell.
Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago
kaur94 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww this was really good
You portrayed there emotions in writing so well
arshiyana thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply brilliant ! I never came across like story the story was simple couple story fight but ur words and style of ur writing made them unique. Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
13 chptrs..?

ryt?


dis was supa amazin..:)
(suggestd by lazyleaves)

4m d tym it strtd wid Sheetal..Arshi.//
n Khushi's fear,,n Arnav bein busy..:)

till d tym dey made d agreemnt..:D








sooo ol d way..Khushi was ol so dulll..n wen she got d accptnce lttr 4m d clg..she was happy..bt him bein busy made her irritated..n ol ignorin n fytin..
Payal stepped in..
n mafde her realiz..:)


loved ol d chptrs..:)

d jealous Khushi..

Anjali-PAyal's teasin part..
Arnav's manao sessions n evrythin..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I stumbled across this and loved this story!
Very nicely written!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Recommended by rasgulla. .thanx it was Wow
Ths ws simply superb. .
Read al n a go. .
I wsh arnav cud hav respectd her feelings n khushi to stood up 4 herslf n react ts way n d shw too. .

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing ss i have ever came across...please pm me more of ur works
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is just amazing and so beautifully written 👏 .
The realistic and the simple way in which you have expressed
is simply brilliant. Oh how I wished they showed this maturity
in the serial 😕 . Your entire write up was amazing, but the
following scenes needed a special shout out.
1) where Arnav makes a sincere promises of making the
frequency of the hurting khushi less and in turn pleading
her not to abandon him. That was a truly heart touching
moment.
2) when khushi asking Anjali abt Shyam and her reply to
it 👏 .
3) payal explaining the realities if marriage and giving sound
advice to khushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! This is simply surreal and wonderful. Though I won't say this is one of the best works you've written as I've read more complex deductions and character and situation analysis by you. But for ArHi by far this is very nicely done.

I really liked how each chapter starts with a song and somehow there is the essence of it throughout, that is only if you know the song..thankfully I knew some of them. Also, I liked how you never went more towards Sheetal but just used her as a catalyst to bring them more closer unlike the serial where they all but screwed up the story with Sheetal and Aarav.

There were some heart touching moments and some silly sweet ones and I loved them all.
Thanks for writing this small fiction. I loved reading it :)

Cheers,
F
Edited by Escapist - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
HDM!!! It's soo gripping!!! I love it!!! Broke my heart a bit at some point, but it's one of the best things I've ever read!!!

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