Ripped Apart ~10~(Maaneet) Updating Note:) Pg 52 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok first all, badhaiya for the brand spanking new thread. Don't get too posessive about this one like Maan with his Jaguar though. Abhi aur thode paida karogi na?😆
Wah Mallikye RA. (BTW Aash, in case you're reading this there is a "ye" at the end of that one so I'm not calling her Sherawat😔) Valentin'e Day Sweets Dabba No 55 was just too fantastic.😃
First of all this Dadi, I respect a hell lot. She is a matriarch in the true sense. Savitri Devi I salute you.
OMG what a sacred topic you dared touch Soni. A man and his car "ek mandir hain"😲😆
Do you know how many fights I've had with my husband over "the car". I think some of the best fights we've had are because of "the car". So this part I totally and completely relished.😆

Aur kya gadi choose ki hain tumne, "The Jaguar." That's my all time favorite car BTW, though I'd never go ga-ga over it like a man would
And when Geet started seducing Maan, do you know what came to my mind. I'd watched a program on National Geographic sometime ago, usme dikhya tha ki during mating season, the female jaguars supposedly uses loud mating calls to attract the males in her vicinity. When I read the part about Geet trying to seduce Maan in his Jaguar, I thought that was just perfect🤣
Dhadkane tez ho rahi thi, unki bhi, aur humari bhi, saanse baar baar ashthama patirnt ke jaise phul rahi thi, pyar ki gaadi tez cahl rahi thi, ki tabhi abey yeh mama kaha se aa tapke laal batti leke.
Screech!! Pyar ki gadi ki rukawat ke liye khed hain.🤣🤣
Really Soni, mama ko kyu bhej diya yaar.
OK, I'm tired after typing all that. I'll come back later and comment on the remaining later.😆
Comment abhi baki hain...
Edited by Susegad - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Res..

Ufff Awesome Superb Mindblowing Update 😆
Hanky Panky in the Car on the road 😳
Meri hansi nhi ruk rahi hai 🤣
Loved It totally 😉
Edited by Sheen-Coolkiwi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
🤣🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 ...
Amazing one n end is superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Breaking News: Maan Singh Khurana caught romancing
with his fiance in the car...😲

Constable ne challan phada😆
aur MSK pohucha Police Staion


Awesome update Sonia😆
can't just stop laughing
Loved how the whole update was incorporating light moments
and ofcourse hawwttt romance😳
which halted abruptly by unwanted guests

I can actually imagine Maan's expressions clearly
It was totally hilarious
🤣 🤣 🤣

Geet's nautanki at its best😉
Par paasa ulta pad gaya🤢

Maan calling Dev chup chup ke
But Alas!! wrong timing😕
sab ko pata chal gaya


Looks like more drama instore for The MSK😎

Continue soon
😃



Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
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Superb Soni!
ROFL..
The great Maan Singh Khurana got caught by Geet's bhaiyya's!
Geet is the queen of dramas.
You write so well I could visualize the whole thing.
I love rom-com writing and this one took the cake!
Thanks for updating.
Congrats on new thread...
Working too much overtime today so sorry I could not be there for your thread opening party...
🤗Happy Valentines Day!
Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
congrats on yr new thread...awesome update...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
OMG, this update made my day!!! MSK caught doing hanky panky on the highway...I am so waiting for the next update where everyone headed by dadi, anu and others are going to have a great laugh and teasing time
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
😊Wow what lovly surprise...
Amazing...
This is ne of the finet FF on IF
Keep updating regularly n fast😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
tooo goooddd
lovd it.
maaneet were superb...
finally dey kissed aftr sooo long...
lovd maan's confesion of being obsessd...
ab bechaare maaneet ka kya hoga????????? speclly maan ka...?????????
conti sooon
thnk u fr dis valentine gift...
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Amazing update... 😆 Just too too too awesome... It's 2 in the night and I'm trying hard not to laugh out loud ... 🤣 I can read this 4 10 times and still grin from ear to ear... Thnx for the wonderful update and looking forward to more soon...😃

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