Ariya SS-If Only updted pg 114 9/11/13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

OMG it was sooo intense

I never knew they would do THAT

It was really amazing

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srividhya68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

hope Riya realizes the real love they both share very soon!

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Awesome update... 1st part ws emotional... Riya's thoughts and Abi Riya convo ws well written... Abhi dnt deserve her!!!! well second part ws intense... Loved it ... continue soon

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Sanjana malhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

WOAH!!! I am speechless!!! I can't understand what to say.. It was such a beautiful part!!!

Ok... Lets start from the beginning.. Hmmm Riya is confused... But her cursing is not relevant... Though i know WHY she curses herself for not realizing Arjun's Love earlier, She is also not at fault..

She is trying to convince herself that she isn't in Love with Arjun.. Babe. that should be your evidence!!

Argh!! ABHI!! How can you claim to LOVE her and KNOW her... and still doubt her..!!

Riya did right letting him go..!! A man who can't trust you... Doesn't deserve you!

Bt still... She must be so sad!

Aw. Arjun is so caring...!! he gave her time.. didn't come near her... and yet kept her in his sight!! 😊

WOW!! Ariya part was beautifully written!! It was so intense!!

I hope she doesn't regret it!! It will KILL Arjun if she does!!

BEAUTIFUL!!👏

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Seenavas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

at last i got my much awaited update

first part was so emotional

but the next one

omg i need a cold shower😉

eagerly waiting for the next one

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Barunsanaya10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

It's amazing ..
Finally Riya iZ trying to dig her past consequences to improve her relation wid arjun..
Past was written beautifully ...
Loved it..
Just continue soon

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kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#537

loved the transition from past to present

and the last part... was hot...

waiting for the next part

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

brillant update :) loved it

transition from past to present was written beautifully

first part was really so emotional

riya's self thoughts were so heart touching

felt really bad seing riya in that difficult situation

so somehow arjun manipulated her

finally she decided to go to abhi's house to get all her answers

love how arjun was there for her

and then their romantic moments at beach were so passionate yet emotional

hope riya realizes her love for arjun soon

can't wait to read more

thanks for the pm

continue soon

Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago

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ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#539

hey i recently caught up with this work of yours n let me tell u that i loved every bit of it😊

Its a very different concept...n really well thought of n yeah exceptionaly well written 😊

Coming to the latest chapter it was high on emotions n coming back n fro from past to present madeit even more interesting!

There was no point stretching a relationship Which has no future n lacks trust...thus what riya did however painful it may be for her but was the right Thing to do!

I loved the beach scene...it was well written n really hot with the correct amount of passion n emotions...!

I just hopeshe doesnt blame him for having taken her advantage during her breakdown n a weak moment!!

Continue soon...will be looking forward to read more of it😊

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Khushboo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#540

This was such a beautiful update!
I love the way you go back and forth in past and present
You write soo beautifully.
The beach part was really hot...hope Riya won't regret it or blame Arjun for it
Continue soon! :)

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