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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anu91

lovely update...👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.

bonding between riya and her dad was so superb...
riya loved abhi so much then how she married arjun...
love at first sight for arjun...
sam knws arjun love...
arjun riya conversation was nice and funny...
so nice update...
cont soon...
thanks for PM...

Thanks a bunch Anu ...
Sam knows all about Arjun 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Brilliant update...loved it

Loved the humorous Riya and her teasing Arjun!

Cont soon!

Thanks 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

riya n her dad has a nice bond! loved ariya convo.. so rathore know arjun had fallen for her.. n maybe her father too likes him for a son in law...

hmm so will arjun turn negative as he knows she has a bf?? how did she end up wth arjun when she loves abhi this much??

Arjun is loved by all 😉
I believ that we all have a grey shade in us ...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aukview

"No Arjun, women don't stare me I am straight"


That was hilarious!! 😆 Actually that whole convo was very nice!

Loved the bond between Riya and her dad...

That last sentence would have hurt Arjun a lot :(
Waiting to see how he reacts...

Continue soon...
Thank you for the PM.

Oh yes !!! it definately hurt him a lot but lets see what he does about it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 7

PAST-

Her boyfriend.!!

Those words brought out such rage which he himself didn't knew that existed in him. He had managed to tame it down while at the party, but all he wanted was to stop her from leaving.

But now in confines of his home, he vented out all his anger on the punching bag. The only thing he could concentrate on was that his Riya was with someone else. Yes, she had become his within the two times he had seen her. For two meetings was all it took for him to recognize that she was made for him. Speaking to her today confirmed what he had felt when he saw her first. The way she spoke, her view points and even her smile set her apart from anyone else. No other woman had come even an inch close to making him feel that way.

A part of him realized that it was ridiculous and not logical to fall for someone in such a short time but logic had no place in matters of heart.

He had been in such peace while conversing with her that he had let his guard down but the last thing that he had expected was for her to have a boyfriend and for her to proclaim the fact in such an open manner. But it doesn't matter whether she has a boyfriend. Because I won't let anyone come between us. No one can stop me from getting to her. Arjun Suryakant Rawte for the first time shoved his conscience aside. He wanted to make sure that no else stood a chance to come between them. Not even her boyfriend.

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Riya couldn't help but sigh as she stared at Abhi. There were many who had already talked to her about him being not the correct guy for her including her father though not directly .He wasn't rich or the most handsome guy she met , but none of this mattered when she was with him. There was a comfort level with him which she cherished. Being brought up together they knew every detail about the other.

"How was your trip?" She asked him while leaning against his shoulder. Both were sitting in the outside garden. This was their place, where they first they met as kids and nearly every important moment they shared happened here. The very place where there friendship had take the course of love

"Not good Riya...things aren't working out the way I planned."

"Things will work out Abhi." I know one day they will she added.

"You deserve better than me." He murmured against her hair. "You deserve the best. Sometime I think I am not worthy of you ."

"Enough !" Riya protested. "I don't want to hear any of those. Firstly tell me why you couldn't make it to the party."

"You know very well I can't stand any of those snobs?" Anyways did anything exciting happen at there?"

Quickly forgetting her anger, Riya started to talk excitedly. "Oh you wouldn't believe who I hung out with ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte

"We talked and talked for so long! I am sure I bored him with my chat, but it was nice talking to someone that intelligent and surprisingly he wasn't at his angry Avatar as I had heard about

Abhi rolled his eyes at her. "Riya I am sure he wasn't bored.

"He is not at all like how I thought he would be. There is something about him that sets him apart. A bit of raw charisma...a sort of hidden charm and power that seems to draw everyone to him. You know some sort of aura that surrounds him. He definitely is handsome as he is described, but there is so much more about him

Riya truly had felt this way about Arjun. She wasn't the one to be easily impressed but Arjun was special. She had known that he was unique from the start of their conversation but she also felt he was someone she could relate to. She had been truly surprised by how easy it had been to connect with him.

Abhi smirked and pulled her closer. "Miss Dutta, should I be jealous? So much praise for a stranger "

"Well to be honest Mr. Choudhury,if you weren't in the picture, something could have happened between the two of us."

"Well in that case I better make sure that I am always in the picture."

I hope you always stay with me as well.

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Present

As she stood in the party, watching both the men she couldn't help but appreciate the irony of life. She had grown up with Abhi; they had gone through nearly all phases of life together and had shared each other's secrets. Yet there were things about him she never knew .While she had know Arjun for a much shorter time but she knew every detail about him. She knew what he looked like in the early hours of the morning and how his voice sounded when he was just about to go to sleep. She could recognize the smell of his musky cologne before anyone else. That was what he had done to her. The irrational part of her brain definitely said that it was pure black magic which he had cast but she knew the truth

"She had always been attracted to him"

The way her husband's jaw was set and his eyes ablaze she knew he was taking in the situation in front of him.

"Dance with me." The determination in those words meant she couldn't refuse

But Riya knew him too well . "Of course."

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing story!!:)
Love it! Its so real and refreshing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update :) loved it
the flashback scene was really nice :)
love the way she was talking about arjun to abhi
awww how sweet she knows everything about him
can't wait to read more
thanks for the PM :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great...
It was amazing...
Riya still in the flashbacks...
Connecting her life with both the mens... But how did she become Arjun's wife..??
Nice update...
Do continue Soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really a very amazing chapter
dis is becoming more interesting

i was waiting for d next part

Arjun's reaction in d past on knowing she has a BF was terrific ,...his feelings for her n a kind of possession which came out was seriously sumthing

waiting to know wat he actually did in ofc

i liked ria's convo with Abhi
it was frend on frend talk
dey seem much in love

i liked d way she appreciated Rawte
now dat again amused me

den in present ,
Ria 's thots on how much she knows both the guys was 👏
i mean ...she knows arjun completely ...she can figure out wat he needs at wat tym like a devoted wife...

den wat actualy is d problem...
i want to know d Arjun , from which she actually has problems...
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting story.waiting to know how their lives changed in such a drastic way.

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