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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#221

That was wonderful one👏

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crazzychips

@crazzychips

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

finally... you updated.
i thought you lost your way in india forums ,so that i had to send a search party to look for you. just kidding...😉
you update even you have hectic schedule. hats off for that. 👏👏👏
as for this update. what else to say...you just did an awesome job dear. totally loved the way you portrayed anjali's thoughts. i don't know what else to say.
you are an awesome writer.
i won't say update soon. but update when you can.
love you

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naaza_deen

@naaza_deen

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

OMG...when did you post this??? you never told me

RES

for now...awesome.

ok so im editing:

wow!!...you are back and that too with a wonderful update. true to your own words ...anjali knows her brother like the back of her hands. i like it how she can read through her brother so very well and even a spark in his eyes wouldnt go un noticed by her.

there are certain parts in which you have shown how important anjali is to arnav. i have cherished their bond even in the show so much. i had found it ridiculous as to why would Arnav do something like forcefully marrying khushi to save anjali's marriage. but then here you have shown how Anjali too was skeptical about it and maybe deep within her hearts she was happy too to see that he brother would do anything to make her happy.

this update had flash backs too...some glimpses into their past and how they have sailed through their life and hardships together. and i do understand how anjali knows how hurt and defeated her brother feels. there was a part where you mentioned that he was the only one who was there to comfort her ...to stand by her all through her life upto this very moment.

second marriages...or rather i would say when people find comfort, love and compatibility in a person one should go for it. maybe arnav has his own reasons as to why he did agree...but now that he had ...its anjali's turn to be patient and find that happiness for his brother.

amazing flow of words and emotions are well written. the situations are disheartening for the siblings ...but both arnav and anjali appears to be strong people to me. im waiting to read arnav's POV. update soon...

its been long since you updated...but glad to see you back here, and you have it in you to write...put words across and get you msg through to your readers. dont give up and see a lot of people like it and and did wait for this update too.

huggs...🤗

PS: ananya still seems to be a mystery...im curious about her.

Edited by naaza_deen - 11 years ago

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

awesome update Thanks for the pm

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

awesome update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Take_That

@Take_That

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Well, well, well, Madam Summer breeze arrives on IF FF forum finally! Vhoa and how! Amazing update from Anjali's POV!👏

Anjali is the one who always needed support from Arnav and the both have been there for each other through thick and thin. It is one of the two is always on stand- by mode to support the other as and when the situation demands. And this is the most beautiful and the best part of their relationship. As orphans, Arnav took charge of the situation and was like a guardian to Anjali. And now when Arnav is heart- broken, Anjali is making every attempt to make him hope again. 1

And it was so refreshing to read Anjali admitting to being selfish at times... Although it's perfectly normal to feel such emotions, it takes a great deal to not go defensive when being selfish.

It is very fascinating how Anjali can read every other emotion on Arnav's face and know his thoughts instantly even when not a single word is exchanged between them.

Anjali is right when she wants a second chance in life for Arnav and wants Arnav to embrace life again with both hands. It is not easy to stay alone all life. Memories alone are not enough sometimes. But then the decision is Arnav's to take. Anjali can only do so much.

I am just so impressed with your command over the language and the vocabulary.👍🏼

This story is nothing like any one I have read on the forum and I am so eager to know how you take it forward from here...

Can't wait to read Arnav's POV now! When do I expect a mail!?😳

PS: Hope you will not go the blogging way now!😉😛 Please, no!😆

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Welcome back! Great to see your update and that too a well written one! Thanks for the pm.

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

glad to have you back...great update...keep it up

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

awesome update anjali pov is interesting but truthfully i have never like her character so it will be a short comment love that you have shown all the sides to her character to her cowardliness to her love to her selfishness and to her love for the brother who has always put her happiness above his and him trying to move on thanks for the pm awesome update .