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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#231

So are you really back! I hope so 😆

Keeping my fingers crossed that your Asli Duniya has settled down and you are in a position to update this story with a decent frequency.

Moving on to the update it was wonderful to read about a Anjali who wants to be there for her brother just as he has stood with her through thick and thin once.

But i hope she realises that the advice that she wants to give to Arnav holds true for her too. Life is long and you can't live with memories alone.

Your writing skills are amazing and the whole introspection of Anjali just touched my heart.

Thanks for the pm. 😊

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#232

I am just thankful you updated at last.

Do update atleast once a month if not more.

The theme of this story is so different one waits for the updates.

Arnav has suffered a lot in life.m

Its normal that Anjali, his sister, wants him to have some happiness back in his life.

Reading her point of view was interesting.

Waiting now for the next one.

Hope it come sooner and not later.

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@Deleted

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Read it in one go today.

This story thrilled me. I can't wait to read more of it. Your way of writing is also Awesome. I've sent you a buddy request, please do pm me when you update.

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Oh wow welcome bk...

Wat a chapter... Just amazing...loved it to the core... I'm just speechless right now... U write so beautifully.. If I can writer even 5% like u ... My life will be more awesome... I always have difficulty with expressing myself...

My comment will not do justice to wat I feel after reading ur update...

Just fabulous update

Hope u get some time to update soon... I really want to read more of it :)

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Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

really nice update..

thanks for pm dear..

Edited by meniranjana00 - 11 years ago

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ARS24

@ARS24

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Its long tym na!! ???

Loved the update
waiting for the next update !!

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vaatuhaara

@vaatuhaara

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Ash... I just cant say how much i was happy to see the update... ! Your take on Arnav's n Anjali 's life is so so close to my heart . the only other Arnav FF i had loved was by our Madhu... 😳 months after or may be an year after i got interested in your FF ... trust me ... i love the way you write ... love the way you bring out Arnav n Anjali... love how every shade of their pure love , respect n dependence is shown...

loved these lines in particular! i always believe Arnav deserved his share of happiness... someone who could understand him beyond the silly fights or bhashans given on love , life n everything under the sun! hopefully i found the girl for Arnav in this story😳 someone who wont twist , turn, mess his life n someone who wont believe that Arnav is something that needs to be moulded the way they wish! the girl here seems to be different ! i love to see how she brings back the happiness in Arnav's life that he lost as a child !

loved these lines in particular!

" She knew the path to someone's broken heart whose spirit of living shattered beyond belief is to talk to them, about the things they treasure and cherish the most. For, it's those memories we seek solace in when we are down and out, reminding ourselves of how it's not the end, how it's only going to get better. It wasn't going to be easy for him to put an end to years of emotional set back; invading his space is only gone make it worse"

Amidst the chaos,the betrayal and all other happenings in her life, here was this person who had gone out of his way to make sure she was happy
👏

awaiting more updates... 🤗 i know you are busy... so take care n update when you are free... 😉

Edited by vaatuhaara - 11 years ago

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vaatuhaara

@vaatuhaara

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

This is for you dear... 🤗

credit :online uploader

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

Hey Ashwini!
You've come back with a bang😉 and made me so very happy. and as usual superb update.
I am so glad Anjali hasn't deserted her Chote although it did look like even she couldn't see through his loneliness in the second chapter. Really admire that the bond is still strong and she has risen above her own misery and heartache to make sure her chote gets another chance at happiness. Really loved Anjali's point of view. You sure haven't lost your touch. Yet another reason to finish this awesome story😃

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Hi I jus came across this story its amazing.

Read all 3 parts tho it ws listed under discontd category.

Bt at the end read a note by you updt a few days back.

So r you writing further or have you discontinued. (Now tht askin to updt or cont story alone is considered spamming) pls pm me if u continue or scrap coz trackin the comments becomes difficult.

Its intriguing.

Arnav is living a lonely life without khushi.

Its been 5 yrs.

Tho I can't imagine how Arnav is survivin without Khushi

So wondering where this story is headed.

Who's Ananya?

Why is Arnav so intrigued by her.

Most of all how did Arnav who ws so bitter after losin his parents n dint give a chance to khushi so impressed by a girl as much as charmin she is bt is chosen to take Khushi's place.

How did Arnav nt react the way he did to khushi.

What is he thinking abt her.

Tho I cudnt read much of last ch with much focus I do realize Arnav feels wht he shud have felt long ago tht his family always ws oblivious to this pain even Anjali.

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