This is real. Taarey ff - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hy it was awesum...plz pm me after updating next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing. Just no words to describe.
The way you put all taani's feelings in words was just superb.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was lovely update dear... loved TaaYam bond... waiting for nxt update.. thanx for pm n update soon n pm me.. :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read all the parts. awesome. pl pm me when u update next

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 9

Next day

Swayam- Come on Taani, hurry up I wanna leave
Taani- (from her room) Ya I know you want to see Sharon but let me get ready
Swayam- ... How do you know
Taani-(Now in the room )Bhai, who am I, Your sister right
Swayam- Haha right, well what do you think
Taani- You better make her my babhi soon

This is what she is wearing.

http://www.cbazaar.com/salwar-kameez/wedding-salwars/dazzling-net-pakistani-suit-p-slsme11002.html

Swayam had not noticed what his sister was wearing.

Swayam- Not funny let's go
Taani- But I'm not laughing

At the college

They arrive before everyone and sit in the canteen. They both don't notice the looks Taanis getting

Taani- Bhai I told you we were gonna be early
Swayam- Ya you were right

They were chatting when Rey comes in the canteen. Unlike those two, he notices the stares Taani is getting. He didn't like it one bit.

Rey- Hey
Taani ( She gives him a sweet smile)- Hi Rey
Swayam- Sup dude
Rey- Did you notice
Swayam- What
Rey- Look around

Swayam looks around and notices what Rey was talking about. He then looks at Taani and sees what she is wearing. Before Swayam could comment, Rey cut in.

Rey- Don't you think, what you're wearing is inappropriate
Taani- What do you mean
Rey-Isn't it a little low cut
Taani- Omg Rey, I don't need another brother

Sharon arrives.

Sharon- I don't see anything
Swayam- Please not now
Sharon- Seriously get a hobby
Swayam- I'm warning you
Taani- Anyways I got class bye
Rey- Wait I have class with you, I'm coming

They both leave an arguing Swaron and depart for their class.

Rey- It's been bothering me
Taani- What
Rey- That song, it's like you knew
Taani- Rey please don't start
Rey- Please Taani, I need to know
Taani- Why
Rey- Because It's been months since she left and I can't stop hurting
Taani- Rey one word of advice, I learned this from my bhai. You can't let the past stop you from moving forward
Rey- But I need to ground myself and none of them understand, I know you do
Taani- Why do you need to know about my story then
Rey- Please Taani, just trust me
Taani- Rey thats not the problem
Rey- Taani, I know it'll hurt to open up, but I need this to move on
Taani- I'll help you, but you have to do me a favor
Rey- Anything
Taani- Dance again
Rey- What do you mean I am dancing
Taani- I've seen bhais rehearsal videos, you have no passion
Rey- What do you know about dance
Taani- A lot more than you think, don't get defensive now. You asked for my help and I'm taking yours now
Rey- FIne
Taani- She wasn't your passion for dance, so why are you using her as an excuse
Rey- What do you mean
Taani- What happened to that boy, I saw at India fest, the one who danced for himself, for his friends, for dreamers and for believers. The Rey I see now, is a boy who pretends he dances for love
Rey- I always dance for love
Taani- No you don't, don't lie, not to me. You can fool them not me
Rey- Taani please stop
Taani- No I won't, you want to cut open my wounds and heal yourself, you're forcing me to cut myself open so I'll make you bleed too, because you can't heal infected wounds without cleaning them first. You're just letting them heal dirty
Rey- ... We'll talk later, let's go to class first

They both sit through the lecture with a thousand questions running through their heads.

They both are thinking: Did I make the right decision?

The class ends.

And they start talking.

Taani- We'll meet tonight in the rehearsal hall
Rey- One problem, your bhai
Taani- Don't worry about that
Rey- fine, Give me your number

They exchange numbers and set up a time for their meeting.

Precap
The truth

I was extremely disappointed in that epi, I mean I love Swaron too, but their tracks are usually longer than Taarey. SO not fair anyways thank for reading the ninth chapter. Comments, Ideas, suggestions and criticisms welcome, but please be kind about it.


Edited by nene1709 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Yay I'm first one to comment!!! Awesome job yaar, very emotional. Pm me the next time you update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first nice very nice especially the way u go into so much depth
i dont know if im in the right place to say this n im sorry if i am understanding wrongly but it seems u have gone through what Taani has gone through plz dont get me wrong but ur words seems more deep then what ppl see

nice work plz keep updating
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome part, please pm me when u continue, I hav sent u a buddy req
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
lovely update dear.
liked the convo between taarey/.
jealous rey.
rey taking help from taani to get out from kria..
and taani is helping her...

do cont. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
wow taani is helping rey
hope swayam don't come to know about this
continue soon

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