This is real. Taarey ff

Hi, I am new to this forum and I feel there isn't enough taarey lol. Frankly, I am a silent writer and this is my first time writing publicly. Criticism is welcome, but please don't be rude about it. Thank you!!!

PS: This is for taarey fans, don't bash this couple here. Thank you.

Concept:

Taani Shekhawat
She is a bright and sweet girl. She is very loving and always willing to help.
She is an amazing performer, but she prefers singing. She wants to experience
love, but she has too many overprotective bhaiya's. She is the family's ladli after
all. But after secretly having a relationship that damages her and a life altering
event, she loses her confidence. ( Sorry no spoiler for her background story 😛 ).

Reyaansh Singhania
Like the show, Kria leaves him heartbroken. After that ordeal, he focuses all his
energy on dance. Very protective of his loved ones and fiercely loyal. All around
good guy. Obviously his best friend is Sharon and of course Swayam. He is an
extremely talented dancer. He is naughty, but loved by all.

Swayam Shekhawat
He is a very sweet and understanding friend. He is in love with Sharon, but cannot
Express his feelings for her, so he uses dance to express his emotions, so he doesn't
go crazy hiding them. No one knows he loves Sharon that much. He is very protective of
his only sister Taani, he believes it is his and his brothers right to be protective of Taani.
Typical Indian Bhai.

Sharon Raiprakash
She is spoiled, but her heart is pure. She is use to getting her way, but she always
cares for her friends. She is in love with Swayam, the girls and Rey know this.

The gang
All are the same ( I might throw in some changes though I am not sure yet)
Nilesh, Vicky, Amar, Neha, Simmi, Bharat, Rinni, Aashi


Prologue:
Jodhpur

In her room, a young girl sits on the edge of her window. She contemplates her decisions.

I have never been this sad. I should've listened. I should've told someone. I should've been smart. I should've used my head. I feel so stupid. Why did I trust the wrong people?

At the sound of her name, she is taken out of her thoughts.
Someone in the house- TAANI!!!! NEECHE AAJAO!!!
Taani- JI BUA

Taani leaves her room and goes downstairs to see her Bua.

As she reaches the room, she notices all of her relatives looking very tense.

Taani- Ji Bua
Bua- Taani, baith jao.

She sits on the couch near her brothers

Bua- Aapke mata aur pita mara gaye. Ek factory blast hua tha.

Distraught the young girl breaks down. Her brothers helplessly watch her cry, they cannot do anything to console their sister.



Ch1 pg 1
Ch2 pg 3
Ch3 pg4
Ch4 pg6
Ch5 pg7
Ch6 pg7
Ch7 pg8
Ch8 pg9
Ch9 pg11
Ch10 pg13
Ch11 pg15
Ch12 pg17 Ch13 pg19

Great concept love it plz update soon n pm me

Hey awesome intro and concept plz continue soon, aww Taani parents die so sad

interesting n sad but interesting lol update soon

Chapter 1

Jodhpur
After receiving the news, Taani sinks further into her sadness.
She bids goodnight to her family members, as she wishes to be alone.

After hours of crying, she finally calms down and decides to change her life.

Taani ( to herself)- Taani, you just lost two different kinds of happiness, it's time for you to take control of your life. You cried enough, now think about your family, they're most likely taking this harder than you are. You have to be strong now. You can't rely on other people to be your strength, you have to be theirs.

Before sleeping, Taani hums some tunes to calm her heavy heart.

A few days after her parents funeral.
Swayam was present at the funeral and has been staying at the house for a few days.

On the morning of Swayam departure day.

Taani heads down for breakfast after getting ready

Taani- GOOD MORNING!!!!!!!!

The whole family sitting at the table, gets startled by her excitement. They don't understand whats going on in her head.

Raj ( oldest brother )- Are you okay?

Taani- Of course, it's a new day, mom and dad are in a better place. We are alive and have the chance to live life to it's fullest, so why not take the chance. Mom and dad may not be here, but I wanna live a happy life for them and myself. So I am more than ok. Now I'm HUNGRY, whats for breakfast.

Hearing this the whole family's mood is lifted, for the first time in days they have smiled.

After breakfast everyone went their separate ways.

Taani goes to school.

In her absence, all of her brothers gather in the living room.

Raj- So how are you doing in Mumbai Swayam.
Swayam ( youngest broter)- Things are going well, dancing been going great.
Raj- Thats good
Vishal ( 2ndyoungest brother)- Bhai, what do we do about Taani ( all of her brothers are older than her)
Raj- What do you mean?
All of vishal's brothers look at him
Vishal- I thought you heard about what happened.
Swayam- What happened
Gaurav (2nd oldest brother)- Why do look worried
Vishal- I thought, you guys were aware
All the brothers- Aware of what
Vishal- Taani was in a relationship before our parents passed and things apparently ended horribly
Vishal was terrified of his brothers reactions. He knew out of all of them, he was the most understanding when it came to his sister, unlike his brothers, he wasn't overly protective.
Raj- (Fuming) Who was the boy
Vishal- ...
Swayam- Come on Vishal, who was he
Gaurav- (Also fuming) Vishal start talking, I want the whole story
Arjun ( Third oldest) - What do you mean ended horribly
Karan( third youngest) - Vishal, you better not be pranking us
Jay( Middle brother)- Oh for god sake, let him speak
Vishal- She was in a relationship with Mayank
Raj- Mayank, you mean the talentless wannabe actor
Karan- Bhai, I remember you saying he had talent
Raj glaring at Karan
Swayam- Karan, shut up
Gaurav- Yes Karan, shut up before bhai murders you in your sleep ( all laughing, except Raj)
Raj- This is serious, stop joking around
All the others- Yes Bhai
Gaurav- Vishal, please tell us what you meant by ending badly
Vishal tells his brothers all that he has heard about Taani and Mayank.
All of them are now extremely angry.
Arjun- HOW DARE HE
Karan- Lets teach him a lesson he will NEVER FORGET
Raj- I will not let him live peacefully
Gaurav- He will pay
Jay- I can't believe someone is capable of doing that, I will make sure he suffers for the rest of his life
Swayam- Lets turn him black and blue
Vishal- STOP, this is not about him but about Taani
Raj- Vishal is right
All of them are deep in thought, they are trying to think of the best solution
Jay- why don't we send her to nanis house
Raj- No, she is not going to New Zealand
Swayam- Why doesn't she come to Mumbai with, she always to be a city girl
Gaurav- Bhai, Swayam is right, that is our best option. Taani will be safe and comfortable with Swayam. And out of all of us Swayam has taken the best care of her
Raj and Arjun- Ok fine
Raj- I will make all the arrangements

The boys tell the family they want send Taani to Mumbai with Swayam. They do not tell them why they want her to go.

Dinner time

Everyone is sitting at the dinner table and having casual conversations.

When Swayam decides to tell Taani

Swayam- Taani, we have all decided something
Taani- Ok
Swayam- We want you to go to Mumbai with me
Taani-...
OMG, REALLY!!!!! YAY, wait when are we going
Swayam ( shocked at Taanis reaction)- um as soon as work paper work gets settled
Taani- OMG, I have so much to pack and no time. Bhai couldn't you have decided this earlier.

Relieved by her reaction, Swayam and his Brothers relax.

To excited to finish her food, Taani runs up to her room and starts packing

Taani (looking out the window)- Mama, Papa, I am leaving this place. I am leaving Mayank, please protect me from making the same mistake. I'm sorry for not telling you guys, but you know how my bhaiyas are. I miss you.
~Yawn~
I am tired, goodnight mama, papa.

Precap
Taani starts her life in Mumbai

Thank you for reading the first chapter. Suggestions, comments, Ideas and criticisms welcome, but please be kind about it.

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its really amazing... please update soon, and do PM me... =)

hey nice start dear.. :-) pls update soon n pm me if possible.. :-)

loved the concept n taani's overprotective bhaiyas