Swaron OS:Ye Khalish jo hai..Wo Khamakha Nahi - Page 8

Originally posted by: sweetangelpayal

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sry if its tiny...😳😳

Originally posted by: sweetangelpayal

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First of all, m really sorry. I forgot i had to unres dis. Thanks for reminding. I told u na u wil hav to hold me at Gun point 😆

No prob at all..its my job to make people work😆

Coming to Khamakha Nahi, That entire sequence still sends tingles down my spine, i mean really.

I loved this sequence so so much..for obvious reasons😳

I loved your OS from the very start itself wen u said that she didn't know to whom she was objecting, it was to him or her own heart.

Well...thats my fav line...that makes sharon different

Basically, the entire part in d start wer u hav described her thoughts came out so damn beautifully.

Sharon, and her dil vs dimag, i so luv seeing her confused, coz she luks super adorable at dat tym.

Yes...so true..the tussle between her heart n mind..poor soul

The best line in the entire oS? The fact that you mentioned his dialogue "I will make you fall in love with me Sharon" Why? It was so very well relatable.

Confession scene makes its way thru my posts somehow..i cant help it..i just love this line..so swayam..so swaron..

And then the way u hav explained the whole dance, it really gave me a totally different pov to look at the whole sequence. What we saw was intimicacy, what i read was purity. I was literally amazed at how well you have described every single expression, played with their emotions, hats off to you.

I am super glad u liked it..coming from a writer like u ..means a lot

Sharon caring so much about swayam is a total pleasure. she has changed so much, in fact she doesnt bother about her emotions, how much she is hurting her own self by staying away from him...

And when she accepted her defeat, it showed that how unconditional his love was, that no matter what, love always wins.

Her entire struggle to not let herself get carried away to the part wer she finally accepts him and the kiss, it was a beautiful, gradual flow.

Yeah..wanted to show the purity of their love..its love of souls😳

I m still in awe smarty, really.

Loved it so much, ek os yaadein pe bhi ho jaye? 😳😳

Hehe..lets see..i dont really write on current track...😛

PS: I forgot to add dis..I am also mad for SwaRon, but its not widout a reason
Awww..smartyyy..u r super sweet n cute😳...m so glad to talk to u ..finally...love for swaron...not at all widout reason..😳

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

gallery me post karungi ..tab lamba comment dena😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Neeti96

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i dint get a pm or scrap for dis 😭

so mean

will unres soon

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WOW di this entire OS was like blissful. I was imagining the whole sequence in my mind as I read what u had written. The song's lyrics which u had added made it a surreal experience. I am in shock right now. Ur beautiful writing coupled with one of the most romantic SwaRon scenes ever is like a dream come true. I really really loved it😳❤️

But I am still upset with u for not scrapping me about this😭

Hey baby..its so good to see ur feedback on my work...after longtime..i know u are busy with ur studies..i can understand...m glad u liked this OS..i didnt know it was a post or OS...i was completely under swaron trance while writing this...ur comments mean a lot

Originally posted by: bhanumathitanha

wow well written u have penned it beautifully .u superbly emoted today's swaron sequence through os .another good piece of work by u on swaron 👏

Originally posted by: OceanicRockStar

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will unres tomo..:)

Hey Di...🤗

Hey My babyyy🤗

Ur late-lateef commenter is here to trouble you...😆😆

hehe..i missed my late lateef commentator


sorry for being so late...you very well know the reason...so coming to the os ...it was...umm...i have to borrow geeta maa's statement for this awesomely amazing piece of work...
here i go...this was..STUPENDOUS - FABULOUS - FANTASTICAL- MAGICAL- SUPERFICIALLY - AMAZINGLY - AWESOME piece ...
(phewww...Geeta maa kaise karti hai...woh bhi roz-roz!! 🤣)

Haha..tu sach me pagal he...m glad u like this OS

Loved it to the core...you penned it so beautifully...the seq was much more effective after you add your incredible thoughts with that...

Awww baby...kuch jyada tareef nehi kardi tune meri😆


i always love the way you present your own swaron...i called them yours coz...they are the same swaron which we use to see everyday...but you made them different in your own style of expressing their love...which is so pure...so divine...

Awww...well this line makes me speechless...i cant help but feel embarrassed..i dont know ..the swaron i write about are mine on not...but they gave me a reason to write after ages...cant help but LOVE SWARON..

I read many posts/Os's after the khamakha seq...but your one is the BEST...PERFECT!!
you are amazing as writer di..i like the ease...simplicity...in your writing...which never fails to convey the depth ...captivating...you bound your reader till the end...writing is for you ...never stop writing di...love you😊

Well..i know there are hundreds of people out here who write better then me..but u my angel fail to see that because of ur affection towards me...m really glad u likes this OS...i was not at all in my sane mind while writing this..LOVE U TOO BABY

Luv ur
RockStar❤️

Originally posted by: d3lover90

Awsm awsm just awsm loving d sequence more nw..

Originally posted by: MagicalShantanu

Unreserved

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The beauty of ur writing is like a divine fire , I can go on and on admiring it . . . .

Hey sweetheart ..i am always greedy for comments/feedback...and when its from u ...i cant stop smiling...Why ..just go through ur comment once u will get to know

I'm incoherent . . .indistinct . . . .how to place my startled-self's viewpoint here . . .not because I'm yet to shell out from the trance of that Fiercely Aesthetic "Khamakha Sequence" , but because I literally fall obnoxious when I encounter anything Inflaming Perfect . . .and this piece of art is something I dont own the aptitude to blaze it with words . . . Beauty of this OS ( Actually I found it more as wordy sketch of the real sequence ) is noway something I run onto every day . . . It's a "once in life time" confront . . .It's numbing me , more absolutely soothing me like some analgesics do on me when I fall fragile in ail . . . .

As i said in the beginning of this OS/post ..i don't know what i have written ..this was the immediate reaction after watching the episode..may b i just wrote whatever came to my mind...i am glad you liked it dear ..as u said it was mere wordy sketch of the actual sequence from my point of view..u are right dear..i was completely under trance of the beautiful sequence which didn't let me think anything original...just wrote whatever came to my mind or shall i say heart...this is directly from my heart

Di, if I plunge into dissecting bit by bit of this "phenomenal piece" , surreal hypnotism will shut me off in no time . . coz every time I sneaked in reading it , I got drifted away with more anesthetic pleasure which sealed me off some trackless direction . . .and I sighed . . .sighed with the bewilderment , how can someone write so flawlessly . . . how . . .

Awww...well I am spellbound ...I don't know how to react to this comment...my writing is full of flaws ...its my reader's love which makes it acceptable ...

And do u have any freaky idea - how breathtaking way u worded every line here . . . Each line , I emphasize , EACH line was etched as of something unflagging sophistication . . . SwaRon , nope actually VruShan were more than "Raw Perfection" on the screen 4th Feb and here u were the one who marauded the jeweling ornament of the forum as a writer and girl, how rightfully u deserve it . . . U excellency touched the celest, by far ur stringently peaked write up , I read . . .👏

Coming from u ..these words mean a lot...I tried to portray it in a different style...as the sequence was so special...different and unique ...just like our SWARON...shall i say Vrushan..who executed it so flawlessly ..i am borrowing ur words here.."Raw Perfection"

P.S- Di- as I implied , ur EVERY line was creamed with sheer perfection . . .but one particular line that personify my irresistible connectivity with the truth beyond the fictional zone - ...why the creator had to be so ruthless to give him all the breath-taking features together...

Didn't it mirror the accentuation of Shantanu Maheshwari , the imperator of perfection . . . SIGH . . . . ☺️

Well you won't believe me ..when I wrote this line..i was thinking about you..i know how crazy you are for HIM...HE DEFINES PERFECTION...no doubt...i can't thank you enough for this beautiful feedback dear...this is one of the BEST feedback i have got for any of my works

Turin ( Shantanu Soul )

Originally posted by: sakshibshah

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SWARON

Di...just loved the OS...mindblowing...
Unable to express my feelings.for Today's SWARON's Dance...and moreover this piece of ur work was like.."Chaar chaand laga diye"

Loved it too the core...m just SPEEHLESS...!!!

Luv,
Sakshi...