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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: sanstina
Amazing 😊
Every dancestep of Swaron is filled by emotions

Yes it is dear..thanx for the lovely comment😳

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Smiley1279
SUPERB...MIND BLOWING...AWESOME

thanx dear😳

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: shreyasi28
I have jst one word to say aftr reading dis WOW 👏

Hey shreya...thanx dear😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

diii 🤗
tanya,wonderful edit!!😳
you kept everything same just 2 changes ...according to sharon's POV n ...in the end made them ONE!😳...
di,this OS would be special for anyone coz you depicted a 2-3min scene so beautifully or i should say you maintained the same beauty which it had created!!😳😳😳and that is,mind you,really difficult to do!!
at some parts i could make out that your lost in SwaRonland!!😆 so i also went with you there😆
i liked how you used the green colour,very smartly,where all the jealousy or confused state was...😳you made sharon really expressive here!!😊
First those hypnotic eyes...than this husky voice of his...her heart was chirping like a mad bird...the glint in his eyes conveyed ..he was reading her heartbeats..more than she herself could understand her feelings...
😳😳😳
To stop the breath and try to die..in his embrace..death in embrace of your beloved...every heart pray for it ...which has experienced the feeling of love...the burning desires..the uncontrollable feelings ...it's not without meaning...without reason...the reason ..LOVE...
❤️❤️❤️❤️
and then when lyrics came you took the whole OS to SwaRonland!
so wonderfully described...really can't add more😃...coz you've described so much.from she being confused,to him controlling her,to falling in those eyes,gosh..so much in detail!!😳😆so since you've written from the SwaRonland it has to be the best OS for you!!😳
This madness is not without reason..I'm mad for him, but not without any reason..

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Satluvsd3
diii 🤗
tanya,wonderful edit!!😳
you kept everything same just 2 changes ...according to sharon's POV n ...in the end made them ONE!😳...
di,this OS would be special for anyone coz you depicted a 2-3min scene so beautifully or i should say you maintained the same beauty which it had created!!😳😳😳and that is,mind you,really difficult to do!!
at some parts i could make out that your lost in SwaRonland!!😆 so i also went with you there😆
i liked how you used the green colour,very smartly,where all the jealousy or confused state was...😳you made sharon really expressive here!!😊
First those hypnotic eyes...than this husky voice of his...her heart was chirping like a mad bird...the glint in his eyes conveyed ..he was reading her heartbeats..more than she herself could understand her feelings...
😳😳😳
To stop the breath and try to die..in his embrace..death in embrace of your beloved...every heart pray for it ...which has experienced the feeling of love...the burning desires..the uncontrollable feelings ...it's not without meaning...without reason...the reason ..LOVE...
❤️❤️❤️❤️
and then when lyrics came you took the whole OS to SwaRonland!
so wonderfully described...really can't add more😃...coz you've described so much.from she being confused,to him controlling her,to falling in those eyes,gosh..so much in detail!!😳😆so since you've written from the SwaRonland it has to be the best OS for you!!😳
This madness is not without reason..I'm mad for him, but not without any reason..

Babyyy🤗

Now this thread looks complete ..as my SATU comment is here..finally😳...this OS is the 1st one i have written from a sequence on the show ...as i am really scared to give my views about the real sequence..m happy in my imaginary world of swaron..but the beauty of this particular episode forced me to write something...i have tried to keep the essence same..just with few changes... all of us swaronians are craving for sharon's POV so described it from her POV...the lined u stated as ur favs are my favs as well...both swayam's description and the jealousy part...m really glad that u liked the lyrics part...m so happy to have my satu comment😃

Thanx babyyy...the last line is green describes every tannu phangirls' condition..he na😉

Luv u babyyy❤️

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-.Nisha.-

@-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Thread complete😲...mere comment ke bina😆
Aise kaise 😎
I am completely in awe of your writing.. 😳
Lovely OS..
Apologies for being so late in commenting.
Inne reminders ke baad bhi main sbse late
Next time se nahi hoga..pakka pee-raa-mise 😳
sharon's feelings and her inner turmoil was very well described.. 👏
beautifully written !!! 👍🏼
Thanks for linking me to this thread (pm ..scrap kya tha i dont remember 😆 )

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: --NishaGoyal--
Thread complete😲...mere comment ke bina😆
Aise kaise 😎
I am completely in awe of your writing.. 😳
Lovely OS..
Apologies for being so late in commenting.
Inne reminders ke baad bhi main sbse late
Next time se nahi hoga..pakka pee-raa-mise 😳
sharon's feelings and her inner turmoil was very well described.. 👏
beautifully written !!! 👍🏼
Thanks for linking me to this thread (pm ..scrap kya tha i dont remember 😆 )

Ooops...correct point..none of my works can b complete without ur highness's comment😉

Mujhe laga tha tu comment nhi karegi