Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

I would comment...but I cant stop laughing..which started as a giggle and now has become a full belly laughter. 😉😆

Awesome update.

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

awesome update... I cudnt stop laughing. ...
im so glad you guys are continuing this:)

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Sonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#493

HOYEEE! Arnav was actually making her jealous?

Plus Akash? He was unbelievable in this chapter. The whole idea of doing the whole arnav khushi eloping scene with akash and payal, that was sheer brilliance!

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#494

That was hilarious..! N i juz lov that kumud sundari part.! Oh god thats lovly.!

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swat.g

@swat.g

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Posted: 12 years ago

#495

YOU have DEADLY sense of humour.. 🤣 minimum coveragee maximum mileage indeed... 😆 and the famous caravan city Ratnagiri...killer...
Loved pheras-obsessed raizada reaction lol...hum aapke hai kaun...fan dammit...lov ur writing

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#496

just awesome and some parts of it was hilarious like akash inner talks and mami ji tooti hui english! thx loads for reviving these superb memories, was kind of missing mami ji english!

must say khushi is truly a sanka devi and only her could have though how to get to delhi without anyone getting suspicious about it!

mami ji for sure is going to take payal's class! but truly cant understand for such a quickie shaadi!

n yep who was the lady who answered arnav's phone! looks like someone was burning on the other side!

mind blowing update:)

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Lovely update...

Loved Akash's maathey and then the eyeshadow bit..

"your Nani is my Dadi and your ashram wali Dadi is noone to me" LOL.. Pun intended, i like that..

But Mami Baand has ears and how useful for her and irritating for Akash..

Loved your take on Ratnagiri and SLB.. It was funny...

Me too wants to know who's that girl? Is it Lavanya? me likes her😊

Khushi and Buaji were set for Delhi but Payal's phone turned it upside down.. I want Arnav & Khushi together.. bahut doori ho gayi..

Btw if it's Khushi's jiji who got married, it's Arnav's seedha-saada bhai too😉 So hopefully we'll see Arnav Khushi together face to face in the next update...

Please Emma do that.. I love their face-offs😆