Arshi SS: An Awakening Thread 1 **Awarded** - Page 52

Mumbai!!! All 3 in the helicopter plus pilot? Isn't there a weight limit?? Throw Natasha out! 😆

So glad that Arnav tried to apologize to her. Khushi thinks that Arnav likes Natasha...

Awesome updates...
Ya u r right... M missing arnav here...
Waiting for arshi romances...
Thanks for pm...

Hey...I finally caught up with your story. I think you are doing a wonderful job. Your writing flows so easily and eloquently.

Khushi is in one hell of a surprise ride.. waiting..

Nice to see natasha helping arnav and khushi.
Continue soon

Wow nice update. Not much arshi but like to read that arnav is thinking about her. I like Natasha's character. She is playing little Cupid here❤️

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

update?

I'm trying to update tonight, but my writing time is being cut down by nhl and nba playoffs, both my teams are in it!

Originally posted by: shree10

I am sorry but I am still 😡 at Arnav. As I wrote in last comment it's not abt accepting Khushi's invite but the way he rejected and then went ahead ignoring her hurt!
It reminded me of Diwali scene in IPK. First you make her feel she means something and then you treat her like this.
Khushi is always left hurt !! 😭

Hi Shree,

Thanks for your comments as usual...I really look forward to reading them after every update. I haven't been able to respond to reader comments as much as IF starts acting weird when I try to respond to too many.

I'm very sorry that you're disappointed with how Arnav reacted. But to his credit, he was curt because he's never been the type to jump up for joy for anything; his short responses has always been in his nature, and I'm not trying to change him all the way. The fact that he's trying to accept his growing feelings towards Khushi is telling that he's in the process of changing, but he's not there all the way yet. He definitely needs to work on being nicer!

He didn't stay around too long after she asked him out for lunch, as he didn't want to see the hurt look on her face. Also, this is my first time writing a story like this and sometimes what I want to convey doesn't come out properly. My intention wasn't to make him seem cold hearted and cruel; just a little awkward.

I personally hated the way Khushi was treated in the show...I will try my best to avoid it in future updates.

I do want to say thanks for reading my story and having patience with it. Hopefully Arnav will be able to make it up soon!

When will the next update be?