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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

i really loved the prologue.. it was so beautifully wriiten wow.. 👏👏👏

kriya ka POV tha.. it was amazing. 😊😊

missing shakti a lot.. kriyaansh wapas aa jao.. 😭😭😭

it was a gr8 start.. i really loved it specially kria's attitude..

mind blowing attitude yar.. 😉😉

plz make rey feel guilty.. bt i really dnt like kria being so rude.. 😭😭

(it is right on her part bt still)

yes tarey.. 😡😡 r in diff class.. 👏👏

swayam's guilt was wow..

all the 3 chpaters r amazing

plz update soon this time and do pm me..

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

awesome updates...

it was big update and i loved it...

very well written.. and i loved the way u r taking the story...

swayam is a sweet heart... he is starting it fresh...

i dnt like that taa rey moments in btw.. but i understand that it is necessary...

overall i loved it

update soon

thnx for pm

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

thank u 4 updating this ff...and 4 double update too...

awesome update...swayum ne kriya se friendship karliya & atleast he realized his mistake...taani kitna possessive hai rey ko lekar...

jab sach pata chalega toh kya hoga???? loved sharon's attitude... thanks 4 the pm... the story is getting more interesting...

pls update asap...eagerly waiting 4 it...

Edited by rhu90 - 12 years ago

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

I luvd Swayam here.. The way u described his feeling was just WOW!
n I'm not interested in Taa.. So skipped that part..
Overally a nice update..
Continue soon

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

wow
it was osam chappt
the way u describe there emotions
i lov it
i mean i truly felt there feeling
there confusion
anger
everyone right at there place
because no one know the real phase pf kriya's life
and kriya also right at her place
after all she expect lot of thigs from her friends
but they all fail in this
then i love swayams ..gesture
he again do new start with kriya as stranger
i think is the toughest phase of any ones life
when u r in a new relationship
anfd then ur past enter in ur life
but m really fely bad that
rey un ablr to under stand kriya
he was so wrong
but still
i love this
superb update
keep it up update soon m waiting
AROMA_RUBHARU😉

Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Awosm superb love it

update soon

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

happy holi!!! 🥳

superb updates...😃

swayam is guilty over his mistakes...

he totally forgot abt his bestie...😔

glad... he's trying to repent... by befriending her...😊

taani is furious over kriya's return 😳

well that makes me happy...😆

rey is definitely shaken with the same old magic

hahaha... these guys are ragging her again...😛

dhak dhak... vo bhi swayam k sath ... lolzz 😆

rey ka state of mind ko sach me hila daala...🤪

omg... he pulled her in fireexit... epic ☺️

rey ki issi adaa pe to hum fida h ...thats our 'kriya wala rey' 🤗

wat??? ... i never expected ki ye usse swaron k liye warn karega...😲

straight on his face... kya ans dia kriya ne...👏

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Amrutha

@only_kriyansh

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

mujhe rey par itna gussa haraha hai...😡arghhh...i should kill someone...

swayam bechara...n tani 🤬gang🤬rey🤬

pov sab mix up n it was beautiful as always...

ek req as always...kria ko plz abala naari maat banoa...😈

love u❤️

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deepshakriya

@deepshakriya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Mast update..fida..

I reli liked swayam in dis part..

D way u executed all pov..tat was ossum...

As always...it's fab..

N FE scene was portrayed well..👏

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Arpita hait (moon)

@MOON_ARSHA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Nice update di .
Loved it

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