This was one hell of a chapter!!! It was brilliant. After reading the first three paragraphs, I was like...woah! Is this some other person? 😆 You were already doing great with this story but with this chapter, I think you surpassed yourself. Congratulations!!!
The Payal-Khushi scene was beautiful. After reading it, I felt sad about the fact that Payal wasn't with Khushi now. Even though I never felt the need to have Payal in this particular story...after reading this part I realised how much I missed her. Or maybe, I'm just to overwhelmed and echoing Khushi's sentiments.
When Khushi started crying, it almost wrenched my heart apart. You made me so emotional with this update.
The last scene, when Arnav found Khushi was particularly well described. Very picturesque. It was almost as if I was watching the scene unfold in front of my eyes. Great job! 😃 And I loved the intensity of that part too. Can't wait to see what happens in the next part.
Excellently written. I just can't get over how good this chapter was. Fan ho gayye hum toh aapke! 😉
Me? In love? Nooo yaar! Not the kind you're talking about. Don't touch on touchy matters! 😆 😛
Edited by avantika_2012 - 12 years ago
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