SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14*

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#961

chap 42

lovely update.. thr first nite was super spl

Swayam and sharon sitting and talking were so nice

loved their convo, their understanding evrything was grt

chap 43

wow..what a grand confession.. loved it to the core😃

nd the bg added its own charm

all the arrangements done by sharon are fab

slow dance part was beautiful

their 1st kiss nd chotasa intimate moment☺️

loved ur romantic update nd last part too

do update soon nd sorry for late..😔

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TanHa_VruShan

@TanHa_VruShan

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#962

Hey, sorry I know I'm very late this time so I'll comment on 4 chapters at once :D
Firstly loved the way Sharon confessed, it was so damn cute...But Swayam? Uh-oh that majnu slept 😆 & all those cute moments before marriage were penned down beautifully...their feeling of Nervousness, happiness & contentment was very well written. Moreover the way you have elaborated all the rituals was very impressive. Chapter 43 just left me dumbstruck...I actually can't gather words to describe how extraordinary it was...the confession and then their first kiss...everything was just PERFECT! Totally SwaRonish. Commendable job Strawberry 😳 You write so beautifully that it makes very hard for a reader to wait for such a long time to read the next chapter so please do update soon... 😳

Edited by TanHa_VruShan - 11 years ago

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zk456789

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Posted: 11 years ago

#963

People who is ready for spamming?

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Noura

@lilinfinities

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Posted: 11 years ago

#964

OhMyGawd!!

What an amazing chapter! ☺️

It's PERFECT! PERFECT! PERFECT! 😆 👏

Sharon's arrangement and plan was awesome ❤️

CONFESSION!! THEIR CONFESSION + THEIR FIRST KISS!!

Love this song <3 <3 that dance <3 😳

And the last part 😲 I should wait for next chapter!! No I can't!!

And You are so angry to me 😭

I am so Sorryyy.!! I know I am late .. Please don't be angry to me Sakshi di

Next chapter on new thread kya?😃 Waiting!!

And again I am saying it was ROMANTIC Majnu n Laila!! ❤️

Beautifully Written! 👍🏼

Thanks for the PM 😊

and Keep Writing my Sakshi di! ❤️

I am sooo sorryy again! for the late comment 😭

Love you! ❤️

Update sooon..Can't wait 😆

Should I spam? 😆😆😆

It was short or not?

Edited by -Noura- - 11 years ago

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zk456789

@zk456789

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Posted: 11 years ago

#965

Come on people lets complete the thread

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zk456789

@zk456789

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Posted: 11 years ago

#966

Jitna jaldi finish hoga utna jaldi new thread main new chapter milega

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zk456789

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Posted: 11 years ago

#967

Ek to zyada spam b nai kar sakte 😭

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#968

I just missed previous few updates but i am really glad to see such a good progress of ur story..finally swaron are married and sharon's confession was just fab..I am in hurry but i'll comment tonight for sure..Till then reserved shakshi..

Thanx for the PM

Prateek