SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14* - Page 98

Originally posted by: prateek.007

Sakshi i echo prateek's sentiments, beautifully written piece, song selection, their duets, and sadness introduced, and how both of them overcome with their love for each other is just out of this world. This is the second time I am reading the first thread of swaron kismet connection😃

Hey Sakshi,

Everytime i kept reserved my comments here,And i also felt bad for writer sake as it really hurt if someone forget after reserving his comment..but finally i just completed this task to read ur all previous chapters..The story is seriously amazing yar,I mean as a writer u undertook such a great task to write something different for sharon character..According to my thesis,i felt sharon character was quite different from diva image,she was like simple girl..But it was beautifull to read her bond with her family members..Shivam character was nice one to fullfill villian space here..A perfect villian for SwaRon.😆 I just loved the character of Khushi..After reading her death part,i was numb..There u showed ur wrting skills to penning down such sad stanzas of crucial life..The friendship bond of khushi n swayam was beautifully conveyed..She kept supporting swayam to help sharon..But the ending of her character was really sad..

I specially mention the sequence of "Kabira",which u had beautifull showed including song lyrics and their interconnection with swaron..I felt numb..seriously..

Here sharon part was also amazingly penned including her fear and hurting feeling towards her husband shivam..Simi and gang part was also great catalyst here..I like that special friendly bond of simi n sharon..In all,i just loved all the previous chapters but unfortunately i am only don upto chapter 23..I have to read rest of the chapters..So i'll read today night and will comment after that..Till then keep updating n keep smiling..

Thanx for ur all PM's

Prateek