SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14*

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Hey sakshi,

Awesome updates..I am resuming from chapter 34..I like that rose scene,where u showed the emotions in such a cute n romantic manner..I loved the dialouge delivery there..Tashan group wala part is bit confusing as ur story proceeded,i felt yash,the guy sounds weird here,in short,the chap was nice..Now in chapter 35,i loved the way u described sharon's part..Seriously,it was perfectly penned..She had suffered a lot n still she is suffering due to her past circles..Abondoned corridor wala scene was perfectly done, loved the way she confessed her inner termoil.. and swayam comforted him in such a soothing manner..Now again yash as a character is giving me negative vibes so i am just looking forward...Do update soon as ur comfort..

Thanx for the PM

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago

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Sneha_Shantannu

@Sneha_Shantannu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

Lovely updates liked every part very very much.

Update soon... sorry for delay.

Sammy.😳

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Thanks for the lovely response. 🤗
Next chapter is ready!!

Recap- The dress problem, SwaRon hug, Abondoned Corridor- Sharon speaks her heart out to Swayam.

It was 10 in Night.

Sharon was sitting on the bed... thinking about what happened in the Morning...
Unwillingly a smile plastered on her lips... when she looked at his photo which was kept beside her...
She picked up the photo frame and caressed it...

Sharon- You know...you are the best...

She just switched off the lights and slept with his photo close to her...

***

Here, with Swayam, the case was bit different...

Nandini- Swayam... Dinner ready hai...
Swayam- Mom...mujhe bhuk bilkul nahi hai... aap aur Dad kha lo...
Nandini- Are...we had our food...tum chalo...

Swayam gave no response...Nandini came to him...
Nandini- Tum thik ho na?
Swayam- Haan...I am okay... I'll have a cup of coffee...later...but not now... please!
Nandini- You sure?
Swayam- Yup! Okay..? Good night...
Nandini- Hmm..good night...

***

Swayam was in his study room... working on some important file... but he was not able to concentrate on the work... he closed the file...and went to Balcony... (Backside of the study room)
He leaned on the railings...(grill) , thinking something... and later unknowingly...he found himself breaking down... drops of water on the back of his hand... which were flowing down continuously from his eyes...

Swayam- I don't know...why these tears are in my eyes when you smiled after talking to me... when I consoled you... when I myself made you feel better... I actually want to know the reason... may be I am not able to understand myself... aaj jo kuch hua subah... you... shared what you never spoke to anyone... but still I am not satisfied with myself... the way I consoled... because what you faced... it was *sniff* painful... the past... our first meet...your mood off... everything... you had faced so many problems...but I was not with you... I find myself guilty... I know for you... my words were enough... but for me... no... jo bhi meine tumhe bola... that was true...but I am not..just not able to apply that on myself...! *crying a bit* Sharon...I am sorry! May be I was not able to make you forget those instances... sorry for that... so..sorry!!

He wiped his tears...came inside...the room...he looked at his watch...
Swayam- Its 2am now... I know you must be sleeping...but..I won't be able to sleep...if I don't come now to meet you..!

He took his Car keys and drove off to Sharon's home...No one knew that...

***

Secretly he climed to her room... and entered... there he found his Siren sleeping peacefully...
He came infront of her...and sat beside her... the thing which caught his attention was..the frame she was holding close to her... he gently pulled the frame and found that it was his photo... and then left it like it was before... this surely made him smile...

Swayam- Sharonn... you sleep with me in your thoughts and same do I... you smile cause of me and same do I... you cry due to some reason and so do I, seeing you like that... you never came across the side of mine when I shed down tears... the reason is I..I just don't want you to feel the same seeing me... I want you to smile...and hope I did the same... Your shedding of tears...hurts me... Sharon...

Swayam kneeled down on the floor...and started caressing her hairs lovingly... tears brimmed in his eyes...

Swayam *continued*- I just spoke some words and you smiled...you understood... but I didn't remove your pain... I know... everything has the right time...and I am waiting for it... and I promise Shar...Sharon... that I'll kiss your each and every pain... I will make you feel loved... I promise... to shower my love which I have for you! Just let the day come... You are my life..I love you..! Love you...each day more!

Sharon was still in a deep sleep...so couldn't hear him...
And a tear drop fell from his eyes... he bent forward and placed a kiss on her forehead and stood up... mouthed "good night" and climbed down...

***
Days passed happily... Swayam Sharon used to spend time together... Yash was unaware of SwaRon being in relation...so he used to find chance to talk to Sharon but Sharon used to get irritate because everytime he used to say Thankyou...and leave... Swayam and others used to laugh...because Yash was neither a harm to her...nor Swayam n Sharon's relation...

In College;

Sharon- Guyss... three weeks passed... sirf 15 days are left... and fir Competition hai... please guys, we have to win this!
Yash- Thanks...for...telling...
Sharon- Please...will you stop saying thanks' everytime...
Yash- Ohh..okay...

Swayam standing infront of Sharon was giggling... Sharon gave him a stop it' look... he just nodded...

Simmi- Swayam... Dance aaj choreograph karne ka mann nahi hai kya? Last part hi to bacha hai... lets do it...
Swayam- Umm..ohh yeah...wo mein thoda hasne mein busy ho gaya tha...islie...bhul gaya...
Sharon- Arghh...Swayam!! Will you just stop and come here...? To choreograph... okay?
Swayam- Are...why angry? I am coming na...

Everyone rehearsed properly... the group dance... the solos...(Sharon was participating) and the duets...everything was done...
They all were relaxing when Swayam received a call...

"Haan Dad..."
"Emergency??"
"What...how can be he so careless.!!"
"Dad...bohot zyada...time tak...wahan.."
"Umm...okay...I'll leave tomorrow..."
"Hmm..yeah bye!"

He kept the phone... Sharon saw him...
Sharon- Hey...kya hua??
Swayam- Problem aa gayi hai Sharon...
Sharon- Are clear bolo na...
Swayam- Are Office ki jo Foreign Branch hai na... waha problem aa gayi hai... business se related...
Sharon- So...now??
Swayam- I'll have to handle that...aur uske liye mujhe London jaana padega...almost 2.5 months ke liye...
All- Whattt..??!!!!
Swayam- Yeah guys...
Sharon- Kab jaana hai???
Swayam- Kal... hi...subah...
Nilesh- Abe...ye kya yaar...
Swayam- Mein kuch nahi kar sakta yaar... sorry!
Sharon- Swayam! Why you are saying sorry...huh... kaam ke liye hi jaa rahe ho na...so... aur vaise bhi humare dances ready and sab complete ho chukka hai...but practice chahiye...
Swayam- But still...Sharonn...
Sharon- Tum chup karo...and guys! No disappointed faces plz... Competition ki tyaari chalu rakho...and hum Swayam ko surprise denge ki we won...Captain ko zyada khushi hogi na...kyun?!
Swayam *in mind*- Goshh...Sharonn...I love you! Thanks...really...
All- Yes humari Captain ki Captain...
Swayam- Yes! Ofcourse... I'll wait for the news there...
Sharon smiled...
Swayam- Umm...guys...mujhe abhi Office ke liye nikalna hai...you all keep practicing...and yeah...kal College aana possible nahi hoga...so All the best.! Video chat...pe milte hai...
Nilesh- Are bilkul...

Everyone hugged him... Yash smiled...because he thought now he will be able to talk to Sharon when Swayam noticed this...

Yash was approaching to the girls...when Swayam indicated something to Sharon.. she came in Yash's way and forwarded her leg... Yash didn't see (the others also didn't) and fell forward making Sharon lose her balance...but before she could fell down, immediately Swayam pulled Sharon towards himself... and there Aman gave a hand to Yash... he got up...

Yash- Wo..sorry...wo mein...
Sharon- Are are...no sorry...actually Thanks to you...
Yash- Kisliye??
Sharon- Are you made me also lose my balance and Swayam saved me... and who girl won't like being saved by her fiance'...
Taani- Ahem ahem...
Yash- Fiance???

Sharon n Swayam both, together, showed him their hand's back by raising it up...stariaght infront of his eyes...
Yash was shocked...he gulped down his saliva...

Yash- Oh...well..welcome...
Sharon *sternly*- Actually...you should stop following girls like foolish...and mainly when you don't know their status!
All laughed at this... Yash moved out feeling embaressed...

Swayam- Acha...Sharon...I'll leave...
Sharon- Yeah okay! Bye!

***
It was Evening time...

Nandini was doing some work and Swayam was talking to someone on phone...

"Ting tong"
Kaka opened the door... someone indicated him not to tell who was there... Kaka smiled
Nandini- Kon hai Kaka??
Kaka- Koi nahi... wo...
Nandini- Are...aise kaise...k...

That person slowly came inside... behind Nandini...and before Nandini could continue the person closed her eyes...screaming... "Maa"
Swayam just came out hearing the scream...

Nandini turned horrified... she immediately touched those hands...but with a smile...
Nandini- Maa...?! Yeh meri Sharon ke alawa koi nahi ho sakta hai...

She was Sharon... she removed her hands and Nandini turned back...taking her in hug...

Nandini- I missed you!
Sharon- I too... vaise aap pehchaan gayi mujhe...
Nandini- To fir... "Maa" to tumhari hun na...
Sharon *breaking the hug*- Ohh...goshh...emotional nahiii... aap smile karte waqt zyada cute lagti ho...
Swayam came down...and also heard whole convo...
Swayam- Mujhe bhulna is not allowed...!
Sharon- Mein jisko chahe bhul jaun...meri marzi..kyun Mumma...?
Nandini chuckled- Ofcourse...vaise surprise diya aaj?
Sharon- Wo yeh kal jaa raha hai na...so isliye...
Nandini- Okay! Ab aayi ho to Swayam ki packing mein help kar do...he is so lazy!
Swayam- Mom...kuch bhi...huh...
Sharon- Are not lazy...he is dumbo...haina Swayamm...?
Swayam- Siren Sharonn...
Nandini- Are basss! Sharon jao tum...iske room mein...

Sharon kissed her on cheeks and went up with Swayam to his room...

Sharon- Umm... yeh cupboard mein se mujhe kapde nikal ke do...and I'll set them in the suitcase.
Swayam- Yeah yeah...

This continued... Sharon finally packed his luggages...and important stuff...

Swayam- Sharonn... lets have Dinner..?
Sharon- Yeah sure...

They were having Dinner...
Nandini- Sharon...tumhare haath ka khana... Rajeev and I miss so much...
Sharon- Are! To apne bola kyun nahi...mein aaj bana deti na...
Nandini- Umm... deal karte hai kal ki... Swayam nahi rahega...to tum saath mein rehna...
Sharon- Aur khana mere haath ka! Deal?
Swayam- Oooh...waittt... Maa... this is unfair... I'll miss that!
Sharon- Aww...bad luck...
Nandini- Sorry Swayam! Only Me, Rajeev and Sharon...you are out...
Swayam- Huh... this is good... okay! I am done... mujhe zyada bhuk nahi thi aaj...

And he got up from his seat...and went to wash his hands... Sharon and Nandini exchanged looks...
Nandini- Huh...
Sharon- Mumma... lao plate do... mein khila ke aati hun...uss melo-dramatic ko...
Nandini *smile*- Haan sure...

***
In the Bedroom;
Sharon- Swayam...have your food...
Swayam- No...
Sharon- Aaj gussa karoge???
Swayam *turning face to other side*- Any problem...
Sharon- Kal se vaise bhi for about 3 months you won't be here... mere haath se khalo...

Swayam turned to her... Sharon fed him...and he just ate silently...
Swayam- Emotional blackmail achha hai..huh...
Sharon-Tumhe jo samjhna hai samjho...I gonna miss you...
Swayam- To you think I won't..?? I'll also...Sharonnn...

Sharon made him finish his food... and then came back to him...
Sharon *smile*- Acha...I need to go now... drop karne nahi chaloge kya!
Swayam- Ofcourse...

Sharon just came to him and rested her head on his chest...and he wrapped his hands around her...

Later, Swayam dropped her home and also met Gautam... and Renuka... took their blessings and went home.

***

At Airport...

Swayam was with Sharon... Their parents were standing near the counter...

Swayam- Meet you after some days!
Sharon- Video chatting, phone calls...only when you are free okay?
Swayam- Jab mera mann karega...tab...
Sharon *tears brimming*- Kaam pe dhyaan pehle...samjhe...and pohoch jaoge to text karna.
Swayam *tears*- Tum aise rote hue bye karogi na...to mein tumhe chhodkar jaa hi nahi paunga...!

*The announcement for taking off*
Tears rolled down both's eyes... Swayam pulled her in a hug...

Sharon- I'll miss you..Swayam...Bye... take care...
Swayam- Hmm... now stop...I'll miss you too... take care of yourself and everyone... bye!

Swayam kissed her forehead, then bid bye to both families and to Sharon also...
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Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

Thanks for the response. Really feeling nice. 🤗
How was the Chapter by the way???? The emotional side of Swayam???? Hope it was readable.😕
N the seperation! 😆 Sorry but had to do this, you all will get to know why.😉
If you found it non-SwaRonilicious, Sorry!

For further story updates.. keep LIKING n COMMENTING. Your comments encourages me so much.Criticism always welcomed.😊

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Lots of Love.
Sakshi.

Edited by sakshibshah - 11 years ago

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Amazing update

Loved the way Swaron showed Yash his place

Swaron scenes were nicely penned

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#776

Update ws as usual lovely😃

the way u described swayam's emotion ws jst incredible

luved it

Swaron seperate hope they will be 2gther soon

Keep writing Sakshi😃

-Mansi

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Wow wow wow :)

Amazing update :)

Lovely :)

Emotional side of Swayam was described beautifully :)

Aur finally Yash ki bolti band ho gayi :)

Is judai ko jaldi khatam kardo ...

Update soon :)

Thanx for the scrap :)

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Update was awesome as always
happy yash comes to know about swaron engagement
thanks for the scrap
do update soon

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#779

Great update
Loved the swaron moments
Yash got to know his place finally
How will this wait of 2.5 months end
Update soon thanks for the scrap

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#780

oh ho dear...
great one..
mja aa gya...jb swaron n yash ko truth btaya...awww..
swayam is gonna away from sharon for almost 3 months...plz unhe jldi mila dena..
emotional blackmail is awesome dear..
update soon..
thanks 4 d scrap