Hey Strawberry 🤗
c i have exams tomorrow lekhin phir bhi m commenting today itself on your FF...i knw m too good 😆 anyway chalo ab meri tariff band karte hai and update ki tariff karte hai... :D coming to not this one but the last one...sorryyy abhi bhi last update par comment nahi kiya tha meine...but dnt wrry abhi dono updates par kar rahi hoon... :D
So coming to the last update it was superb...Aww i felt sad for Swayam and Khushi..they met with an accident...and poor Khushi she was in a critical condition but she was still thinking about Sharon...how sweet she is...but woh Shivam joh hai woh Sharon ko torture hi karta rehta hai...he doesn't even care a bit about her 😡 feeling very bad for Sharon 😭 anyway update was good you have penned down nicely... :)
And now coming to chapter 9 it was mind blowing i luved this chapter...i could clearly visualize Simmi's condition after knowing about Shivam and the way he was treating Sharon...and thank godd that Ankita has agreed to help them...pheww Shivam is out of town...finally atleast thode dino keliye Sharon ko Shivam se chutkara mila...hope yeh thode dinno keliye gaya out of town woh permanent hojaye :P and yeh kya Khushi is dead?? 😭 I was luving her character yaar... 😭 going to miss her character in this FF... :'( Khushi ko marne se acha uss Shivam ko maar deti :( Anyway hope Nil, Simmi and Swayam ka plan successfull hojayega...So all in all both chapters were brilliantly penned down...luved it to the core
Now m waiting ki Shivam ko tu iss FF se kab hatayegi...i so hate him 😡 and now zyaada intezaar maat karwa hume dusra chapter padhne ko...so jaldi se update karde...m so eagerly waiting to read the next chapter...even though i have exams i read your updates... 😳 so chalo chalo next chapter likhne mein shuru hoja... :P :P update soon... :D
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Ur Shinysim 😳
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