SwaRon FF : The Undesired Love. Chapter 14 Updated. - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chaitra-

Very nice update😊

i like this social service minded sharon..😃
and swayam annoying sharon part was really nice...😉
who is this ammy?...i dont think i like her much
update next part soon and pm me😳


Thank you :D
and dnt worry ammy is a very good girl :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suni1986

Sry for late reply

i read ur all 3 prev updates n they r awesome.


really? thank you :D

Swaron meet was amazing
swayam likes to irritate sharon

simmi mad for him nd sharon don't care abt him.
Swaron meet again that too hilarious.

Swayam also irratating her by going to sharon cafe nd make her to work for him.

Lovely updates


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

sharon loved children to spent some time with them...
and her friends quite sometime think different...
i loved the way swayan always built up some burst out from sharon...
continue soon and pm me...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -spongy-

another amazing update

loved it
simply wow
thanks for the PM
update soon
and do PM me..

PS. sorry for the short comment
i;m traveling 😕


Thank you so much :D
btw yeh comment chotta hai, chalta hai but ive noticed aaj kal tere comment chotte chotte hote hote 1 liners hi ban gaye hai 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

awesome update

the way he annnoyed her n her reaction on it were😆
loved it
thanx for the pm
update soon


Thank you so much :D
and ure welcum :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prakriti4u

amazing update..
loved the way he annoyed her 😆
excited to read further..
update soon 😃
thanks for the PM 🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan

awesome updates!!

swayam annoying sharon and her reactions r super good nd cute!!
well written!
thanks for the pm:)


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: piyu1990

swayam annoying sharon.. kitna tang karega ye ladka use
who's this new girl?

guess, guess and guess. btw if u have lot the count, i have 4 girls in this FF. sorry 5 i think. ya 5, kriya sharon and simmi u know. ally and amy are new

sharon is going to lonavala to spent some time with children
swayam bhi ane wala hai kya waha?

aa gaya 😆

excited to read further..
update soon..


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: VickyLover

LOVED the updates and its cute how swaron gt on each others nerves...
I hope to see more of swaron ahead...
thnxx for the pms and do pm me bout the future chapter and updates as well...well written 😉


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Hey Aisha, um sorry for not commenting before.


thats totally fine. im glad u commented :D

I read all the four updates and its amazing how you have turned this FF.
I like the title too, the undesired love! Niccee!

Thank you :D. though i wasnt too happy with the title but i guess it perfectly fits in now :P

You explained swayam and sharon lives pretty well from the start! And then their fights, lol simmi is mad about swayam and sharon don't even care 😆
Who is this ammy? and what health she was talking about?

Dont worry nothing big. i specially mentioned this part in the next update for ure satisfaction :P

Sharon going lonavala! 😃

Really looking forward for the next one!
Great and amazing flow. 👏
Keep it up!
Update soon!


Thank you so much for the lovely comment

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