SwaRon FF : The Undesired Love. Chapter 14 Updated.

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..Aishaa..

@..Aishaa..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: -Marium-

Itna sarai taunts! 😛 LOL! 😆

Wesai na bhi karegi tu kya ho jayega coz none of my friends comment on my work.. i am used to of it from past few months..

ab tu hai hi in tanunts ke layak.

obviously i will. ab toh aaj hi karungi

ohh by the way i need ure help.

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-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

superb update

loved it a lot...

amazing tha

thanks for the PM

update soon

and do PM me\loving this FF a lot

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Rajeshwari

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Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

firstly loved shars bonding with te children.. it was written really well!

secondly swayams surprise was amazing!

thirdly overall it was a fab update!!

thanks for the pm:)

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Chapter 1

Loved the way you introduced Swayam and Sharon. I love this FF Aisha. Swayam an actor and Sharon a college girl. It's really interesting. Loved how Sharon's mother was teasing her, 'my future son in law' 😆 Awesome chapter.

Chapter 2

Woah their first meeting was not so good. Swayam spilled coffee on poor Sharon. But I am super excited for the next chapter. They are going to meet again. At least Swayam knows her name. but Sharon, she doesn't know anyone other than Amitabh Bachchan, Shahrukh and Salman. Though Shahrukh is my fav but still I want Sharon to know about Swayam Shekhawat.

Chapter 3

Oh my God, Swayam is planning for revenge??? I just hope he doesn't hurt her or something. Btw awesome update. Poor Sharon I could have guessed how much guilty she might have felt. But now Swayam wants to take revenge. Huh. That's not done. But its going to be interesting. But I loved the fact that Sharon is the only girl whom Swayam likes to irritate.

Chapter 4

Arghh Swayam is so mean. I mean how could he irritate Sharon so much. But then I am happy. After all its only Sharon whom he likes to irritate. N about Rohan and Sid, this happens when you have lots of money, you tend to lose real friends. But Amyy is a great friend anyone can have in one's life. Swayam is lucky to have her. N wow Sharon is so sweet. She spends her time with those beautiful kids in the orphanage. That's really kind and great of her.

Chapter 5

Wow beautiful update. I really like Swayam and Amyy's friendship. She really is a great friend. The way you described Sharon enjoying with the kids in the rain was beautiful. It was beautifully penned. Swayam was so surprised to see Sharon 'the sheer beauty' but truly oops she saw him and its quite obvious her expression will change into an annoying one. Can't wait to read their encounter. Update it tomorrow for sure. n your demand is almost complete. N do pm me.

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

it was really nice update..
sharon bonding with children was very sweet..
am very curious to know about amy n ally..
n why amy lie about rohan to swayam😕..
swayam also in lonavla😃..
swayam saw sharon n admiring her😊..
oops bad luck sharon spotted him..now who will save swayam😆..
poor sharon came lonalva to refresh her mind but again will stuck with swayam only😆😳
loved it..
update soon..
thanks for the scrap :)

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..Aishaa..

@..Aishaa..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

NOTE

okay guys im happy wih the response im getting over this FF. but ive noticed quite a few of you get confused midway or dont understand something. some of you even miss a chapter or 2. so i have started a new system for this FF. after every 5 chapters, i will answer all ure doubts and questions, so do mention it in ure comments. and i would even give a summary of those 5 chapter. so for now the summary as follows. nature2 , hope this helps u

SUMMARY CH 1-5

This story is about 2 individuals, Swayam Shekhawat, a known actor of Bollywood, very famous between girls and Sharon raiprakash, a college going girl, wants to be independent and not at all into movies. Swayam seems to be harsh nut from within he is as soft as feather. he believes in true love and is sure of the fact that he will find it one day. Sharon on the other hand doesnt believe in something known as love. She believes in being practical in life and thinks all of this is just a time pass to add some spice to ure life.

One day Swayam has gone for coffee to a cafe. while going towards the washroom he bumps into Sharon and by mistake the coffee is spilled over her. He tries to clean it but sharon starts doubting his intentions. When she starts talking to him harshly it all leads to a bad encounter and something like a war begins between them. Sharon s annoyed as an angry bird leaves.

Their second encounter takes place at a wedding they both land up in. Swayam being the chief guest and sharon being simmis friend or indirectly the brides friend. When simmi forces sharon to meet the chief guest she is shocked to see swayam out there.Simmi is shocked to know sharon knows swayam because she had always been a die hard fan of bollywood. Swayam and sharon again have a fight and sharon again frustrated leaves from there.

Swayam had now done honours in irritating sharon so to irritate her furtehr he went to the cafe again the evry next day and made her do alot of work for him. after a while she again got frustrated and sent someone else to take the order.

Sharon being frustrated with her life decided to go and spend some time with the children in an orphange. That would calm her a bit. Swayam due to shotting agendas lands up at the same place. Sharon is at the orphange having fun witht he children while swayam is shotting for his upcoming movie. suddenly it starts raining. Sharon goes to the lawn with all the children to get wet whereas swayams shooting jas been cancelled because of the rain. even his van was flooded with water and driving in this rain wasnt safe. a known orphange ebing the closest he decides to go there. He reaches the orphange and finds sharon there enjoying with the children. he just stands their admiring her beauty when suddenly she notices him there.

well that was all that happened in chapter 1-5. hope my this effort would help you guys. doubts i have just got 2 yet. so ill answer them. and the ones you ask before chapter 6 will also be answer here. do check out if uve asked a question here only. ull find the answer. for now ill answer the 2 questions.

DOUBTS

nature 2 - hope now its clear to u what has happened till now.

Kashmi - i cant really disclose who ally is. but yes amy is swayams younger sisiter. if i havent mentioned in the story im sorry but im sure it will be evident in the next 2-3 updates :)

Edited by ..Aishaa.. - 12 years ago

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: ..Aishaa..

<font color="#6600ff">thank you for the lovely comment</font>
<font color="#6600ff">me replies in blue :)</font>

yes i read it all in one go only😊
tired not at all..i didn't notice when i finished reading all updates..wanted to read further but soon realize there is no more update😆😃
already added buddy list😃
u r welcome..
will try to like n comment in every update until i get hell busy😉

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Wow I read all the five chapters together u write beatifully aishaa..😳 👍🏼.. The first swaron meet was something I have never read before unique they are not smitten by each other but swayam was affected enough by her to remember her name..😊.. The angry sharon and the playboy swayam wow I love the character sketches and your concept is also amazing I'm super excited to read the chapters of this ff..😃
Going to the cafe and making sharon angry by requesting her to take the order for him and sending her in the kitchen again and again for water was funny swayam was testing sharon's patience..🤣.. I'm confused but who is amy and ally if u could clear this doubt of mine..😳
Sharon and swayam again meet at the orphanage him admiring sharon in the rain wow eager to read the next chapter aishaaa update soon ASAP..😊 ❤️
Love,
Kashmi..