Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 22

Created

Last reply

Replies

387

Views

27.5k

Users

17

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

..oneOone.. thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

Ana that was fantastic part 👏 but JUNAID 😭 m sure k Junaid ko kuchh nahi hoga nahi hoga na?
chalo yar abhi jaldi se cont karo cant w8 long



hey R.S
no thanx 4 comments
it always feel good 2 know u like the part
me will cont soon dear

lol
ana
KulBin thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
hey ana dear dats so chhhwwweeettt of u.... 😛
gr8 Congrats for ur results.... 👏
now plz post the next part.... 😊
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
congo ana dear... 👏
ab please story jaldi se continue karo..intezaar nahi ho raha hain... 😃
..oneOone.. thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 19 years ago
Part-13

LAAJ reach hospital and went to the O.T

REHAN & JANNAT were continuously pacing here and there near the front door of O.T

LAAJ reaches to them

LAAJ:ghabratay howay…………………abh kaisa hai who

JANNAT:teary………..us ki halat bohut kharab hai……..doctors ka keh….n…a……

In the mean time doc came out of the O.T

Doc: jaldi main…………have u arrnge the blood

REHAN:yes sir………………she is LAAJ………….our friend…………and wanna denote her blood to him as her blood group is also the same

Doc:ok then……………miss.laaj……………come with me

Laaj follows him………………..doc do somne test and came to her with a worried expressions

Laaj:on seeing the doc…………………what's happen………..is every thing ok

Doc:miss laaj…………….i had done some tests of u…………….and I came to know that ur wait is 56…………but on this u can only donate 1 bottel…………..which is not enough for him…………but

Laaj:now what

Doc:see………..i don't wanna hide something………………the donation might be became serious 4 u…………………as the amount of red blood cells in ur body is less than average……………which might be dangerous 4 u……....now its up to u whether u wanna donate or not

Laaj:without thinking………….what r u asking doc?…………..i don't care of me………..but plz save him…………..i m donating and that's final

Doc:ok………………..but u have to sign some papers 4 that ……..in which it is written that u r donating blood on ur own risk and hospital is not related to it

Laaj:confident……………..ya I will………………doc………….but plz don't tell this to rehan or jannat

Doc:smiles a lil……………ya I will not………………..i must say…………u r proving that u r a good friend

She signs the paper……………….in the mean time doc ask rehan 4 arrange more blood and he left immediately 4 that

Now guys………………..the situation iss like the laaj was donating her blood in the room next to him

We see half of the scene in which laaj is donating blood…………….and in the other half………..JUNAID is in O.T …………..under the treatment of doc…..and unconscious

After half an hour…………….rehan was back…………but he also only get one bottle……….laaj came out of the room and jannat and rehan make her sit on the bench

The atmostphere was filled with gr88 tension…………..the nurses cam out but didn't give ne ans about JUNAID's condition

Rehan and jannat were continuously pacing here and there

LAAJ had not eat anything after donation…………..doc ask her to eat something but she refused and came out……………and now she was feeling a lil dizzy……….but she didn't tell it neither to rehan nor to jannat

After 3 hours doc came out smiling

Rehan and jannat rushes to him and LAAJ follows them while her head were continuously feeling dizzy

Doc:congrates……………ur friend is save now………….u can say……it's a miracle……b-coz his condition was really bad

Rehan:thanx doc………………its all b-coz of ur efforts and God's will

Doc:ya it is…………….but someone else is also include in it

JANNAT:confused……………..who doc?

Doc:smiling and look at LAAJ who also have a weak smile on her face………this young lady…………………if she didn't reach at time and didn't donate her blood……..it would never be possible to save him

LAAJ:this was my duty doc

Doc:smiles……………today I believed on that saying by heart that a friend is need in a friend indeed………………as u guys show that
Rehan & jannat smiles and say:thanx doc……………

On the other hand laaj can't stand ne more…………………..her head was not in control of her…………………..everything looks blank to her…………the world seems to be fading and she fell down

JANNAT & REHAN looks back instantly…………….and catches her

JANNAT:worried………laaj…………laaj kia howa

But laaj was unconscious

Doc:has she eat nething

Jannat says immediately:no

Doc:stupid girl……………..i have told her to eat nething…..but she didn't……….u guys should ask her that…………..u guys know that after donation she should have to eat nething

The doc called the nurse and make her lay on the stretcher and ask the nurse to get a glucose bottle

Abh laaj ka kia ho ga……………….kia who bachti hai k nahin
See that in next part

Lol
ana
..oneOone.. thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 19 years ago
did no one like this part yaar
tell me seroisly if u don't?

i will try to write better

😭
😭

lol
ana
Surya.Ravi thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
ana dear first of all me very no sorry that me posting comments a bit late...actually i was caught up in some work ,so was not able to comment.. 😭 i hope you understand... 😃 ab rahi baat teri kahani ki tho uske baare mein main kahoon tho kya kahoon... tune bohat hi mast , zabardast , cool , bindass part likha hain yaar.. 👏
laaj is shooo nice...woh junaid ke liye apni life ko khatre mein daal rahi hain....she is very good.... 😳 lekin ab yeh laaj kyun behosh ho gayi.. 😭
agar laaj behosh ho gayi tho junaid ka khayal kaun rakhega...ab chal laaj ko jaldi se theek karo aur let laaj take care of junaid..issi bahane laaj aur junaid kareeb aajayenge..kyun ???? 😉
ab please agla part jaldi se post karna..me will be waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
Rajeev_gr8 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
Ana that was superb just gr8 part 👏 magar ab Laaj is also admited in hospital 😭 😭 😭 yar ab jaldi se cont karo plz
Rajeev_gr8 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey R.S

don't cry yaar
i promise to cont tomorrow

and a good news

app sab ki duwaoon ki wajha say i am passed in intermediate

no thanx 4 ur prays yaar

lol
ana

Hey Ana congrats yar m soooo happy 4 u 😃

ab mujeh bhi tumhari duwaon ki zaroorat hai 😆

& congrats 1ce again

KulBin thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
hey ana dear kya baat hai... Laaj ne risk le kar bhi Blood donate kiya Junaid k liye... 👏 👏
very very nice part.... 👏 👏
so finally Junaid is out of Danger... 😛
par ab laaj Behosh.... 😳 gr8 gng.... 👏
plz dear cont soon.... 😊
fakhra thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
hey ana dear first of all congratz........ 👏 .u r intelligent n talented..............

part was superb........fab........fantastic......now plz cont soon aur laaj ko kuch maat honay dayna aur haan junaid ko laaj se zaror milwana.......... 👏
Edited by fakhra - 19 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: LizzieBennet · 6 months ago

Hello, hello writers, graphicers, readers and all IF ites! We are finally ready to announce the results of the much-awaited Pyar ka trope fest...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".