Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 24

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Yar ana plz cont soon yar
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part-14

Rehan and jannat were quite worried about both of them………………..it was about to morning when AZAN starts……………..rehan went to the nearer mosque to pray 4 his friends while jannat also do WAZU and say prayer and pray GOD to give life to her friends

Rehan was back and doc come to him

DOC:mr.rehan………….ur friend JUNAID is quite well now…………….he will came to his senses in an hour or so……………….he didn't have ne internal injuries but only have some rashes on his head and hand………….it was a miracle that he save……..the girl LAAJ helped a lot as JUNAID's head was bleeding and due to blood deficiency he can be dead in a few hours if he didn't get that blood……………. We had also done some tests to confirmed that he didn't have any internal injuries…..

REHAN:with a small smile……….that's a good news doc………..its all b-coz of GOD's will and ur help……………..(after that he get a worried expression)…….but what about LAAJ doc

DOC:quite worried………………well …………….i just hope that the deficiency of red blood cells cover up soon………….so that she can be fine…………….i have given her a medicine…………..if it worked she can be save…………….the next 24 hours are quite dangerous……………..just hope 4 the best

Doc patted his shoulder in form to calm him……………….but he was so depressed

JANNAT comes to him and asked him about junaid and laaj and he told her what the doc said right then

JANNAT was quite worried and sit on the bench praying 4 her friend's life

After an hour

A nurse came out and said that junaid is coming to his senses

Both rushes to his room and found him lay on the bed while his head and hand having some bandages………….

Jannat and rehan reach to his bed and rehan hold his hand and said

Rehan:with a likl smile…………kaisa hai abh?

Junaid:with a weak smile ……….theek hoon…………likin tum donon nay apna kia khal bana rakha hai…………..bhai abhi zinda hoon……………..itni jaldi tum logon ki jaan nahin chutnay walli

Jannat:with teary eyes………………jaan nikal di thi humari…………..akhir itna tang kyoun kartay hoo…………dekh k car drive nahin kar saktay thay

Junaid:liked her way of danting…………..accha baba………..sorry……….he wanna hold his ear but his hand get a lil pain and he said a lil AHH

JANNAT: koi zaroorat nahin haath hilanay kii…………….aram say letay rahoo

Junaid:smile……………waisay rehan……………..yeh abhi bhi nahin badli……school main bhi hum donon pay roab jamati thi or danti thi………………or abh bhi

REHAN:smiled on seeing him smile

JUNAID:aisay kyoun dekh raha hai

REHAN:main soch raha hoon k tu nay humain kitna dara diya yaar…………..agar tujhay kuch ho jata tau who nanha muna CHACHU kissay kehta

JUNAID:confused…………..nanha muna……………..kaun nanha muna………..mera tau koi bhai nahin tau chachu main kiss ka

REHAN:looking at jannat with an angry look………dekha jannat………….mainde issay hamesha apna bhai mana hai or yeh hai k …………….(in his style).koi bhai nahin hai…………..(normal)keh rahay hain

JUNAID:wanna sorry him……………ok yaar naraz kyoun hota hai…………..then realize what he meant………….with joy…………….tau is ka matlab main CHACHA bananay wala hoon

REHAN:lay…………..maine jab kaha tab nahin mana…………..abh pooch raha hai.

Junaid looked at jannat and she was blushing like hell………….

Junaid: congratulations to both of u ……………

They forget all there worries and was happy to have there friend back when right then a nurse came

NURSE:mr rehan……………miss laaj condition is getting serious…………..she is vomiting continuously…………….doctors called u immediately

Rehan in worried left immediately with nurse while junaid was confused what happen to laaj now…………….as well as he remember………………when he dropped her last night………..she was quite good

JUNAID:with a worry look…………………..JANNAT…………….yeh laaj ka kia mamla hai……………..sham tak tau theek thi

JANNAT:who actually…………..JANNAT tells him everything which laaj do 4 him.

JUNAID:shocked and worried…………….laaj…………..laaj nay meray liye….meri zindagi bachanay k liye itna sab kia………………….apni jaan ki koi parwah nahin ki…………I wanna see her now

JANNAT:having tears in her eyes……………u can't do that……………….doc does not allow u to stand…………….or taking ne stress as it would be bad 4 ur head………

JUNAiD:I don't care…………………..jab us nay meri zindagi bachanay k liye apni zindagi ko khatray main daal dia…………………..tau kia main itna bhi nahin kar sakta k us k mushkil waqt main us k saath rahoon

He stand up while jannat was continuously stopping him…………….but he didn't listen neone………………..

On the other hand doc asked rehan to arrange 4 blood instantly

He went out and asked to my blood banks but no one had that…………while doc were also trying in the hospital to have a person who can donate O-ve blood………..and by luck he found one

Jannat called rehan and asked him to came back as they find a donor

The doc asked junaid to go back to his room but he said no…………..as he wanna be there with laaj………………..wanna be with her in every difficulty of her…….wanna see her…………wanna pray 4 her………….

While the blood was donated junaid sit right beside her and continuously praying GOD to give her life……………..

Laaj health was better then before…………………the vomiting stopped and she was in deep sleep and looking like an angel to him

Junaid was continuously looking at her

Background song:~

Koi aisa alam ban k aaie hoo
Koi haqeeqat ho ya koi saai hoo
Bhuli bisri yaadain saath main lai hoo
Chai ho chai ho hum pay chai hoo

Junaid didn't wanna leave her 4 a min…………………..he was also not able to find why he was doing soo…………….he can't name it love…………….as they both knew each other 4 only about a week or soo……………..how can he fall in love in just a week…………he named it friendship or attraction……………….friendship in a way that she helped him 4 the sake of friendship as jannat told him……………and attraction in a way that he was a fan of hers before a friend…………..and to have ur ideal in front of u seems like having a dream…………..and no fan wanna end his dream……….he thinks it might be like that…………but his inner soul was not satisfied by this answer and the answer his inner soul wanna hear………..was not acceptable by him

Guys patah hai boring ahi boring hai
Likin next part accha ho ga…………..i promise……………as k meri ankhain full toos neend main doobi howi hain…………so can't help yaar

Accha na lagay tau maaf karna k

Luv u

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ana
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Posted: 19 years ago


no thanx ayesha dear
luv to know u liked that stupid part

lol
ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
ayesha again...lol......i liked dis part.....it was cute n a bit sad....hope laaj getz well soon...n stop callin ur masterpieces stupid
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Posted: 19 years ago
YAAR ana koi boring-voring part nahi tha.... 😉
kafi cute 😛 or sady 😕 or thoda smiley smiley 😃 part tha...
hahhaahhaha lol.... 😆
do cont soon..... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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solid part dear ab plzzzzzzzzzz jaldise cont karo
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 Gr8 part Ana plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
ana dear bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat bohat hi zyada achcha part tha... mujhe yeh part behad achcha laga..it was totally worth the wait... just toooooooooooooooooooooooo gooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
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the concern junaid has for laaj is sooo sweett.. his confusion as to what he feels for laaj... very cuteeee...... 😳 i hope junaid ko laaj ke liye pyaar ka ehsaas jaldi se ho jaye... 😉
ana dear ab tho mujhe bhi patah chal gaya hain ki laaj ka khayal kaun rakhega... 😛
next part please jaldi se post karne ki koshish karna...me will be waiting... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: group_1223

ayesha again...lol......i liked dis part.....it was cute n a bit sad....hope laaj getz well soon...n stop callin ur masterpieces stupid



hey ayesha
abh tum bhi laaj ko munna bhai ki tarhan get well soon k cards or flowers bhejoo.................she is waiting yaar
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no thanx dear

lol
ana

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