Pyar ki Proper ArangementPt 27/pg53(05/4) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

Yar ana yes it was a shoer part but was a gr8 part 👏 wah kya baat kahi ITBAh ne 😳 & jaldi se cont kerne ki koshish kerna 😊

no thanx R.S

haan jii bus abhi kar rahi hoon

kal ka harjana poora karna hai na

lol

ana

Originally posted by: sun_423

ana dear the part was very sweet & nice.. keep up the good work........ 👏
laaj ka sharmana..hye hye..main mar jawa...tho laaj ke dil mein junaid ke naam se "kuch kuch hotha hain"........ 😳 hmm....laaj ke ghar ke halaat theek nahi..bechari laaj... 😭 but me sure ki agar ek baar junaid laaj ki zindagi mein aajaye tho laaj ki zindagi khushuiyon se bhar jayegi.. 😉
ab please jaldi se continue karna..me will be waiting........... 😊 😛 😃
love you......... 🤗

haila jii

yeh app nay kia kaha

main tau sochti hoon k yeh app loogon ka barpan hai k meri iss phatechar story ko sehtay hoo😆😆

i personally thinks it quite boring..................hain na

luv ya too

lol

ana

thats SALMAN........hm......quite good looking na..........a gr8888 friend of JUNAID.......luv him like his bro.........us k har gham har khushi ka saathi.........JUNAID jab bohut akela hota tha tau aik wohi tha jo us ko ott patang chehray bana k hansaya karta tha...


thats IMAN........unbelieveable........she is just rocking..........she don't believe in love at first sight..........she is also a model........and became friend of LAAJ during a show......P.S.....she was also the friend of ITBAH before........


thats ITBAH.........sweet.....always full of life.....her work is her passion..........she is basically a fashion designer.........LAAJ work with her in a show and they becae good friends.


its MAAHRUKH & TEHMOOR..........LAAJ elder sister........love her lot........as she was 4 year elder to LAAJ......she always take care of her as her mother attention was not on her.........always buy clothes 4 her first and then 4 herself.........LAAJ also luv her lot
she just 5 months back got engaged to TEHMOOR........the love of her life.
TEHMOOR.....he is a sweet guy........and love laaj as his sister.........He is a doctor by profession......and above all........he luv MAHRUKH more than anything..........


thats seema..........LAAJ mother.........after the birth of laaj........her father died in an accident........after that she did't concentrate on her childrens............and fell ill.......

lol
ana

coollllllllllllllllll ana dear........ek dum zabardast............... 👏

part-7

LAAJ enters in her house..........it was totally silent.......not a singal bit of voice..........she feel gr88 disappointment.........although she was use to it..........but she really feels that almost every time

she straightly came to her room and open the tv....and started seeing that..........

when after a while MAHRUKH came to her room and found her sleeping on the coutch while the tv was still on........she close the tv and went towards LAAJ.........she sees that sad look on her face and calmly touched her head......

MAHRUKH:to herself...........janay kab tak yeh hud say bhagay gi.........mama ka badla yeh apnay app say kyoun lay rahi hai..........janay meri guriya ko kab apnay hissay ka pyar millay ga.........janay kaun hoga jo iss ki zindagi k andheray ko door karay ga........janay woh iss waqt kahan hoo ga........aye KHUDA! main apni behen ko khush dekhna chahti hoon........meherbani kar hum pay.........or iss k chehray ko khila howa kanwal bana day

yeh kehtay hi MAHRUKH k ankhoon main ansoo aa jatay hain and she started carring silently.........so that LAAJ couldn't be disturbed........but a tear of her drop on the hand of LAAJ and she woke up and see her sis teary eyes

LAAJ:just got affraid.........appi kia howa........app ro kyoun rahay hoo........

she make her sit on the coutch and wept her tears

MAHRUKH:seeing her ..........tum apnay saath aisa kyoun kar rahi ho guriya

(her nick name was GURIYA)

LAAJ:confused............main........main kia kar rahi hoon..........or app ki ankhoon main yeh ansoo kaisay aaye

MAHRUKH:danttay howay.......dekho..........aik tau galti karti hoo upper say mujh say poochti ho maine kia kia?..............tum apna khayal bilkul nahin rakh rahi...........na waqt pay khati ho......na theek say soti ho........it's a long time since i have seen u smiled

LAAJ:gets emotional and hugged her............oo appi.......u know na k time schedule itna tuff hai k inh cheezon ka waqt nahin milta.........or rahi baat hansi ki..........tau jahan tak main janati hoon app ko bhi maine hanstay howay nahin dekha.........or agar aisa raha tau J(jeeju ko J kehti hai) ko apni saari zindagi aik serious looking girl k saath guzarni hogi.......poor J........(teasing her)

MAHRUKH:smiles.......u don't worry about ur J.......bhai halat tau meri kharab hogi........kyoun k tumharay J ki har waqt ki bak bak tau mujhay sunanai hai na

then the both laughed and hugged each other

LAAJ:aaaaaa........me gonna miss u appi.........

MAHRUKH:smiling and having tears.......me too guriya.........likin don't worry........tumharay J ko maine abhi say keh diya hai k din main 2 housrs i will be spending with u...........and he agreed

LAAJ:haila...........app J ko itni kari saza maat doo.........agay woh app say baat kiye baghair aik min nahin reh saktay.........or baat main tau chehray pay aa jain gain

MAHRUKH:tumharay J ko intezar karnay doo.........har cheez ki excess acchi nahin hoti

then they do some more gossip and then MAHRUKH tuck her in her bed and kissed her forhead and went to her room

then again she started thinking about LAAJ.......when after 2 min her mobile start ringing

as she see the name she gets a smile and pick up the phone

SOMEONE:sweetly........hey jaan

MAHRUKH:angry......what jaan?.........u r 1 min late k.........u know na TEHMOOR....that exactly 12 pay main tumhari awaz sunana chahti hoon ta k meray har din ki starting tum say hoo............and now

TEHMOOR:pleading.....oh sorry jaan............woh i was just busy in chating with mom so..........plz understand na

MAHRUKH:get calm..........its K

TEHMOOR:so was missing me?

MAHRUKH:teasingly..........no........not at all

TEHMOOR:now he get angry......wha?.......main yahan tumhari awaz sunanay k liye kitna bechain rehta hoon........or aik tum ho k jissay meri parwa hi nahin

MAHRUKH starts laughing at that

TEHMOOR:more angry..........now why r u laughing?

MAHRUKH:patah hai.............abhi LAAJ bhi mujhay yehi keh rahi thi k shadi k baad how would u will live without me

TEHMOOR:some how shocked...........why will u leave me haan.........i will never let u go newhere

MAHRUKH:U remember...........maine tum say kaha tha k after marriage..........main roz yahan 2 hours k liye LAAJ k pass rahoon gii

TEHMOOR:and madam..........u remember........maine kaha tha k main bhi saath aaon ga as k she is also my sis .......k

MAHRUKH:ok baba..........get serious.......or waisay bhi main usay akela nahin chorna chahti.....

TEHMOOR:realising that she is serious...nething serious...........howz she?

MAHRUKH:abhi abhi us k room say aa rahi hoon........she really feels to lonely........mama k behaviour say abhi tak woh use to nahin hai..........hum nay tau maan lia.........likin us ka dil nahin manta....

TEHMOOR:don't worry jaan.........LAAJ will understood that...........or aunty bhi theek ho jain gii......u know k abh unh ka ilaj famous doc......tehmoor......tehmoor dar kar raha hai...

she laughs at the last line

MAHRUKH:u can never be serious 4 a long time na????

TEHMOOR:smiling......NEVER.........meray funny honay say agar tumharay chehray pay aik smile aaye tau main funny rehna hi pasandkaroon ga........U know that ur smile is more than money 4 me......a very beautiful gift of GOD

MAHRUKH:touching by her words........ahan......and u know........u r my life

TEHMOOR:and u r my would be wife

they both laugh at that..........they talk for sometime and then the bid good bye to each other and go to sleep to decorate there dreams 4 future.......

lol
guys
itna part theek hai na
abh tau koi sikayat nahin na

lol
ana

👏 veryyy nice...hehehehe....naye characters...wah wah.....yeh kaun kaun se actors hain..lolzzz....yeh bhi bata do..plzssshhh....continue soon...waise J sounds cool..lolzzzz 😉 😉

Originally posted by: sun_423

coollllllllllllllllll ana dear........ek dum zabardast............... 👏

no thanx suri diiiiiiiiii

hope u like the part

lol

ana

Originally posted by: rajeev1

👏 veryyy nice...hehehehe....naye characters...wah wah.....yeh kaun kaun se actors hain..lolzzz....yeh bhi bata do..plzssshhh....continue soon...waise J sounds cool..lolzzzz 😉 😉

jiii

no thanx jii

page 10 pay chracterz ka intro hai jii

app dekh loo jii

J is cool

lol

ana

hey ana..i m really sorry 4 not being able 2 comment on ur story...i jus read abt 4 parts rite nwo...the salman part...ven he got up 2 speak in the restaurant was hillarious.....i cudn't stop laughin....bechare ko kisse na ghaas nahi saali...n i felt really bad 4 poor laaj...bechari....well...but junaid is dair 4 her 2 make her life entertainin n worthful...

👏 u really deseve all this.... 😃